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Edited by
kc0003
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Thu 10/30/08 08:08 PM
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he’s moving
away from his castle free to go on with his life shuts the door on his children who pull on his tassels then sped away from his wife next week at his daughters recital friends and neighbors will all be alarmed but, he’ll act like he’s been recycled by the younger smile on his arm and forgiveness is a bast*rd karma a b*tch of her own one you control the other you grow in the fields of the life that you farm kate she is a beauty with the finest porcelain skin if you look closely you’ll see the cracks that won’t bleed but, wonder if they’ll ever mend tomorrow is the recital in her first public light she’ll keep her head high even when they walk by and to show them she’s doing alright, she’ll smile as if she’s never been broken laugh like a stranger to pain keep any and all things hidden in the umbrella she carries for rain forgiveness is her master karma an unseen foe one she will learn on the others return as time moves her along it’s not fair her new found position but, you’ll never catch her complain he gets to play weekend sunshine while she gets to deal with the rain… still, she smiles as if she’s never been broken and laughs like a stranger to pain kc08 |
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That was great!!
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That was great!! thank you sk |
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thank you too...nice of you to stop in |
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great story- I started envisioning a movie scene
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she
smiles as if she’s never been broken and laughs like a stranger to pain kevin I thought only a women knew this deepness,,,Again you have enlighten'd me,, Your canvas fills my sense's and make's my mind ponder,, You are a beautiful soul you make vision's come alive before our eyes,, Yes as I said before... (Its nice being right once in awhile) Gotta run Grey's on Kiss's |
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great story- I started envisioning a movie scene thank you (p) yes one with a bad ending...must be an independent film... |
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she smiles as if she’s never been broken and laughs like a stranger to pain kevin I thought only a women knew this deepness,,,Again you have enlighten'd me,, Your canvas fills my sense's and make's my mind ponder,, You are a beautiful soul you make vision's come alive before our eyes,, Yes as I said before... (Its nice being right once in awhile) Gotta run Grey's on Kiss's yes, it is a heavy burden i'm sure thank you for being you |
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'kate
she is a beauty with the finest porcelain skin if you look closely you’ll see the cracks that won’t bleed but, wonder if they’ll ever mend' Brilliant. |
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An excellent write my friend. Sometimes I wish that veil hadn't been removed, but we must all learn to walk.
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Wow!! Did I get to live this...
He got to play weekend sunshine and I got all the rain. Toooo close to home. Great write kev S. |
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Edited by
ArtGurl
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Fri 10/31/08 09:41 AM
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a life
that she once belonged to is gone and never the same she’ll smile only by knowing that she can outlive the pain inside a shell where a woman once stood wondering how she got to this place but a woman of hope and belief in the good soften the sting of the rain so she'll smile as if she’s never been broken and laugh like a stranger to pain not because she believes it at first she just wants to feel normal again ... Awesome write Kev...hope you don't mind me jumping off your springboard! ...although I kinda feel like someone has been rummaging around in my old dusty box of secrets ... |
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Awesome write Kev
Kuddos Artgirl for the adder good one |
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'kate she is a beauty with the finest porcelain skin if you look closely you’ll see the cracks that won’t bleed but, wonder if they’ll ever mend' Brilliant. glad you found something in it...though the label may be too much |
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An excellent write my friend. Sometimes I wish that veil hadn't been removed, but we must all learn to walk. thank you my friend... |
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Wow!! Did I get to live this... He got to play weekend sunshine and I got all the rain. Toooo close to home. Great write kev S. thank you stef |
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a life that she once belonged to is gone and never the same she’ll smile only by knowing that she can outlive the pain inside a shell where a woman once stood wondering how she got to this place but a woman of hope and belief in the good soften the sting of the rain so she'll smile as if she’s never been broken and laugh like a stranger to pain not because she believes it at first she just wants to feel normal again ... Awesome write Kev...hope you don't mind me jumping off your springboard! ...although I kinda feel like someone has been rummaging around in my old dusty box of secrets ... thank you (s) and no i don't mind at all that was beautiful... sorry if i disturbed the dust... |
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Awesome write Kev Kuddos Artgirl for the adder good one thank you...as always (k)it is nice to see you... |
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always a pleasure to read your poetry
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