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Fri 08/14/09 01:08 PM

I want to wake up to your warm embrace
See a smile on that beautiful face
Love you liked you've never been loved
Be the woman you've always dreamed of
Set you on fire
Fulfill your desires
Excite you
Ignite you
Make all your dreams come true
You lovin me & me lovin you me
Short and sweet, gets right to the point...love it!

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Fri 08/14/09 01:07 PM

Making my skin crawl thinking of the invasion-luckily I've never experienced thisbigsmile
You're one of the lucky ones, trust me!!laugh laugh laugh

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Fri 08/14/09 09:04 AM

Would said andriod have any respect for us?

If we built it would it not have flaws?
Hey, there! Please google "Turing Computer", it's about a computer program, software what have you that can build replicas of itself and even IMPROVE the program and the end product. Very novel idea from the 1950's I believe.waving

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Fri 08/14/09 09:02 AM
Very interesting Abra.

Yes, I would build androids, place in their databanks everything about us, where we went wrong....

If the android is actually "SENTIENT", then it is self-aware and I could have compassion. I can't feel this way about a toaster because it can't think, it just dries out bread. But a machine that can say as we do "I'm HERE", well, that's another bag altogether.

I would like it if we as humans could transfer our "whatever" we have into the machines, like in "2001", that way we wouldn't have to become extinct.

So, yes, build them. We always like to leave reminders of our passage, maybe something will come along after...?

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Fri 08/14/09 07:57 AM

Now that's real urban write!!

Any chance you were at anytime from NYC?
HAHA thanks, no I've never been to NYC, I live in TN now and the damn things were all over an aptartment I had. Nothing killed them except samshing them....hate emlaugh laugh

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Fri 08/14/09 07:56 AM
Thanks Mirror and Gossip!!love :banana:

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Fri 08/14/09 07:40 AM

i like the effort
its nice to see when people flex their imaginations

drinker drinker
Thanks, kcoo3, I thought this one got lost amongst the other stuff here.laugh drinker

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Fri 08/14/09 07:38 AM
Thanks you, all for your responses:banana: laugh

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Thu 08/13/09 09:27 PM
I've had roaches
been crawling around for years
disgust rising, hands clasping hands and broaches
everywhere I go
they're everywhere I go
slapping them to smears
slapping them through the tears
why won't they leave?
I've emptied the sprays
and checked out all the hotels
sprinkled the powders
gasped when they're in the shower
called EVERY one of those guys
called THEM twice
but they always come back
always pouring out the cracks
the floor has become a constant trip
brown and flowing
rustling all nite long
days pass, the walls start to fade
the only safe place,
the bed unmade
crested at the bed
flowing over,over my head
"It Tickles!!"
last words to say,
lost words of that last day
there's no more bed unmade
no more me
all that's left,
resides in a living shade
this is no match for the Pale.

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Thu 08/13/09 06:49 PM

You baked me a pie,
Full of beautiful lies,
And served it up on a silver plate.

It looked and smelled right,
So I didn’t put up a fight,
When the taste was a bit… off.

Eagerly you wait,
For me to finish my bait,
I should have seen the pretense in your eyes.

Under the guise of a new pie,
Filled with the same lies,
The taste became more and more bitter.

Your poison is spreading,
And my will is shedding,
As you say, just one more bite.

Finally it hits me,
It’s not what’s in the pie, but what’s missing,
That’s terrorizing me from the inside out.

I’m done with your pies,
But I can still taste the lies,
Now it’s your FACE that’s making me sick.

MLM ~ 8-11-09

I don't know how I missed this one,this is really good!love :thumbsup: drinker

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Thu 08/13/09 03:37 PM
I've been here beforelaugh laugh Like the style of this onedrinker drinker

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Thu 08/13/09 03:29 PM
rofl This is hysterical!rofl

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Thu 08/13/09 03:26 PM

This is my wish for you:

Comfort on difficult days,
smiles when sadness intrudes,
rainbows to follow the clouds,
laughter to kiss your lips,
sunsets to warm your heart,
hugs when spirits sag,
beauty for your eyes to see,
friendships to brighten your being,
faith so that you can believe,
confidence for when you doubt,
courage to know yourself,
patience to accept the truth,
Love to complete your life.
I can't really argue with any of it, I'm gonna start wishing for this instead of the lottery!laugh Leaves me with a good feelingdrinker :thumbsup:

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Thu 08/13/09 03:20 PM

She tells of your pies
filled with lies
and topped with 'whys'
Yet she still tries

She tries to understand
why your pies so bland
concealed by a fake brand

A brand that stands out
"I'm delicious" it touts
Than begins to shout.

It shouts all it can
But alas the pie is bland
cleverly concealed by a fake brand

The ingredient being apples of deceit
Pretending to be a wholesome treat
The crust made from a false wheat

These pies are quick to spoil
causing the victim to recoil

But now I can tell you man to man
you should know that your pies are bland


This is clever, how did your friend react?:thumbsup:

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Thu 08/13/09 03:15 PM

For two months now
Your work progresses
On a house for me
Or we, once abandoned
Breathing life again
Feelings shown in tearing out
Gutting the old, hauling away
Unneeded debris, starting clean.

The straight line of a wall
A true measure of
What's left unsaid
An even floor for
Sure footing, stumbles
Far less likely
Rooms come into view
With your careful
Attention to detail.

You labor on daily
The sweat of your brow
As your arms flex
Under the weight of
Heavy boards lifted
Keeping perfect balance
As you work, a feat
To see, not unnoticed by me.

I plot the layout of
Rooms, colors, painting
What goes where
When we're done
You, far less interested
In the gloss, the make-up
Knowing you have provided
A solid foundation.

Even with your voice silent
Your work shows clearly
An ability to follow through
With an end result that's
Pleasing to us both.
I like this alot, so much going on behind the scenes as the scenes are being built. Very "crafty"!laugh drinker drinker

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Thu 08/13/09 03:08 PM

Knowing My Place

It welled up
from that place
the rains fell
and my knees
up to my knees.
Her confidence
stands out as strongly
as the fury coming from her
place.
Place, is it home?
I do not need a man
she says. You do not need
a man,
as she walks through her door
and fixes him dinner.
Alone, the two,
in the corner talking,
whispering the day's events.
No she does not need.
She does not know my..
place. It does not feel
like my home, either.
The rains still fall.
On my knees,
up to my knees.
Damn that leak.

Raine Les 8/13/2009
I don't like to let it out either...."Damn that leak." indeed. Great write Sharris!love

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Thu 08/13/09 03:02 PM

This is about a girl that was sold by her parents to a man she didn't know...Sadly, this is still going on today

Never a thought
Never a touch
My soul is bought
Not even a whispered hush


It is wrong
the truth never kind
what monsters had gone
and sold a mere child


My child hood was taken
my innocense was too
My parents never knew the mistake they were making
When they sold me to you


it was for the best
they told me through farewell kisses and smiles
and money was given in zest
as they sold a mere child

The deal was made
The price was given
They made me a slave
You were the only heaven

Not an encouraging word
Not even a smile
You were my husband and lord
When you bought a mere child

I am older now
wiser too
But no touch, just a frown
as though it bothers you

a smile comes here and there
But fades after awhile
I often see you stare
But turn away in guilt for buying a mere child


Great range of emotions, woven througout the actions of the guilty.

love ^10

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Thu 08/13/09 02:57 PM
ONLY is a great piece of prose, a little tap on the shoulder you really can't ignore.drinker :thumbsup: drinker :thumbsup:

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Thu 08/13/09 02:01 PM
rofl





I'm not up to date on the faux-pas of thread posting, so I consider it a lesson learned.


i often can't tell when people are joking - i don't think you committed a faux pas at all, and there was nothing 'wrong' with your first post above; i think wux was just giving his personal answer to your later question, and in doing so gave good advice for getting a better response from people in the future. posting an op like yours is just fine, but you will lose some people.


sometimes being lost is fun...
It really makes life worth living,doesn't it?laugh laugh


worked for Doctor Who for years...
rofl

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Thu 08/13/09 01:58 PM

Emotions are our genes way of getting us to fulfill our genes goals. Every emotion we have is there for one of two reasons.

1. To help us survive long enough to find a suitable mate.
2. To help us select a suitable mate and replecate our genes.

They are evolution's gift to us.
I’m having a tough time reconciling that view with the myriad of different emotions.

Apathy for instance.

I don’t see how that could possibly contribute in any way to mating/gene replication.

Unless you postulate that some emotions are aberrant – that there is some factor that can alter emotional response such that the result is counter to the mating/replication goal. In which case, wouldn’t the aberrative factor have to directly effect the genes?

Just trying to mix things up a little. drinker

I don't know if "apathy" counts as an emotion...isn't it just a word for indifference, or rather lack of emotion?