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ev-er
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if i ev-er ever have a kid like this i'd say listen hear little d hows about we put mommies plants back in the pot stay out of her jewerly box and dont you never ever let me catch you ev-er repicking her locks knowing this kids part of me my eyes roll knowing he has this part of my eyes in dexterity and hand armed he'd slay finger kinda crooked not so to the point definetely more than Bill Clintons old thumbs worth given my little d would speak "i nev-er saw you do dat dad D" and me fumming would say "the kids good! i guess we can keep him!" and my wife in this line of my time would be unrehearsed my problem at the moment not knowing seeing no meaning when reading a new word |
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Topic:
an ode to jubblys
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i love how we can talk about boobies and this is acceptable.
I posted a poem about "having the balls" yesterday it gets deleted. so i guess boobies is acceptable but balls are offensive. point being; i had a real point to my point. this poem about boobies here is awesome for what it stands for. Having fun with boobies and the sensation of having something attractive that helps drive us sexually. my poem about balls was more of a lesson about being a man and taking charge and having the balls to say what you want to say to someone. mostly inspired by the thought of this site: mingle2 part of my poem written in hopes that atleast one guy would read it and ask someone out on this site. if there is any guys out there that want to read that poem because your debating about asking someone out here then send me an email and i will send you a copy. im only trying to help the community. so yes, i felt offended when the poem about having balls was deleted. i wouldnt be suprised if that poem i wrote inspired this reply. sorry for the rant on your poem lonestar. i assure you if my poem didnt feel appropriate to what i was doing for the community then i would not have written this 'i feel better to get this off my chest' rant/reply. |
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Topic:
The Rain
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nice write MzEm. |
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happy HAPPY birthday!
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Oh Noooo! He Didnt! Oh Yes! He Did! no suprise for me its easy to believe what I said. Im Fukcen Fukced. She Fukcen Fukced Me. stuck me under a bus where she shoved me. from incomplete speech a leak speaks deep in cracked concrete on HER no longer on OUR we loitered. dishonored sidewalk inner thoughts she thinked I stinked her reason I was spoiled. making me look like leftovers wrapped up as a tinman with the heart of a scarecrow FOILED! too perfect for me to not be nervous i shall share this with a shreik. in her innermind I assure you I assurely shrinked. as distinct as worthless. loud and unclear I hear the screech of a bus that must have just scuffed this man. damn near almost crushed this man. I backflipped up lips front cuffed happy as i was she shoved me. an exchange of cussings. love crushed crumbling. us fumbling, me stumbling. "I had a ring!" damn near almost buried the thing. my worst nightmare alas murdered by HER dream. so obsene in comparison to my dream, a scene unseen. wishes welled. a finger less swollen escaping such hell. |
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Topic:
over the pond
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over the north pond a dog barks at a cat the cat an armadillo under attack housed as a turtle head sunk in ostrich she stunk like a skunk an opossum held hostage over the east pond the dog is a frog leaping around up and down for the cause tugging on the tail of his lizard ungizzard the only hope they know grows back much weaker over the south pond a duck gave a f__k waddles to the pond leading twelve tails up only lonely is he who leads the way to those who never followed once amidst lead astray over the west pond a monkey and a snail the monkey clowns around while the snail acts stale he uses his tail swinging off branches tree by tree only what he really wants isn't funny to he |
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if I was to see my father today.
It would be something like this... (coughing heard. the apartment door opens) "What the f-word do you want?" hi Dad just wanted to see how you are doing. "How the f-word do you think I'm doing?" well... you look (1st lie) good "WELL... i feel like s-word" well... you look (2nd lie) great "Don't bull s-word me. what are you doing here?" i was looking for my Dad I'll try back another day. |
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Topic:
Poof!
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YES! raw flavor not lacking any taste!
only question is kimba what is an F.O? |
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Topic:
“Procrastination”
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strong write TxsGal
especially this part: "It seems that I have lost that drive. No longer do I seem to find the need to strive. It seems my energy to do those things is gone. Once so out going now I find myself withdrawn." very powerful. i find this very easy to digest LOL! |
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Topic:
Reality
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cool write Lex
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Topic:
RIGHT side of the brain
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on a scale of 1 to 10 i am awesome my favorite color is categorized in strands of sativas and indicas I believe the world is made up of things that will never last as long as space on a scale of a 10 to 1 i am a disgrace counting back words towards two words (2) men tal ( (1) meltdown surfing pedaling lily pads flying on a sea of brain freezes the colder i get the more the pain increases amirite? the short hand reaches silly me never leafless never leaves this place he calls home in a relationship more equiped to be a loan pending processed lending you me for fun until one of us is done on a scale of 1 to 10 i am not always who i think i am |
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Topic:
a look of regret
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her
and her two kids guitar hero the living room her eyes wet for him with this look she gave to me she didnt know that i could tell that she was thinking of he |
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Topic:
The pleasure is...all mine
Edited by
d4tc
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Sun 01/17/10 04:54 PM
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this pleasure is self degrading confirms and affirmed a firm strangling a lonely obsession caressing ones skin self-tugged on joy comes a jerk from within dripping hostility over humility killing the unlived if only temporarily the pleasure is measured worked up out released a thank you to yourself when you want to feel pleased |
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Topic:
The iPHUK
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MAC hasnt invented it yet but its only a matter of time before we get another device to seperate us even more from humanity sold on virus-free a lose of touch another machine |
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Topic:
realm under
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i felt like i was there on that street with you jimz.
and if i was.... i could have been the angry clown with peach streaked cheeks furiously pushing people legs trying to find my red nose |
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Topic:
Translucent
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it is 'funny' how it does that
ps. Sadie you have a great natural looking smile in the pic. atleast what I can tell from my perspective |
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Topic:
gun-barrel goblin
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Great Poem
"A bad bag, a bad deal, the linoleum peeled straight into dirt." especially liked that line and the image of the goblin smile |
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Topic:
...holding back
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it is about me reuniting with my ex girlfriend and us finding a new appreciation for one another.
some backstory: she was in 9th grade. I was a senior. our love never died. it was cut off. her father grounded her until she broke up with me. She was grounded for two weeks. i can remember bringing flowers to her house a few days before she broke up with me. I was missing her and i wanted to show her and her father how much I cared about her. Her father respected me doing what i did but also told me that we were like two young birds and that i needed to let her fly. Ironic to think i flew back into her life at this time when we both want to feel loved. both of us currently a year divorced from long term relationships of 10+ years. I dont know if this is love. Or an inflatuation. All i know is it feels good right now for both of us. I hope its not just a comfort issue to fill a void. I hope i really feel the way i think i feel about her but i guess time will tell for these two birds. I don't know if we are mean't to be. I do know the timming of it all couldnt be more perfect. At this moment. She couldnt be more perfect. |
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Topic:
...holding back
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one hand covered her mouth so she couldnt allow herself to scream waking up her kids as i did what i did i couldnt believe it was me inside of her trying to get out of her mouth a sound she held back torturing her freedom the heavy sigh what a trip the fact this was my best most appreciated performance nose to nose looking in her eyes this close a moment where none other as gorgeous gets as beautiful this fast making an impressions that lasts its been three days and im still gloating knowing she does me better a mere fifteen years later... |
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Topic:
Cooooool
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i know i am cool i try hard to be cool showing you i am cool i suppose makes it cool admitting i am confessing i am knowing i am cool reinforcing my cool never losing my cool is how i stay cool wow i am so cool i knew i was cool but not this cool this is very cool knowing how cool believing i am cool makes it cool THIS is cool knowing who IS cool oh SO cool beyond egotisti COOL i am that cool or whatever cool is always cool acting a fool |
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