There’s a touch
Of sun
In a
Moonbeam
And a hint
Of truth
In the
Lie
Everything’s
Real in
The mirror
Just
Backwards
And frozen
In time
A white flag
Waves in
The background
Caught in
The corner
Of your
Eye
And you
Can’t
Escape the
Nightmare
Like a shotgun
Wedding
Surprise
You just want
Someone
To notice
You just want
Someone
To care
The past is there to
Show us
The present is
Already here
No one
Attended
The premier
Of the
Summer
Release of
Your life
You turn away
From the
Mirror
Not sure if
You’re really
Alive
As you
Look out of
The window
A teardrop
Draws the
Blinds
You retreat
By cover
Of darkness
And your
Frond door
Becomes your
Disguise
You just need
Someone
To notice
You just need
Someone
To care
The past
The present
The future
Locked safely
Inside
Your
Despair

kc08

Another excellent write my friend and very true.

Fantastic imagery ((kc))!


Flowing and smooth ... and a lil more familiar than I care to admit from a life long forgotten...

thank you faded

K

here's to forgetting

oh no that was too much forgetting

Where is the emoticon for smelling the cork? That's about all it takes for me to get glowy ... and a gonner on a half glass of wine ...


ohhh too much information ... leaving now ...

Wow, intense (((K)))

Excellent write ...

powerful write

thank you angel

Come KC, cuddled up in my lap, I'll hold you close till you find the treasure you so deserve...awwwwh, your breaking my heart love!
this is such a lonely place to be, MY God!

Nicely done.

thank you pk

the power lies in the recognition

oh ali, this is a write not a place

but, judging from your reaction it worked so i guess i did something right...

thank you my favoritekindofwench...

there was just nothing else to say

good one

my favorite poem of yours even though there should be no favorites in poetry, this is cool

once i had a great line but, forgot to use it