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Forever Together
Moonlight casts her glow And settles in her gaze upon a burned out house Amid the fog and haze. A fragrant scent of perfume Seeps into the air And then appears a spectre That waits for something there. A candle's light grows slowly And spies a lady there Without a shadow cast Nor does she seem aware. A cold, stiff breeze is felt As a wisp of smoke breaks in The lady runs to greet A man who's tall and thin. A soft and steady sound Is brought from echoes past Soft music's plainly heard From history now set fast. She kisses him so softly And pulls him close to her Thankful he's arrived As he's trapped in her allure. He greets with words unspoken As she takes his hat and coat And hangs them by the mantle To where she seems to float. He picks her up in arms And rushes up the stair Then lays her down so gently As if she's light as air. Their kisses touch more deeply A passions take their pace Two lovers out of time Caught in forever's place. It happens in an instant What horror has been brought, Hot flames now have engulfed them And now in ashes they will rot. Two figures spied translucent Almost shining in the dark Making love here last forever As they together leave their mark. Fadedspirit 10/31/2008 Happy Halloween!!!! Be sure to feed the beasties and ghosties well tonight....hee hee |
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Awesome work!
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Awesome writing!!
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Fun write! Happy Halloween Faded
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Thanks Soleninja.
Thanks Joaverage. Thanks AngelLight. |
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'Two figures spied translucent
Almost shining in the dark Making love here last forever As they together leave their mark.' I love this stanza. Very graceful, very beautiful |
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Awww, thanks MisWizard and thanks for visiting.
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NICELY done
some great lines here... |
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Great write!
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profound
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Awww, thanks MisWizard and thanks for visiting. |
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Thanks kc.
Hee hee Thanks Mystique. Hey there frank thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment. |
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