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thank You
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thank You all of you who help make me happy to feel alive thank You all of You who take the time to look through these eyes thank You all of you who listen asking wanting to get to know my core you make it extremely hard to hate you since the pain gets derailed as trained when I look at you and I am no longer sore thank You all of you for giving me time from your life to read my mind thank You I cannot think of two better words to provide as I thank You |
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Topic:
how do we Do this?
Edited by
d4tc
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Wed 11/04/09 07:59 AM
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thank You!
MzEm 2KM jimz ainjel gossip and everyone else who reads and writes poetry here and shares their pics, their minds and their words thank You! |
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Topic:
how do we Do this?
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i slash the wind
pen after pen too open much too many i dabbled a do I ramble with you each time you cure my venting i talk hear and think ink after ink how art is this I am doing I ramble to you you do what you do the paper captures our feelings |
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Topic:
a real Horror House
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let me show you a place where girls are so scared they are not aware of good morales they will settle for nothing less than hundreds of dollars if you toss change they flash fangs whores more hard up than the men who can't hang this is what men do when they want to get drained winging its burning flame freeing the pilot.. down go da plane! with or without alcohol to blame its more of a sex game by these wild dames bringing me back to this vampire sting these tramps morph into vamps sucking doing a great job old men seducing abusing using legally the two oldest teens slobbering all over grandpas friends knobs business men politicians priests even cops a vampress without a mattress in a booth on your-- dime a dozen single? enganged? hunsbands? it makes no difference then a chemist mixing their experiments with what they got these sick men blow more then snot in their hankeys wee willying their wankies ruthless jankies those bad girls getting spankings squeezing mans second brain blowing their minds egos out the windows paid for by them who are looking at a place for what they want that they could not get as convenient as this this is their temporary happiness wrapped in flammable guilt fragged by bliss inside a dark room filled with doom a miss dressed nakedness tombed with perfumes these girls jobs make them weak in their knees shatter their glass morales a place where wolves go when they want to prowl on the howl as they growl on a low self-esteemed female a nasty smell of cigs alchohol and men knee'd squirts and stains scars on the brain diseaseseses one track trains train facing train some of these girls mommies who live as mummies zombies on red bull evil wicked sways torturing themselves in this dungeon and dragons role they play blood thirsty money hungry head on collisions haunted by this life they cannot afford a healthier living living in n out and in n out and in n out of older mens dreams I know this is brash for cash two diseased |
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Topic:
The days eyes sold the Earth
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I'm done with you I cannot outrun you I tried to die (happily) denied Came back to life Alive (evil Grin) trying hard to survive Mentally (draining me) Physically (hating me) Virtually (raging seen) (unfun) suprised I am one life and this is all as all (within) alive arrived I am in search of fonder happier days for rent the conclusion of Ebenezer when he see's' his life had been depressing learning his lesson i am guessin that could be me now and then most often when i am not laughin only one as am I am lonely the longer I wait on E the more I hate all she's the less drive to escape my fake as he this he now me sold out out of this world; In- visible in another word; In- vincible |
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Topic:
KC0003
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Abra
KC Great Tribute! |
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Topic:
Bar Code of Ethics
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dressed to my best
shaved feeling my face at the bar talking to this girl Some guy blew a kiss to she winks I down my drink becomming the jealous type hands tranform into fists ready to fight read in the face, "not a good night!" shoulders tense when she ignites into what is hawt fummed? i'm boiling! steam shoots from my ears you can see my chest beating more than anything at this point me mean mugging unloving filled with hate as if i am the one right now being played looking like a fool a DAMN FOUL where a flirtier flirt catches her skirt I drink another drink beating the hell out of me mad as can be where all can see half my heart on both of my sleeves |
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Topic:
Feelin' Me
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good write MzEm!
made me smile |
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Topic:
the end
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welcome to mingle
nice write! |
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Topic:
Riding a Carousel
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we have our ups we have our downs we have those moments that spin us around loud n clear mute from sound we have those moments that spin us around up n down mute or sound we treasure whats up when life brings us down we have our ups when were not down we all spin around this common ground |
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Topic:
a female hand
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give me your hand
let me feel a life again take this heart out of this body of tin PRY HERE to prior knowledge impress me can open this head dont let me be d 4 t c he one way falls down rabbit holes holding on by bare claws a darker side of the moon in awws he jaws i am out of luck scared to rest done guaging this test hating my zest rehating rehearsing pain that these words bring i dont apologize Im saving that for the nice guys shifty insecure eyes those who wallow around clipt strung out by neckties what a stiff life for a rich guy who lacks fun all unsuprised makes me glad those are no longer these eyes I sigh a life goodnight d4 re:see you to sorrow outplayed underscored |
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Topic:
our happy phase.
Edited by
d4tc
on
Fri 10/09/09 06:15 PM
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This is not what I had in mind when I wanted to not write this poem. Cousin you were once happy minded. I look at this hate and no pain carries any less weight in these days. You could do whatever you wanted. You had all the confidence in the world. Until you fell in love with that girl. I see a different man. A less vivid man. A saddened feeling he had when freedom was his choice. intrigued by a man who looks at her forcing his voice with your angry face. to me it seems extremely unrelaxed dead minded unnecessary. you have a curfew. She tells you what to do. You used to feel bomb. now all it is is blue. I remember listening to you and you had all the great ideas for us. Now every other word is poison deep in shallow minded cuss. We used to have this bond where our wallets treated us. Now you think you are a man because you love to flex and cuss. what happen to that bond where we used to have that love. That love you knew you didnt have to say when we had eachothers BACK. funny how we FRONT. I get high. Your a drunk. I am grumpy. Your a punk. We do this thing where neither of us want. Anything. Crinkling our eyebrows in frustration. I know you see me and I see you and our angry faces. why do we run around with these untied laces? this is not safe or healthy for any family. Damn it we should reconcile. I remember those happyier times when we used to have smiles. I miss those days. Our happy phase. |
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Topic:
The line
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Powerfully blunt I like your style Isaac
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Topic:
one time
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My homie lives in the barrio! |
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Topic:
The Cross
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Great Write
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Topic:
confidence is the key
Edited by
d4tc
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Mon 10/05/09 10:01 AM
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Thank You Tammy!
and MisKim |
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Topic:
confidence is the key
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Confidence is the key she said Only she hasn't told me what it would unlock the key is nice now whats it unlock? she said, the key is the action where the lock is the talk In in ah-ha I open my mouth while I walk pacing back to and fro kitchen to living room to kitchen back into the living room to kitchen I am getting nowhere I am talking to me outloud standing taller the more I walk the more I talk the more I embrace proud I say, but what If I have the key and she has the lock she says, less walk more talk from kitchen to living room to bedroom I am getting somewhere less talk more walk I ask her, If I have lock and she has the key does that mean she will take my confidence from me? she replied, you overanalyze things just insert this key in it's lock and give it a turn something you just have to try in order to learn I say, thank you great great great great great GREAT grandma You always know how to make me feel more knowledgable |
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I would be lying if I said I didn't miss your replies. Thank you MisKim.
You just inspired me to write another one today |
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Edited by
d4tc
on
Mon 10/05/09 09:07 AM
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Passion, feels like something to remember a tree before "timber!" Passion the heat hottied embers that make her quiver a thing of the past when those moments of joy no longer exist sitting on the pot to rot stuck Danny Glover tied to a bomb a lethal weap kept under used f u c k e d the great love hate relation s h i t you turned into that so called; d i c k she learned to be that ho called; b i t c h neither one call leaving both deceiving no feeling to scratch an otherwise awkward itch the clock "ticks" luck is like life as life is like passion b i t c h i n g her out d i c k i n g me down the passion crashing when one hits the ground |
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Topic:
i hate you
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Thank You for the replies
Tammy Sherrie Kim Jimz bohemianbugeater & Mirror |
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