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The Rain
M. E. Martin We were seduced by the sound of falling rain Cuddled up on the couch just being together Sometimes talking sometimes being quiet Just being together as the sound of rain Lulled us to sleep wrapped up in each other |
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I love the sound of the rain . And the freash smell
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 nice write MzEm. |
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Fabulous MzEm...
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I love the sound of the rain . And the freash smell Me too like everything has been washed clean... |
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nice write MzEm. Thank you d, always good to get your feedback... |
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Fabulous MzEm... Thank you Ainjel...much appreciated.... |
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Thank you Ms Mom.... |
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nicely done
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the first time i read this i thought it was short and to the point and very fitting.
Now that i have read it again i think it could be so much more. it just has the feel now like its the middle of something good. |
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Edited by
d4tc
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Wed 02/10/10 03:40 PM
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nicely done Thanks K... |
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the first time i read this i thought it was short and to the point and very fitting. Now that i have read it again i think it could be so much more. it just has the feel now like its the middle of something good. LOL I know the feeling but it wouldn't allow me to go anywhere else but you are welcome to put a spin on it and see where it takes you.... |
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Simply Beautiful
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Simply Beautiful Thanks Ms Mom.... |
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Thanks Jim... |
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its funny how perspective can change.
read it again and today it feels complete. the title is very fitting. great poem mzEm |
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its funny how perspective can change. read it again and today it feels complete. the title is very fitting. great poem mzEm Thank you D, I was confident you could add your twist to it and make it work.... |
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