Community > Posts By > Fadedspirit
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Face of an Angel
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The gift of love and heartfelt emotion all wrapped up in a prose of words. Great write.
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Morning of Promise
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Aww, thanks May but ummm don't forget to breathe...
Thanks iam4u Always nice to see ya stop in. Aww, thanks MisKim. Thanks kc, yup and I'm still warnin ya brother, you'll see... Aww, thanks LAMom. You're very welcome MsWizard. Your perceptions are taken to heart. |
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Baby Honey
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Very nice...Finding comfort with the unknown is so hard to do sometimes.
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Fear
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Very touching and very nice.
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Who are you?? Continued
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I am the duck that quacks in the night....Oh dear, I seem to have read the wrong lines....lol
Everything that makes the heart and soul of the person we care about unique is the fact that YOU ARE... Nice write (((LAMom))). |
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Battered Paladin
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Very true Mystique. Hope always exists.
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Forever Together
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Thanks kc.
Hee hee Thanks Mystique. Hey there frank thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment. |
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Topic:
Morning of Promise
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Morning of Promise
Morning sun breaks low As gold linings trace the clouds The purple skies unfold While a sea of blue wades out. Birdsong heralds daybreak A cool breeze stirs from it's sleep The flowers open tenderly Bathed in the dew drops sheen. The fragile creaking of a rocker Ushers to the symphony While the softest whispers sing From your loving lips to me. Our hands are held in promise Although our eyes seem blurred We sit and share the beauty Beholden to this earth. This heart we share in earnest Manifest us to these joys And witness to our spirit What true feelings we employ. Fadedspirit 10/31/2008 |
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Ember
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Kc, you're gonna have em fallin for ya with write like this my friend. Beautiful and endearing.
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Forever Together
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Awww, thanks MisWizard and thanks for visiting.
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Bout time ya made it.....lol. Check out the forums n have fun.
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Forever Together
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Thanks Soleninja.
Thanks Joaverage. Thanks AngelLight. |
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Forever Together
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Forever Together
Moonlight casts her glow And settles in her gaze upon a burned out house Amid the fog and haze. A fragrant scent of perfume Seeps into the air And then appears a spectre That waits for something there. A candle's light grows slowly And spies a lady there Without a shadow cast Nor does she seem aware. A cold, stiff breeze is felt As a wisp of smoke breaks in The lady runs to greet A man who's tall and thin. A soft and steady sound Is brought from echoes past Soft music's plainly heard From history now set fast. She kisses him so softly And pulls him close to her Thankful he's arrived As he's trapped in her allure. He greets with words unspoken As she takes his hat and coat And hangs them by the mantle To where she seems to float. He picks her up in arms And rushes up the stair Then lays her down so gently As if she's light as air. Their kisses touch more deeply A passions take their pace Two lovers out of time Caught in forever's place. It happens in an instant What horror has been brought, Hot flames now have engulfed them And now in ashes they will rot. Two figures spied translucent Almost shining in the dark Making love here last forever As they together leave their mark. Fadedspirit 10/31/2008 Happy Halloween!!!! Be sure to feed the beasties and ghosties well tonight....hee hee |
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Battered Paladin
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Thanks ArtGurl.
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ok, so I'm ranting here, and this is a huge pet peeve of mine.
You gave an idea and you clarified upon that idea. We get the point and if anyone wishes to take you up on your offer, they will seek you. It should end right there, no matter what anyone else may have to say. This makes me wonder what part of FREE FORUM don't some "people" understand and why do these "people" try to pound or sell their money scheming ideas into people who could care less about what scams you're trying to run. I for one could care less about publishing anything I write and I DO take offense to others cramming stuff like this down others throats. Seriously, if someone wanted to have their work published, most would inquire about it discreetly and not cause such a big scene and hassle as this has caused. Additionally, mud slinging and being pushy has never gotten anything worthwhile done. All it does is create chaos and ill will toward both sides. You can take these words whichever way you wish, it really doesn't matter to me. Most of us come here to have fun and share our talents amongst one another. That's what these forums were created for.....ENJOYMENT and maybe even some enlightenment.....Not chaos. We put up with too much crap in everyday life without having to come here and deal with more of the same. |
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Topic:
Battered Paladin
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Hmm...Someone hurry up and get me a thread and needle so I can put my friend back together.
Maybe ya need to talk? I'm always near. Thanks DKW. |
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Topic:
Story of the Cursed
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Thanks DKW.
Sometimes we may not be able to tell if we are one or the other, for the decision there sometimes lies in the heart of the beholder. |
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Topic:
Her Veil
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An excellent write my friend. Sometimes I wish that veil hadn't been removed, but we must all learn to walk.
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Topic:
A Friend in Shadow
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Thanks pkd....creativity has it's moments I believe. It also helps to be inspired as well.
Eek! yer both gangin up on me! lol That's ok though, it's kinda fun. Thanks kc. |
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Topic:
A Friend in Shadow
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A Friend in Shadow
Often I sit in the wake of a shadow And ponder the dreams of days gone by. My wanderings stray to the land of life, Where perception's illusions Lure most to it's traps. What I see to most are dark... With few words do I speak... Most find me hesitant Or skiddish at best. In shadows I find solitude And in the night my spirit Finds it's release. Where most see bodies Of mere flesh and bone, I see what hearts beat And intentions lurk underneath. Some say I am mystic Or a cleric of sorts, They label the unknown And what some fail to understand. Must I be some monster That lurks in the dark? All things from the shadows Aren't all evil in heart. Though words may cut deep And some actions offend, Remember those shadows I find my peace in. My heart is wide open For whom I call friend. Like chuckie once said, "I'm your friend to the end" Fadedspirit 10/30/2008 |
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