Thank yous

MsWiz iam4u 2km bastet kc G-Mom

i started writing song lyrics. now i am back writing poetry.
its funny how you can kick one habit for another and always
have or fulfill the temptations to go back to what you know.












people loving poetry is what yoga is to yoga people.

a story
scrolled

past thoughts
mixing todays

u
n
s
c
rolls

u
n
s
c
rolled

never
ending

it sways

from beginning
to pending

she claims
to be with me

and (oddly)
(evens) him

i've said it
b4
like i've said it
B4

and i'll say it
b4
like i will say
it once more


B4

your done
with your man

tell him
this is the END


why would you
say,

"BUT
we can STILL
be
friends"

that doesnt
make sense..

does that make
any sense?


our hearts of ketchup

our clothes laid to lint


i've never been
so bent out of shape
as when

i was inna position
i had to put others in


you could snap me in to two
and the short side would do

yet it wouldnt define
the unsure why's i pursue


is this me wanting to to be
tranquilisticly subdued

or just my lucksome
relate to this dude

Very Cool Write

gREAT wRITE!

I'm kissing one girl


touching another girl


thinking of some other girl




and it hits me

in the chest

around my heart




this doesnt seem right



I should be thinking of one girl




kissing that one girl




touching our




whole world

very cool write S1ow!


I went to Paris in 2003 for 3 days.


From hanging with the gargoyles on top of the Notre Dame cathedral. To standing underneath the Eiffel Tower looking up (didnt ride the elevator, wish i did). from Napoleans Tomb to the Musée d'Orsay.

It all felt very rich in history and culture.

awesome replies!

i feel like i know you all a little more now

cool writes tomb

its funny how perspective can change.

read it again and today it feels complete. the title is very fitting.

great poem mzEm

in my early twenties i asked my ex to not shave her armpits and that it would look hot. she laughed and kept asking if i was serious and well i wanted to see if she would and how long she would grow without shaving them so she did. she went i would say about 2 or 3 months for me. i will never forget that one time she showed me true love.

always like how much detail you add to your writes kimba. very epic in thoughts as much as heart.

WOW!
great write!
really enjoyed the flow of it all!

and this line

"Fear hiding, and love subsiding--"

still Jason

strange one

trying to act normal

soft bargain

usually kinda soft headed

out my situations before jumping to amusement

finger foods

trying to pee in a urinal and some guy taller then me
is standing right next to me and he looks over at me and then scoots
closer to his urinal.

Hi my name is (blank)



i am a (blank)


i work at (blank)



i drive a (blank)



i am always (blank)


i almost always feel (blank)


especially when i am eating (blank)


or like when i am (blank)



Jason



jerk


home



07 toyota camry with built in defective gas pedal



high


different


at someone elses house


luring you into this little game i just made up

very nice write bamtino

the style of it reminds me of another great writer her named Vicki


it is powerfuly said with a quick sharp flow that is easy to grasp.

the first time i read this i thought it was short and to the point and very fitting.

Now that i have read it again i think it could be so much more.

it just has the feel now like its the middle of something good.

Ainjel your poetry has a calm soothing feel much like Angels.

Sadie and!
her poetry

good writes Michael.

I especially liked the brat.