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Topic: Her Veil
kc0003's photo
Thu 10/30/08 08:01 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Thu 10/30/08 08:08 PM
he’s moving
away
from his castle
free to go on
with his
life

shuts the door
on his children
who pull
on his tassels
then
sped away
from his
wife

next week
at his daughters
recital
friends and
neighbors
will all
be alarmed
but,
he’ll act
like he’s been
recycled
by the younger
smile
on his arm

and forgiveness
is a bast*rd
karma
a b*tch
of her own
one you
control
the other
you grow
in the fields
of the life
that you
farm

kate
she is a
beauty
with the finest
porcelain skin
if you look closely
you’ll see
the cracks
that won’t bleed
but, wonder
if they’ll
ever
mend

tomorrow
is the recital
in her first
public light
she’ll keep
her head
high
even
when they
walk by
and to show them
she’s doing
alright,

she’ll smile
as if
she’s never been
broken
laugh
like a stranger
to pain
keep any
and all things
hidden
in the
umbrella
she carries
for rain

forgiveness is
her master
karma an
unseen
foe
one she
will learn
on the others
return
as time
moves her
along

it’s not fair
her new found
position
but,
you’ll never
catch her
complain
he gets
to play
weekend
sunshine
while she
gets to
deal with
the rain…

still, she
smiles
as if
she’s never
been
broken
and laughs
like
a stranger
to pain


kc08

no photo
Thu 10/30/08 08:07 PM
That was great!! flowers

beauty314's photo
Thu 10/30/08 08:28 PM
flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Thu 10/30/08 09:16 PM

That was great!! flowers



thank you sk

flowers

kc0003's photo
Thu 10/30/08 09:31 PM

flowerforyou



thank you too...nice of you to stop in

flowerforyou flowerforyou


no photo
Thu 10/30/08 09:35 PM
great story- I started envisioning a movie scene:smile: flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 10/30/08 09:40 PM
she
smiles
as if
she’s never
been
broken
and laughs
like
a stranger
to pain


:heart: kevin :heart:
I thought only a women knew this deepness,,,Again you have enlighten'd me,, Your canvas fills my sense's and make's my mind ponder,, You are a beautiful soul you make vision's come alive before our eyes,, Yes as I said before... (Its nice being right once in awhile) Gotta run Grey's on

Kiss's :heart:

kc0003's photo
Thu 10/30/08 09:56 PM

great story- I started envisioning a movie scene:smile: flowerforyou



thank you (p) yes one with a bad ending...must be an independent film...

flowerforyou flowerforyou


kc0003's photo
Thu 10/30/08 10:21 PM

she
smiles
as if
she’s never
been
broken
and laughs
like
a stranger
to pain


:heart: kevin :heart:
I thought only a women knew this deepness,,,Again you have enlighten'd me,, Your canvas fills my sense's and make's my mind ponder,, You are a beautiful soul you make vision's come alive before our eyes,, Yes as I said before... (Its nice being right once in awhile) Gotta run Grey's on

Kiss's :heart:



yes, it is a heavy burden i'm sure laugh

thank you for being you :heart:

no photo
Thu 10/30/08 10:54 PM
'kate
she is a
beauty
with the finest
porcelain skin
if you look closely
you’ll see
the cracks
that won’t bleed
but, wonder
if they’ll
ever
mend'

Brilliant.:heart:

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 10/30/08 11:21 PM
An excellent write my friend. Sometimes I wish that veil hadn't been removed, but we must all learn to walk. drinker

no photo
Fri 10/31/08 08:00 AM
Wow!! Did I get to live this...

He got to play weekend sunshine and I got all the rain.

Toooo close to home. Great write kev

S.

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 10/31/08 09:29 AM
Edited by ArtGurl on Fri 10/31/08 09:41 AM
a life
that
she
once
belonged to
is gone
and
never
the same

she’ll
smile
only
by
knowing
that
she can
outlive
the pain

inside
a shell
where
a woman
once
stood
wondering
how
she
got
to this
place

but
a woman
of
hope
and
belief
in the
good
soften
the
sting
of the
rain

so she'll
smile
as if
she’s never
been
broken
and laugh
like
a stranger
to pain

not
because
she
believes
it
at first
she
just
wants
to feel
normal
again ...


Awesome write Kev...hope you don't mind me jumping off your springboard! flowerforyou

...although I kinda feel like someone has been rummaging around in my old dusty box of secrets ... scared

flowers







TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 10/31/08 09:48 AM
Awesome write Kevbigsmile

Kuddos Artgirl for the adder good one:thumbsup:

kc0003's photo
Fri 10/31/08 12:38 PM

'kate
she is a
beauty
with the finest
porcelain skin
if you look closely
you’ll see
the cracks
that won’t bleed
but, wonder
if they’ll
ever
mend'

Brilliant.:heart:





glad you found something in it...though the label may be too much

:heart:

kc0003's photo
Fri 10/31/08 12:38 PM

An excellent write my friend. Sometimes I wish that veil hadn't been removed, but we must all learn to walk. drinker



thank you my friend...drinker

kc0003's photo
Fri 10/31/08 12:39 PM

Wow!! Did I get to live this...

He got to play weekend sunshine and I got all the rain.

Toooo close to home. Great write kev

S.



thank you stef

:heart:

kc0003's photo
Fri 10/31/08 12:50 PM

a life
that
she
once
belonged to
is gone
and
never
the same

she’ll
smile
only
by
knowing
that
she can
outlive
the pain

inside
a shell
where
a woman
once
stood
wondering
how
she
got
to this
place

but
a woman
of
hope
and
belief
in the
good
soften
the
sting
of the
rain

so she'll
smile
as if
she’s never
been
broken
and laugh
like
a stranger
to pain

not
because
she
believes
it
at first
she
just
wants
to feel
normal
again ...


Awesome write Kev...hope you don't mind me jumping off your springboard! flowerforyou

...although I kinda feel like someone has been rummaging around in my old dusty box of secrets ... scared

flowers









thank you (s)
and no i don't mind at all that was beautiful...

sorry if i disturbed the dust...

flowers flowers flowers

kc0003's photo
Fri 10/31/08 01:00 PM

Awesome write Kevbigsmile

Kuddos Artgirl for the adder good one:thumbsup:



thank you...as always (k)it is nice to see you...

flowers

jimz's photo
Sat 11/01/08 11:21 AM
always a pleasure to read your poetry

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