i very much enjoyed this sherrie

TO hokey!

I know what you mean. its perfect just the way it is.

good thing you didnt add that hokey line!

yep, my favorite word today is hokey!

THIS



"I wish I could change you
Because I don’t want to lose you
Even though I never really had you"



one of the greatest thoughts i ever read

i cannot describe how perfectly worded this is.

^
putting her foot down!

Wow!

the cologne I used
to splash

the farenheit
she remembered

fifteen years back
she never forgot

nor did i forget the
way she moved me

her scents
that drove me
up a mountain

familiararities
shared

remembered

she brings back
the past

and i
see it

for the first time
in years i see it

and it hits me
in comfort

of who we were then
and this feelings
of us now

the feeling of

'why not'
mixed with
'what if'

seems even more unreal
knowing that love is
a possiblity worth
entertaining

like two wolves
panting

the way we lick
our lips through
our eyes

the excitement
boiling like the
dancing lid on
the pot of stove
left on high

feels like the first night
i met her

i want to stare at her

but i feel her
staring at me

the pressure

too much
and not enough

thats it from me for this year.

Have a Happy New Year everyone!

here is another one.



being divorced


a rose

red

blood
dripping

tears

falling
over

a glass
coffee
table

holding
wrists

swallowing

a ring

Maybe it is all just my luck

running out into no wheres

looking for nothing i can

truly hold on to.



I could have slept with my ex ex.


Only she would not understand.



How a nice guy could

do her right

then wrong in the end.



My ex girlfriend.


The one that ended us.



Does my desire to sleep with

her come from a vengence?


an otherwise grotesque

exploitation of innocence?


i am a cannibal on a diet.


A vegetarian i must eat.


instincts hunt

spruced up

behind pinks.


a javelin of desperation.

a net thrown in despair.


a tired eye

winking because you are there.


i should not care about how

your sister found me.


my face in a book

so unprofoundly.


excitement that rose

from soiled to stem.


better safe

bitter real


as i go in


The End.

under the red

and green stripes
white bows
ribbons tied

i present to you a disguise

exhibit A

burn't missletoe

exhibit B

a santa with only
two Ho's

exhibit C

lost

exhibit D

found

exhibit F

a stolen e beat down

exhibit G

under the tree
that shouldn't be
a waste of space

blue lights coiled around a white angel
sits on the floor

I sit down

we talk

she says nothing

in a moment of distrought
i look down

shaking my head
from left to right

Trying to remember what finger I used
to wear that ring on

that symbol that mean't something

that gift

i never asked for

1 pill
2 pill
3 pill
4

i can't take
this headache
no more

5 pill
6 pill
7 pill
8

shouldnt i close
before i go on
my date

9 pill
10 pill
11 pill
12

wha-where
is that other
bottle that was
here on this shelf

excellent write

Great Write!

thank you,

MsWiz
Dkw
Gossip
pkd
iam4u
2km
anjel

for the comments

&

qe32

for giving me inspiration..

couldnt have done this next one without your caring enough
to comment!

postive or negative. You posted 4 times. All negative toward me.

I feel honored



"He wears a hat in Church"


I met a man yesterday. I looked in the mirror and said, What is he jealous about?

Have I done something to offend him? Is jealous the appropriate word?



He appeared uneasy. Difficult to get along with. Someone who likes to cause grief

when they cannot find a place of peace to comfort them.


Searching... Not sure why he feels such negativity.

Expressed so casually it seems his nature.


A cold heart.
Baring a cold soul.


I want to help this guy see that life isn't always what you see. Hear smell and taste.

I try to picture how he would respond only there is no picture to picture this view of
who he is.

Hiding... behind anger and hatred.

Maybe he gets off on being negative. The kind of guy who would tell a woman he loves

her to ride her as long as he can until she find out who he really is...

Searching... His views are appealing when they are deconstructing the good side
of humanity.

Otherwise... he has not much to offer. A tool for a retired carpenter.


I feel bad for this guy. Letting jealousy get to him. Shaking his hand.
Feeling deceit. Trying to climb up a waterfall.

He should be on top of the mountain. Where the people below him can look up at him.



Not lying in a gutter face down on some street he can't remember the name of.

Thank you Sadie

very touching words. i am humbled and honored by your write.

Sadie

if poetry had one heart. you would be the bearer.

I remember when I started posting on this site a year and a half ago and all your writes to me at first always surrounded around a rose. Nowadays every poem has something different to offer.

I don't see how you do it. But you do!

Great Read!

"I loved you. I trusted you. I gave you my heart.
It’s people like you that give maniacs their start." Great Line!

Great Write!

devo
one of the funniest songs i ever heard

i still laugh everytime i hear it