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Topic: My Compliments to the Chef …
msmyka Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 17079	Tue 08/11/09 02:45 PM
You baked me a pie, Full of beautiful lies, And served it up on a silver plate. It looked and smelled right, So I didn’t put up a fight, When the taste was a bit… off. Eagerly you wait, For me to finish my bait, I should have seen the pretense in your eyes. Under the guise of a new pie, Filled with the same lies, The taste became more and more bitter. Your poison is spreading, And my will is shedding, As you say, just one more bite. Finally it hits me, It’s not what’s in the pie, but what’s missing, That’s terrorizing me from the inside out. I’m done with your pies, But I can still taste the lies, Now it’s your FACE that’s making me sick. MLM ~ 8-11-09

lonetar25 Joined Mon 05/18/09 Posts: 3531	Tue 08/11/09 02:48 PM
myka, thats brilliant

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Tue 08/11/09 02:51 PM
Well done! I dig this....

msmyka Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 17079	Tue 08/11/09 03:05 PM
Thanks guys.... does it make me even more clever that my ex IS a chef?

HeyBeautiful88 Joined Wed 06/17/09 Posts: 1056	Tue 08/11/09 03:10 PM
smile Nice Write! I appreciate your use of analogies.

lonetar25 Joined Mon 05/18/09 Posts: 3531	Tue 08/11/09 03:11 PM
i dont know, i`m a man, we`re all prety stupid but i like it so much i had to post twice

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 08/11/09 03:15 PM


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msmyka Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 17079	Tue 08/11/09 03:16 PM
Thanks everyone Glad you liked it hun

Mayhem_J Joined Mon 07/21/08 Posts: 14265	Tue 08/11/09 04:00 PM
Wicked!! Love it!!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 08/11/09 04:53 PM
Great brain and even better taste buds

WolfEyez Joined Sun 05/03/09 Posts: 1780	Tue 08/11/09 05:53 PM
awesomely wicked, Myka.

msmyka Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 17079	Tue 08/11/09 08:38 PM
Thanks I guess I just decided theres no reason for me to try to be nice to him anymore when this is how I really feel.

IndnPrncs Joined Sun 11/04/07 Posts: 58420	Tue 08/11/09 08:45 PM
DAMM... That was really good Myka... I'm glad I'm not him...

msmyka Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 17079	Tue 08/11/09 09:30 PM
I'm glad you're not him too!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Tue 08/11/09 09:39 PM


isaac_dede Joined Sat 11/24/07 Posts: 10632	Wed 08/12/09 02:44 AM
http://mingle2.com/topic/show/239671

msmyka Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 17079	Wed 08/12/09 11:51 AM
http://mingle2.com/topic/show/239671 Nice write

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Thu 08/13/09 12:47 PM
I love it girly!!! great job!!!

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Thu 08/13/09 06:49 PM
You baked me a pie, Full of beautiful lies, And served it up on a silver plate. It looked and smelled right, So I didn’t put up a fight, When the taste was a bit… off. Eagerly you wait, For me to finish my bait, I should have seen the pretense in your eyes. Under the guise of a new pie, Filled with the same lies, The taste became more and more bitter. Your poison is spreading, And my will is shedding, As you say, just one more bite. Finally it hits me, It’s not what’s in the pie, but what’s missing, That’s terrorizing me from the inside out. I’m done with your pies, But I can still taste the lies, Now it’s your FACE that’s making me sick. MLM ~ 8-11-09 I don't know how I missed this one,this is really good!