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Topic: For a friend
isaac_dede Joined Sat 11/24/07 Posts: 10632	Wed 08/12/09 01:27 AM
She tells of your pies filled with lies and topped with 'whys' Yet she still tries She tries to understand why your pies so bland concealed by a fake brand A brand that stands out "I'm delicious" it touts Than begins to shout. It shouts all it can But alas the pie is bland cleverly concealed by a fake brand The ingredient being apples of deceit Pretending to be a wholesome treat The crust made from a false wheat These pies are quick to spoil causing the victim to recoil But now I can tell you man to man you should know that your pies are bland

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Wed 08/12/09 01:29 AM


msmyka Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 17079	Wed 08/12/09 08:07 AM
Thanks friend

isaac_dede Joined Sat 11/24/07 Posts: 10632	Wed 08/12/09 09:59 AM
ur welcome

LightVoice Joined Thu 08/09/07 Posts: 7405	Wed 08/12/09 10:01 AM
very cleverly worded! bravo!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 08/12/09 11:57 AM
Very well done, applauds loudly!

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Wed 08/12/09 12:16 PM
Bravo!

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Thu 08/13/09 12:49 PM
I like it..great job!

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Thu 08/13/09 03:20 PM
She tells of your pies filled with lies and topped with 'whys' Yet she still tries She tries to understand why your pies so bland concealed by a fake brand A brand that stands out "I'm delicious" it touts Than begins to shout. It shouts all it can But alas the pie is bland cleverly concealed by a fake brand The ingredient being apples of deceit Pretending to be a wholesome treat The crust made from a false wheat These pies are quick to spoil causing the victim to recoil But now I can tell you man to man you should know that your pies are bland This is clever, how did your friend react?

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76439	Thu 08/13/09 05:10 PM
Nice one

ladyliz1417 Joined Wed 12/27/06 Posts: 51463	Thu 08/13/09 05:12 PM
lol, very good

msmyka Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 17079	Thu 08/13/09 06:36 PM
She tells of your pies filled with lies and topped with 'whys' Yet she still tries She tries to understand why your pies so bland concealed by a fake brand A brand that stands out "I'm delicious" it touts Than begins to shout. It shouts all it can But alas the pie is bland cleverly concealed by a fake brand The ingredient being apples of deceit Pretending to be a wholesome treat The crust made from a false wheat These pies are quick to spoil causing the victim to recoil But now I can tell you man to man you should know that your pies are bland This is clever, how did your friend react? It was for me in response to my poem... http://mingle2.com/topic/show/239571

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