Thanks Mystique and nice write as well.

Thanks PKD. That's true, but there are some that would rather take the time to understand the difference.

Aww, thanks shauna.

Thanks DKW. You call it rambling, I call it thinking out loud. hee hee

Woohoo she's back. My #1 fan is back....hee hee
Thanks for visiting shauna. I kinda missed ya.

Awww, thanks LAMom.

Silent Wrongs

Beneath the pale and silver
Of the night's full moon,
Two shadows walk so silent,
Within a cast of darkened noon.

Tears fall from their eyes,
For one feels they're not to be.
One is deeply saddened
For crushed and futile are his dreams.

One thought his love was strong,
So strong it couldn't break,
Counting on forever
To keep his love in place.

One thought she was in love
To the most perfect of all men,
Counting on her beauty
To keep him lured in.

They both had found a passion
But never kept it fed,
Tainted by the world,
Their love forgot to spread.

They thought they shared a heart
But learned it was a lie,
They only shared a passion
That lived until it died.

Now both are deeply sorry
For what they thought was love
And filled their hearts with saddness
Which will never be enough.

Whatever path they take
There's lessons to be learned,
Trust is oft a virtue
With a love that may be earned.

Fadedspirit 10/5/2008

You shall find what your looking for if your heart is in the right place.

To quote Jiminy Cricket " When your heart is in your dream, no request is too extreme..."

Nice write too.

Thanks ArtGurl and if I don't get well soon, I'll be going nuts.....lol.

Awww, thanks May, you're a sweetheart.

Thanks ArtGurl.

Thanks MisKim.

You Within Me

I am baptized in the pool
Of your beauty's radiant grace,
And lifted by your soul,
Subdued by your loving gaze.

The very heart you give
Has given to me life,
Upon your wings of mercy,
I've been taken to new heights.

Belittled in your presence,
A goddess you may seem,
Nothing less than you
Could shake this heart of me.

To touch your hand so deftly
Could burn me to an ash,
To hear your whispered words
Could cure me in a flash.

Though I'm just a shadow
Of what I see in you,
My darling you're immortal,
And I shall never do.

Fadedspirit 10/5/2008

Very nice write MisKim. If this one ain't a heart warmer, I don't know what is.

Thanks Norwester and welcome to our little corner of the poetry world.

There ya go again mom....makin me smile.

Excellent write.

lol...Thanks iam4u. Like the truest words from the heart of a friend.

Awww, thanks MisKim.

Thanks tanyaann. All's well that ends well I guess...

Very nice iam4u.

I Thought

I thought you were a friend,
Someone special to my heart.
I thought that always you
Would be there from the start.

Yes, I know we've had our troubles,
Even shed some tears,
But nothing ever hurt me worse
Than the fact that you're not here.

You could tell me that you hate me
You could tell me that you lied
You could even hit and bruise me
But you're not here and now I wonder why.

Yes, I know your life is busy
And your phone is on the blink
You can't come and see me
Cause nowdays gas ain't cheap.

You know, I thought to shed a tear
For I often miss you so,
But now I understand
That you want me just to go.

Maybe I'm reading way too much
But these facts I can't deny,
Live your life without me
And for me don't ever cry.

Fadedspirit 10/3/2008

LOL LAMom....I slept my day away today and nobody once bothered me.

Thanks to my friends here in mingle world I'm feeling better.

Thank you very much AngelLight.

Thanks Havaman and your welcome.

Thanks MsWizard.

Thanks iam4u.

Excellent write. I liked the mood and flow very much.

Aww, thanks Mystique and DKW.