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Topic: The pleasure is...all mine
d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sun 01/17/10 04:51 PM Edited by d4tc on Sun 01/17/10 04:54 PM
this pleasure is self degrading confirms and affirmed a firm strangling a lonely obsession caressing ones skin self-tugged on joy comes a jerk from within dripping hostility over humility killing the unlived if only temporarily the pleasure is measured worked up out released a thank you to yourself when you want to feel pleased

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Sun 01/17/10 05:23 PM
oh yeah, I recognize this, classic d4tc, great rhythm with the great imagery

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sun 01/17/10 05:49 PM
you could take up bread making.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 01/18/10 06:08 AM
only you J

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Mon 01/18/10 11:47 AM


MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Mon 01/18/10 02:30 PM
Very much YOU. I like it...

solberry Joined Mon 01/04/10 Posts: 28	Mon 01/18/10 03:15 PM
top notch, shameless shamefacedness

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Mon 01/18/10 03:55 PM

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