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So let's Haiku
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Running with the dogs I've become an animal Inhibitions gone Ok, I love this one, a joining of the heart between man and beast, what an exhilerating thrill that is. |
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So let's Haiku
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Mingle is so cool I wish I could stay in here For eternity (awful, I know I'll try harder) I like it, I would love to live in a poem of beauty, especially as it changed like the slow moving clouds and warm breeze across a field of flowers. smiles |
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So let's Haiku
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haiku first one tried overshadowed by others bow out now with grace ok by far my favorite, giggles |
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So let's Haiku
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Green has run away Strange colors are on the hill Winter is almost here cool, I like winter, one of my favorite subjects in poetry |
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So let's Haiku
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I like yours, I like night poems
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So let's Haiku
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bluebells dance playful
summers last breath wafts past me my lovers eyes were blue ok, I did one |
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So let's Haiku
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I would like to ask another question, how did you get those pictures into the reply? I would like to post a pic with my response.
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good girls go to heaven, bad girls go everywhere.
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So let's Haiku
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Well, thank you for your comment, perhaps I shall try once again, now if someone will please refresh my memory as to the proper syllable count, it is 5-7-5 is it not?
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So let's Haiku
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I was told by a haiku master I suck at the ku's. he writes 100 a day. So if that is any indication of my ku ness, I'm not sure I should participate. :(
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Ok, I read that word for word, and i agree on all of it, yes, it is hard to meet the right person because of these reasons and at the same time we are still learning as a society to look at things in a better or worse scenario. Gosh, I will definatly have to respond to this tomorrow, this is a goodone, but i am dead tired, gotta get some z's. Sincerely, and in short, take a break, build yourself up again, and learn from all of this, and next time around, be open to sharing these things with the woman you feel would be receptive to this. ok goodnight
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Um, does that funny porn anime count? um, I'm tired, uh, I think I saw that uh, wolf one a few times, it was cool. I liked the Matrix anime that was really cool. um, my crazy redneck friend is obsessed with dragon ball z and Naruto, I might get him whole collection for christmas, maybe.
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"TWO WORD MATCH-A-THON"
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fish eyes
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Cricket,lovely cricket
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Awesome, love the post. Hope to see more.
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Lost
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Wow! that's deep and painful. And it is currently reminding me how damn cold it is here tonight too! dang I'm cold! LOL I like your poem, it was good. Sounds like you were in a hard place at that time. Cool ok, laters v
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HUG, jus fo you.
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Highway Man mixed artists
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Midnight in the garden of lost love
I gathered up the morsels of my body And hung them on my heart I slung a moment on my back And called it by name of dark I flashed a smile at the crow And he followed me into the night I lifted up a memory To see better in the moonlight Something elegant crossed my path And spoke a few gentle words Something about missing you And missing the sound of birds Something about missing your arms around me And your healing touch Something about a never forever That would always be too much Because forever is just long enough To miss you more than I should Especially when you still stand beside me Wishing me love and such And wishing me to touch The fierce spirit that you are That dwells on my enigmatic thoughts And my riotous ways My severed heart has found you everyday Bleeding into your cup of memories Throwing hidden runes of meaning to the wind And falling on stone beds Only to raise myself up again To look into your eyes You I will never despise My midnight whisperer My muse never confused My mystic heart of past love and new winds of change What is it I seek when I seek you here in the midnight hour When my sight is seared to the touch And blinded by mists of time and colored veils of yesteryear, If you loved me once kiss the sky If you love me now I must say I still know Because I touched the muses wings so long ago My caress has left its mark on his heart And now I want nothing more than his kiss His never ending grip Sanity or insanity Is neither here nor there Something called me here And I know it was his voice His sweet embers burning in me His sweet shadow upon my mind Some silky sliver of kissing souls oh so sublime, Goodnight my midnight lover My midnight craving My silver tongued whisperer My last soul catcher of the binding light See you on the sunrise Taste you in the wind Tomorrow is your heaven Tonight is my sin. |
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I have not read an of that authors books yet, I will soon enough though, however if you want to get info on twilight why not join the myspace fan club or the multiply fan club, they are always posting stuff on it. I saw the previews, it looks good, can't wait to see it. Should be really cool. Can't wait for the new Harry potter movie too, I love that stuff. I'm a fantasy sci fi epic adventure nut.
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I posted a poem in the creative writing section of this forum just a few minutes ago to give people just a taste of the kind of stuff I write, you're welcome to take a look at it, it is called, Light Me, smiles, and thank you for the compliment. you are too kind sir.
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