Community > Posts By > Fadedspirit
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Avoidance
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Wow, dang, that one was powerful and truthful and insightful all at the same time. I could add heart wrenching as well. The truth of the past hurts sometimes.
Hiding in shadows My comfort within, My silence begotten In a world I thought dim. Afraid to face The fears that I'd wrought, My tears held the anger That grew with each drop. Righteously angry, Self absorbed I'd not thought. Of those I left spinning Encircling the drain, In pain I felt pleasure Yet nothing was gained. Avoiding those issues, Yes, slowly I drowned, Content in my whiles For all let me down. Though drowned in my madness All these years I had slaved, Some stranger lent mercy, And my game I delayed. I spoke from my heart And truth shattered my lies, Spinning and tumbling, I thought I would die. Once I awoke, I thought it a dream, But reformed from that beast Is this heart you now see. Fadedspirit 10/15/2008 |
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Topic:
Conceived In Moonlight
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Thanks Mystique.
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She softly said goodbye
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A heartfelt write touched by wisdom. Great write.
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Topic:
I forgive you ...
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I really liked this one. To have faith in one's self and believe it makes all the difference.
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Topic:
The World That I Live
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Thanks Up2Us.
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Topic:
Conceived In Moonlight
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Conceived In Moonlight
Within the gaze Of silver moonlight Two shadows draw near, Parting the night. Two hands form a bond Upon the shadow below, Binding two forms In steps as they flow. Whispers so gentle Like breath to an ear, A sigh heard so breathless, A moment is near. The shadows lay witness To a kiss made so soft As hearts melt like a passion, Warmed by a thought. A trickle of tear Seals a love they both know With enamored, soft gaze Upon each to their soul. A promise kept silent Still bound by it's grace, Holds these two lovers In loving embrace. Never a moment They waste of their time, Their passions shall peak Bathed in moonlight. Fadedspirit 10/15/2008 |
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Topic:
The World That I Live
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The World That I Live
I've traveled this road Sometimes I think too long And looking back, Almost seems Like an old country song. The memories and emotions That pave this great road, Built by the tears And sweat from my soul. My friendships built bridges O'er the pitfalls I made As past loves create The flowers that stayed. Some dreams paint the mountains That loom in my midst, The sorrows I've felt Make the clouds and the mist. Though my journey's not over There's a world to be made I see the horizon In hopes that won't fade. There's no road here Not traveled And no sins unatoned, Though I've rambled about Through some hardships of stone. Well one thing is certain I've learned on this trip, We all paint a world With a life that we give. Fadedspirit 10/15/2008 |
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Topic:
Blind Humanity
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Thanks kc, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks Dragoness and thanks for dropping by and reading. |
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Topic:
A Curse Bestowed
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Aww, thanks LAMom. ( offers a hanky for your tears)....uhoh me thinks I'm in trouble now.....hee hee
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Topic:
Hats
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Nice write, I liked this one.
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Topic:
Wondering slumber
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Sometimes those wondering slumbers make life much more bearable. Nice write sugarjen.
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Topic:
The Price of a Smile
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Thanks for sharing Up2Us. True words to think by.
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Topic:
love's tragedy
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Excellent write tombraider. The twists and turns caught up in the silver screen of life.
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Topic:
steel burns
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Great write jimz.
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That's a pretty good collection hiding on your desktop d4tc.
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Topic:
Love's Brilliance
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Very beautiful write.
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Topic:
Unnnnn-titled
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Very nice. You're so good at being bad even when it starts to get cold.
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Both were very nicely written. I feel the senses of freedom and promise in both.
Woohoo, two for the price of one....hee hee I'll dance with ya if ya don't tell anyone I keep steppin on your feet. |
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Welcome back Frank! Nice to see you again.
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Topic:
Blind Humanity
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Brilliance? I knew I left a light on somewhere. lol. Thanks LAMom.
Aww, thanks Mystique. hmm...where two agree means i'm in trouble....lol |
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