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Hiding in the shadows
No single word at all Waiting, leaving a string Afraid if you speak it all will fall Reserved in your anger A ploy or a little game To keep your victims hanging In your vicious little drain Around, around they spin Wondering where did you go You want them to feel your misery Disappearing now they should know Righteous and so self absorbed You feel they let you down It's you my friend who suffer most Avoiding issues you slowly drown Healthy communication Is the key to your true victory For years you choose to play this game How sad it is for me to see SDF Oct 15, 2008 |
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incrediable write,..and what timing,. as I`m goin through same
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((Miskim)) enjoy today!
((May)) sorry you have experienced this too. |
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unfortunately, what's not said should speak volumes to us
wonderful write |
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Nice job Mysti
"It's you my friend who suffer most Avoiding issues you slowly drown" .....Intense, and so frequently true |
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Very, very well done. Too many experience like Pete and Repete sittin' on that fence. For a lucky few, the view will indeed change as they learn which side of the fence is growth and which side is the brick wall of their own construction.
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Nicely said.
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Nice
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Beautifully executed ! There is strength in your words and a prayer in your heart, you will be triumphant over this adversary. A fantastic write
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Wow, dang, that one was powerful and truthful and insightful all at the same time. I could add heart wrenching as well. The truth of the past hurts sometimes.
Hiding in shadows My comfort within, My silence begotten In a world I thought dim. Afraid to face The fears that I'd wrought, My tears held the anger That grew with each drop. Righteously angry, Self absorbed I'd not thought. Of those I left spinning Encircling the drain, In pain I felt pleasure Yet nothing was gained. Avoiding those issues, Yes, slowly I drowned, Content in my whiles For all let me down. Though drowned in my madness All these years I had slaved, Some stranger lent mercy, And my game I delayed. I spoke from my heart And truth shattered my lies, Spinning and tumbling, I thought I would die. Once I awoke, I thought it a dream, But reformed from that beast Is this heart you now see. Fadedspirit 10/15/2008 |
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Wow, dang, that one was powerful and truthful and insightful all at the same time. I could add heart wrenching as well. The truth of the past hurts sometimes. Hiding in shadows My comfort within, My silence begotten In a world I thought dim. Afraid to face The fears that I'd wrought, My tears held the anger That grew with each drop. Righteously angry, Self absorbed I'd not thought. Of those I left spinning Encircling the drain, In pain I felt pleasure Yet nothing was gained. Avoiding those issues, Yes, slowly I drowned, Content in my whiles For all let me down. Though drowned in my madness All these years I had slaved, Some stranger lent mercy, And my game I delayed. I spoke from my heart And truth shattered my lies, Spinning and tumbling, I thought I would die. Once I awoke, I thought it a dream, But reformed from that beast Is this heart you now see. Fadedspirit 10/15/2008 HOW do you guys do that,..??? come back with another,..& another,..lol |
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Faded.. bravo! Great come back! Loved it.
May... it's just a gift! Just write what you know. Bonny... a pleasure to see ya! Thank you! Dragoness... Hello there! d4... thanks Different... so true! angel....Nice to see ya and thanks for reading! pkd... yes it should but sometimes we just keep hitting our head on a brick wall. |
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