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Mon 11/17/08 12:38 PM
Yup, I would agree with the new woman is checking his text messeges, and I bet you might get a nasty text if you keep on texting. This happened to me as well, recently. I got a text back saying, I don't know who you are, my name is xxx, quit texting me. grumble

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Mon 11/17/08 12:24 PM

Bump:smile:

Bump back, giggleslaugh

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Mon 11/17/08 12:17 PM


Hello all, is anyone up for a challenge? I know I am, I am posting this for all the poets who need a challenge every now and than. I thought I would start us out easy today, with a phrase challenge, the rules are as follows: you must use the phrase either in your title or the actual poem. The poem can be any length or style.

The Phrase is: rooms of the world

I will post my answer to this challenge shortly. Have fun everyone. Oh and only real poets should comment, no slamming or flaming rude comments allowed here on this challenge please. Thank you, Nica Bane, aka inkraven86flowerforyou happy waving think


Perhaps just remove 'real poets' from the txt and leave 'no slamming or flaming comments, thank you kindly' ???

Thank you very much PDA, I will do that, but it would seem I will have to post an entire new challenge to do so, I cannot edit my original post, there is no edit in it, smiles, perhaps when I return with a challenge, it will be more fun, may your days be blessed all who came here, smiles v

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Mon 11/17/08 12:40 AM




Hello all, is anyone up for a challenge? I know I am, I am posting this for all the poets who need a challenge every now and than. I thought I would start us out easy today, with a phrase challenge, the rules are as follows: you must use the phrase either in your title or the actual poem. The poem can be any length or style.

The Phrase is: rooms of the world

I will post my answer to this challenge shortly. Have fun everyone. Oh and only real poets should comment, no slamming or flaming rude comments allowed here on this challenge please. Thank you, Nica Bane, aka inkraven86flowerforyou happy waving think


Only "real poets?"
Why dont you read the Whole sentence. dont make this a bad thing


Whatever makes you think that question was a "bad thing?" It was simply a question. Dont read more into it than it was. Life is too short to be writing someone else's script.

<<---moving on now

When I said real poets, I did not mean it like it sounded, what I meant was, I did not want flaming or negative posts, like cruel referances to other peoples works, we are all poets in one way or another, we are all creative in one or another, I meant to invite all, I suppose I should rephrase it than, hmmm, suggestions would be good, perhaps you can help me, will you please help me reword it? happy flowerforyou

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Mon 11/17/08 12:37 AM

I challenge the challenge

pushing back through the rooms of the world i reshape the shards

contract the expanse of these vaunted expectations

and reside between the spaces of the rooms

That place where pendulum stoppes and wind has no voice, yet all must heed.

Even i must stop............mid-sentence making no reverie,no breath within breath.

To breathe, to cause ripples on still water, would give me away.

Not this time!


I too have faced the gates of Hell, then faced away again.

Emptied the stone from my shoe only to have them refill 10 fold.

And Alice was a friend of mine, but dark hole she has chosen this time, has swallowed her for the last.

I no longer hear her voice calling, in this place between the rooms of the world.






Wow! That is awesome! Waaaaay Awesome! Thank you for doing the challenge. smiles vflowerforyou flowerforyou happy waving

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Mon 11/17/08 12:33 AM
Hysteria-Def Lepard

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Mon 11/17/08 12:16 AM
Cute poem, I liked it, smilesflowerforyou happy

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Sun 11/16/08 11:25 PM
Beauty and the Beast

The Day is fraught with tangible realities,
But who wants to live in realities tangible
When the night holds more promise
And hides our true intentions like dark animals
Who cling to the underground vision,
Of who and what we really wanted to be.

If only for a moment
If only we could let go of our starch white coat of day
And never conform by forming ourselves again and again
In the midst of nights image,
If you could let yourself fall
Like stars white hot with inspirations
On the bed
On the floor
On the streets of loss
On the dream of Eros or Psyche
Or even Loki
What would your mask look like?
Would it still cling to the last ray of innocence you treasure?
Or would it pale itself to the moon
And stretch like the shadow
As the mystery of your soul does
Like licking the beast
Who longs to know you?
Like you know taste,
Touch,
Feel,
The aching hour
Where the will kneels
To the last drop of summers succulent essence,
Will you dance again
Dream again,
Form again,
Like the mercury on the inside of your heart,
The tongue
That gauges
Where your true emersion
Burned into the last bridges of your being.?

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Sun 11/16/08 10:57 PM
As a vampire and teen book fanatic, I look forward to the movie. It looks fun, I agree that it looks like a made for tv kind of thing though, something about the color of it, all gray and blue and stuff. However, I think it will be cool. Personally I am waiting for the next Harry Potter movie and aslo I am looking forward to the coming out of Wall-e, giggleshappy

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Sun 11/16/08 07:34 AM
ANyone wanna build something, got the plans right here?happy

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Sun 11/16/08 07:32 AM

Room of my world
my padded cell
of hell
trapped without a key
or
a chance of them setting me free
to see the world
that revolves around the
answer
that will make me well enough
too walk with no pain
or evil thoughts in my brain

constantly feeling what i felt before i
tighten the belt
around my neck
naked
scared
and
insane

failing time and time again to commit
the sin
that would free me
from what keeps me
from the
Rooms of the World



Oh I see, from what protects me to what keeps me, nice job, very interesting. smiles

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Sun 11/16/08 07:28 AM
Hey I came up with a wild idea last night, of where all the people come from who feel they are reincarnated, we were all children of the guy who was condemded to walk the earth for enternity for hitting jesus, so that is why we are always reborn, does it make sense, makes sense to me. just a thought. grins wickedlybigsmile devil

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Sun 11/16/08 07:22 AM

Room of my world
my padded cell
of hell
trapped without a key
or
a chance of them setting me free
to see the world
that revolves around the
answer
that will make me well enough
too walk with no pain
or evil thoughts in my brain

constantly feeling what i felt before i
tighten the belt
around my neck
naked
scared
and
insane

failing time and time again to commit
the sin
that would free me
from what protects me
from the
Rooms of the World



Wow! Welldone. Nice way to end it too, with the actual phrase, I like your title too, Room of my world. Powerful too. smiles, good morningflowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 11/16/08 07:11 AM
thank you, giggles, you made my day, bye now, off to drink coffee, lots of coffee,loldrinker yawn happy

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Sun 11/16/08 07:04 AM
happy her pic says, I wonder what the rest of that guy above me looks like, giggles

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Sun 11/16/08 07:01 AM
by day is a mild mannered cat lady, by night a feral crime fighting angel in love with a garfield, hey this could make a great comic book. :banana: happy

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Sun 11/16/08 06:57 AM
I'm listening to my cheap MP3 player, my radio just gave out, LOL hahaha, not kidding either, lol haahaha, I need coffee, lots of coffee!drinker drinker drinker scared shocked surprised

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Sun 11/16/08 06:55 AM
Welcome, come on in, may I measure your brain, I mean head, I mean, never mind, oh yes, Good Morning, Happy sunday, excuse me for a moment, Egore! I told you to feed him, he is getting angry again! sorry about that, may I interest you in some baklava? bigsmile bigsmile drinker

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Sun 11/16/08 06:52 AM
:banana: :banana: :banana: drinker flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile flowers :angel: Happy Sunday to you too! huggles snuggles from the ufo capital! hugs and snugs to all!:banana:

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Sun 11/16/08 06:36 AM
Rooms of the World-my challenge piece

Glass shattered my expectations

in these rooms of the world I reside in

when I did something to exert my mind

past the vast expanses

of the other month

on the line I had eight hours

that would soon turn winter

into ashes

for it is like a focused locust

like being out at nightclubs for three days

and than looking up at the skies

wondering where my days, life, love for myself went,

and then he called me

and the way water issues forth aliveness in your center

it was like I was born again without the birth,

as if my heart were saying, "Demand a Miracle!"

so that I could wash my stones away

to show the truth I brought back from Hades,

so that no jaded hate remained beneath my soul,

Go ask Alice, she knows all about that,

my sick burning veins screamed in unison,

perfect and sinful Alice,

soothing sleep in my stumbling pathos,

"Read my whole body." I had said so many times,

like a lantern without the pressure to shine,

there goes the fulcrum of my mind

resuming for him the game,

the name of desperate needs,

for the sound of love from his voice.

Nica Bane 11/16/08


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