Aww, thanks LAMom, good to see you back.

Aww, thanks AngelLight. (offers a hanky for your tears)

Hee hee thanks Mystique. Great add I may also say. mmmm banana cream pie!
Now that's a start of a good friendship...lol
oh yeah, uhh heres a coconut cream pie....geesh some people are just messy eaters...lol

Thanks DKW.

Aww, thanks ArtGurl. *offers you a hanky to dry those tears*

Thanks kc and thanks for reading.

Another excellent write my friend and very true.

No problem tombraider. There's a soul behind that pen ya just can't hide.

Aww, don't cry May. *offers my hanky* Thanks for reading.

Very nice. I like the imagery set by emotion.

nice write tombraider.

A Curse Bestowed

The sunshine,
How wondrous it was
And the kiss from a lover,
Unbound by love.
Her passion virily flowed
And wraped him within
The sweetest of tones.
Her loving gaze,
Set his heart to hers.
Together they'd wander
This place called forever.


Darkness came and storms were small,
He thought that love
Would last them all.
The shadows spoke of lies untold,
They tore upon his very soul.
She masked as death,
Came creeping low
And took what love
She hath bestowed.


He cursed himself
As days went by,
Sunlight fled,
He lived by night.


His words were heard
As fear ensued,
The shadows quaked
As night was moved,


"Look upon my heart, nevermore!"
"I've locked and chained it
And sealed it's door."
"This scarred old flesh be cursed this day,
Forever cursed and locked away."


A lingered stare, he thought to feel
And hastened to the shadows keep.
A sigh he heard that fade away
His heart had burned to see this day.
He knew so well what love may show
But knew the hurt that sorrow sows.

To his curse,
So bound and true
Shattered by
A love imbued.

Fadedspirit 10/13/2008

very nice.

Your heart speaks volumes my friend. Excellent write.

Very romantic and heartfelt.

Hauntingly reminiscent of a true story. Excellent write.

Excellent write. A beautiful picture only personified in the beauty of a true heart.


In subtile moonlight
He bows his head,
Attempting not
To feel what's said.
He feels a heart
So tried and true
As tears wash down
These walls he knew.
Feeling deep
Those words unsaid,
Brings forth emotions
He's long thought dead.
This warmth of feeling
He can't deny,
With open arms,
He draws her nigh.

Beautiful and full of sweet thought.

Thanks Shauna.

Thanks again shauna, It's nice to see ya again.

Thanks shauna.

Aww, thanks shauna.