Topic: ...holding back
d4tc's photo
Mon 01/04/10 08:05 AM



one hand covered her mouth
so she couldnt allow herself to scream
waking up her kids

as i did what i did

i couldnt believe it

was me

inside of her
trying to get out
of her mouth
a sound
she held back

torturing her freedom

the heavy sigh

what a trip
the fact this was my best

most appreciated performance

nose to nose
looking in her eyes
this close
a moment where none other as gorgeous
gets as beautiful this fast

making an impressions that lasts

its been three days
and im still gloating
knowing

she does me better

a mere fifteen years later...

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Mon 01/04/10 08:12 AM
wow,bigsmile really good.smokin

smooched :heart: :banana:

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Mon 01/04/10 09:21 AM
awesome write-great ending!!drinker

ArtGurl's photo
Mon 01/04/10 11:08 AM
Woo Hoo flowers

DaveyB's photo
Mon 01/04/10 01:43 PM
nice write... but what's it about?:angel:

d4tc's photo
Mon 01/04/10 02:07 PM
it is about me reuniting with my ex girlfriend and us finding a new appreciation for one another.


some backstory:

she was in 9th grade. I was a senior.
our love never died. it was cut off. her father grounded her until she broke up with me. She was grounded for two weeks.

i can remember bringing flowers to her house a few days before she broke up with me. I was missing her and i wanted to show her and her father how much I cared about her.

Her father respected me doing what i did but also told me that we
were like two young birds and that i needed to let her fly.

Ironic to think i flew back into her life at this time when we both want to feel loved.

both of us currently a year divorced from long term relationships of 10+ years.

I dont know if this is love. Or an inflatuation. All i know is it feels good right now for both of us.

I hope its not just a comfort issue to fill a void. I hope i really feel the way i think i feel about her but i guess time will tell for these two birds.

I don't know if we are mean't to be.

I do know the timming of it all couldnt be more perfect.

At this moment. She couldnt be more perfect.









ArtGurl's photo
Mon 01/04/10 02:10 PM
flowers :heart: flowers



SO happy for you dear one

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Mon 01/04/10 02:39 PM
A guy I knew, went to a school reunion in the UK, met up with his first girlfriend from 40 years ago, sparks flew once again, love was back in the air...His wife here in NZ was an attractive slim lady, his first girlfriend from way back then, isn't, but love was the winner, not her looks/appearance...He came home, divorced his wife, brought his first love over to NZ, and they have been loving and living for over 20yrs now, very happy...

Enjoy what you have, and all the best D4tc....Awesome...

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Tue 01/05/10 09:56 AM
flowers flowers :heart: flowers flowers

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/05/10 08:01 PM
flowers Bleassings to you as this New Year brings forth
Hope filled dreams


MzEm's photo
Fri 01/08/10 01:03 AM
D, this is hot....

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Fri 01/08/10 07:50 AM
Congrats....drinker
Nice write...smokin
Maybe she is your soul mate...:wink:

RawB's photo
Sat 01/09/10 09:03 AM
Awesome write A+++
Defiantly feeling this one
Good stuff drinks

lurchs_sister's photo
Fri 01/15/10 11:03 AM
Jason this is beautifully written and very emotional!

I'm truly happy for you and hoping that this is the real thing for you. You deserve all the happiness in the world my friend!flowerforyou

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Sat 01/16/10 10:41 AM
Edited by iam4u on Sat 01/16/10 10:43 AM

it is about me reuniting with my ex girlfriend and us finding a new appreciation for one another.


some backstory:

she was in 9th grade. I was a senior.
our love never died. it was cut off. her father grounded her until she broke up with me. She was grounded for two weeks.

i can remember bringing flowers to her house a few days before she broke up with me. I was missing her and i wanted to show her and her father how much I cared about her.

Her father respected me doing what i did but also told me that we
were like two young birds and that i needed to let her fly.

Ironic to think i flew back into her life at this time when we both want to feel loved.

both of us currently a year divorced from long term relationships of 10+ years.

I don't know if this is love. Or an inflatuation. All i know is it feels good right now for both of us.

I hope its not just a comfort issue to fill a void. I hope i really feel the way i think i feel about her but i guess time will tell for these two birds.

I don't know if we are mean't to be.

I do know the timming of it all couldnt be more perfect.

At this moment. She couldnt be more perfect.









You have me on this one,lol..
For THIS,,I have never lived yet..never that old of a girlfriend to return into my arms..So,,very COOL to be into ANYTHING, that never happen to me yet,,,lol,lol all mine is bad,,,,lol
This is my true take man,,enjoy this time you both have.
Cherish it and her with lasting long delays,,in every touch and kiss.
Like the world could end tomorrow. In this you both will experience every small delight of compassion and tenderness to remember always.
If it all goes great,,,,,PERFECT!!!! Your live a dream.
If it all goes away,,You will have shared all you had, with someone
you truly cared about, and there is NOTHING BETTER THAN THAT.
So its a win, win, deal,,,and I hope it all becomes very REAL..
Heres to you BOTH,,,and love her in all the ways, you miss.....