Topic: Forever Together
Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 10/31/08 01:37 PM
Forever Together

Moonlight casts her glow
And settles in her gaze
upon a burned out house
Amid the fog and haze.

A fragrant scent of perfume
Seeps into the air
And then appears a spectre
That waits for something there.

A candle's light grows slowly
And spies a lady there
Without a shadow cast
Nor does she seem aware.

A cold, stiff breeze is felt
As a wisp of smoke breaks in
The lady runs to greet
A man who's tall and thin.

A soft and steady sound
Is brought from echoes past
Soft music's plainly heard
From history now set fast.

She kisses him so softly
And pulls him close to her
Thankful he's arrived
As he's trapped in her allure.

He greets with words unspoken
As she takes his hat and coat
And hangs them by the mantle
To where she seems to float.

He picks her up in arms
And rushes up the stair
Then lays her down so gently
As if she's light as air.

Their kisses touch more deeply
A passions take their pace
Two lovers out of time
Caught in forever's place.

It happens in an instant
What horror has been brought,
Hot flames now have engulfed them
And now in ashes they will rot.

Two figures spied translucent
Almost shining in the dark
Making love here last forever
As they together leave their mark.

Fadedspirit 10/31/2008

Happy Halloween!!!! Be sure to feed the beasties and ghosties well tonight....hee hee

Soleninja's photo
Fri 10/31/08 03:05 PM
Awesome work!

Joaverage's photo
Fri 10/31/08 03:09 PM
Awesome writing!!drinker

AngelLight's photo
Fri 10/31/08 05:14 PM
Fun write! Happy Halloween Faded pitchfork

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 10/31/08 07:06 PM
Thanks Soleninja. drinker

Thanks Joaverage. drinker

Thanks AngelLight. flowerforyou

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Fri 10/31/08 08:06 PM
'Two figures spied translucent
Almost shining in the dark
Making love here last forever
As they together leave their mark.'

I love this stanza. Very graceful, very beautiful :heart:

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 10/31/08 11:10 PM
Awww, thanks MisWizard and thanks for visiting. happy flowers

kc0003's photo
Fri 10/31/08 11:26 PM
NICELY done

some great lines here...

smokin

Mystique42's photo
Sat 11/01/08 07:08 AM
:wink: Great write!

frankfk's photo
Sat 11/01/08 08:38 AM
profoundflowerforyou

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Sat 11/01/08 09:08 AM

Awww, thanks MisWizard and thanks for visiting. happy flowers


:heart:

Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 11/01/08 07:00 PM
Thanks kc. :smile: drinker

:wink: Hee hee Thanks Mystique. flowerforyou

Hey there frank thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment. :thumbsup: :smile: