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Fri 03/28/08 09:43 AM
Putting this thread in my top/last twentyfive...
howdy Den.

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Thu 03/27/08 08:46 AM
Howdy Howdy...
Wow... ya'all should see all the Personal Mail I got in relation to this poem!
Thanks Again everybody... I'll try to answer, as quickly as possible.

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Thu 03/27/08 08:44 AM
ha ha ha... lol... Thanks wench. Hope your day is going fantastic!

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Thu 03/27/08 08:26 AM
Hey handy.. good to see you! lol, thanks for taking the time to read it!

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Thu 03/27/08 08:15 AM
Lol... The women could say that,
it's just the F'n he gets, for the F'n he got...
Lol... I love my mother and all,
but I don't know if I'd thank her for putting me through that!
j/k.

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Thu 03/27/08 08:11 AM
Yes, and then No...
No, and then Yes...

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Thu 03/27/08 07:11 AM
Lol... Just to throw this in there... cause I'm a guy, and it's interesting... but, I have people on my favorites list that I've never talked to...
Maybe cause I haven't worked up the nerve...
Maybe cause they're cool, but the situation isn't right for a dating sight.. lol.
I don't really know... all I know, is that I do...
I think it's somewhat like keeping a picture of a celeb...
someone that you would like to meet, but to meet them and Not crash your hopes and dreams, is unlikely...
so you never take that first step, you just leave them "perfect" as they are!
So, blah blah blah... theres some more thoughts.
FroznChild

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Thu 03/27/08 06:02 AM
I don't mind it, but I wonder why guy's never IM me? lol.

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Thu 03/27/08 06:00 AM
Lol... I hate to say it, but I have plenty of girls IM'ing me.
With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

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Thu 03/27/08 05:58 AM
Lmao.... I didn't write this... NightRuler wrote this.
But, I had to respond once I saw my name. Lol.
Actually, it was a very good poem, with some vivid images left to the minds ready foder...
Excellent.

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Thu 03/27/08 05:52 AM
Her name was Audrey... and her hair, was infused with the fire that burned in her soul...
red, like the blood moon, late of eve... October autumn nights... All hallowed eve, to be precise... and did Audrey, ever look beautiful.
With the choice of outfit that she wore, heads turned left and right as she walked down the street, only to stop, and stare... At Audrey. Each time another eye swept up and down her soft silky skin, arms, legs... she didn't care. She would giggle, she would laugh, she would stare up at the stars, and fling her fingers to the sky, head back, hair wild... and her body... nude.
The Emperesses New Clothes, she called this outfit... only having, the night before, agreed to go as, Un Hansel, and Un Gretal... now she stood before me, before the crowd, as naked as could be... Insisting, that she was wearing clothes, so fine, only a princess could see them. I could say that I tried to imagine the outfit she was wearing... but my tounge would be decieving you.
Alas, my tounge was almost decieving me, as it just about lolled out of my mouth... In the shadows, it hung like a rabid, bloody red dog, dripping with tinged red spit... vampires blood, bitten unto, to be like a ware-wolf... but I... I was the Mad Hatter, crazy and all, running through the night not unlike that of the beast of NotreDame... the hunchback.... and who was I chasing in such a Manner?... but Miss Audrey...
That's who I chased... and she played me, like a duck at a hunters pond, laying in the grass, with only a lovely feather body to betwixt me... just to fly away, like the morning sunshine does during the mid afternoon, to take flight, like the duck, away from hunter, when the sights of the groovy, groovy pellet powder is almost upon her...
that is how Audrey did flee...
But she teased... For she knew that I was sure to catch her, on this, All Hallowed Eve... and that I would be sure, if possible, to take that sweet Emperesses, and tear her "new Clothes" from each part of her limber, soft apple jelly yum yumms... But still, she ran...
In the moonlight of the night, I swear that I could see nothing, my brothers, but a lovely bit of Nemo's Fire, wafting about the night, as tho Audrey was riding the burning horse, Queen of Athena... A jealousy not just for Me, but for Zuess as well, and it was while I was thinking about overtaking her, as I ran right behind her jiggling, juggling cracks and crevices... that she ran into the corn maze, surprising me, oh yes, my brothers...
for this is how she evaded, for a short time, the maddest, of the mad hatters...
it was, a corn maze indeed.
I could not imagine, as her beautiful, unclad body, slipped into the corn, just how lucky that corn was.... although it did cross my mind, that I was sure as day, that the corn had buttered itself, upon her entrance... for it seemed as tho I glided thru the stocks... almost at her tail, like a fox in the effortless hunt... evading a dog such as I, easily thru the thick and the thin, as it was.
What was I to say, but, come come dear Audrey... Must we play this game of Hide, and Seek, Amongst the corn? Wouldn't thost rather come out, and have thy self a good "Threshing" of sorts? A good threshing in the corn Audrey?
What Dost, thy say?
And it was at this point, my droobie brothers, that the young lady Audrey, did take herself from amongst the corn, and unto me... The very mad Hatter that had chased her unto said such circumstances... and let me tell you my brothers...
As the lengends had said, she was a beast unto me...
For so soft of skin, and of countenance, were not to be had unto this brother, without the price of satisfaction, if you will....
And Audrey.... the name that summons the passions of the night...
Bid herself to drive the Mad Hatter, even madder... in her "emperesses, New clothes".
Now I do remember earlier in the story brothers, where I said that when I had captured this little bird of flight, this lovely bit of peach running thru the night, that I would tear asunder such clothes... as to leave her truly naked...
and shall I be to let you down in my story? to not fufill the simple promises that I have made... have it not dear brothers...
it is true.... to true... for it was Audrey...
that tore the clothes from me my brothers....
Yes, I stand here as a man, and admit this to you now, for it is great satisfaction, to tell unto thee... That your particular brother here, was a nervous as a fresh chickie straight from the egg...
But fear not... for it was with straight body, and hard presence, that I responded to her.... the moments hesitation, only to let her see me flacid in such a reddish glow from the moon... it was then, dear brothers, that she began to chase me, as I had chased her countenance, only a moment ago....
and there was indeed a good threshing of the corn that night gentlemen...
For Audrey, as gentle, and as soft as she was....
came upon me like a thunderstorm....
and I, dear brothers.... shall keep the rest to myself....

With Equescent thoughts....
FroznChild indifferent

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Thu 03/27/08 04:46 AM
Hey Noel... Good, powerful right...
Personal opinion of you aside... lol... (which is good to me)
Personal opinions I don't have...
Wether I knew you or not, this was well written...
Thank's for sharing...
Pleasure to see you...
Till laterz then.
Keep writing.

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Thu 03/27/08 04:42 AM
very nice miss noel... good to see you!

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Thu 03/27/08 04:16 AM
Ooh, ooh ooh... look at what I see....
I think I see a daffodil, laughing at a tree...
The tree stands proud, so mighty and tall...
Tree always thinks that it never will fall...
While the daffodilsits and just laughs at it all...
who cares, says the petals, who cares?

Ooh ooh ohh, now look at that?
I think I spy a bearing fruit, laughing at a bat...
Flying so high, and so fancy free...
Fruit screaming at the sky, COME AND GET ME!
And the funniest thing that I ever did see...
Laying on the ground, just the tiniest of seeds...
saying, who cares, who cares, who cares...

Ooh ooh oh, now looky over there...
I think I hear a human, laughing at his underwear...
spinning in the dryer, so puffed up and dry...
I swear I must admit, that it almost made me cry...
When I looked over and seen the underwear, let out a lonely sigh...
and say, who cares, who cares, who cares...
who cares, said the undies, who cares.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

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Thu 03/27/08 03:55 AM
Don't touch me...
Don't touch me, don't look at me, don't think of me...
Don't you think that's the way that I want it to be?
Don't you think that if I had a choice, that I would choose myself...
instead of placing some-one else first... and placing myself upon the shelf...
Don't hurt me...
Don't hurt me, don't see me, don't hear....
Don't you think that I don't want you, to be somewhere near?
Dont you think that I wasn't thinking...
when I did just what I did...
I didn't know what I was buying, when I stupidly placed my bid...
and what did I get, for what I showed?
My money taken, and my feet shown the road...
I'm sorry that I didn't know...
and that I forgot who I was....
because....
I hurt you...
and you hurt me too...
what were those horrible things we could do?
that we did?
then we went and hide...
like someone else had done the deed..
but it was us, that planted that seed.
And now, no matter where we go...
it will grow.
It will grow as high as the mountains tops...
of which we'll never scale...
this relationship...
this relationship was such a hell.
I never knew hell could feel so well...
Don't touch me...

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

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Thu 03/27/08 03:43 AM
It seems the sky is only so bright,
When I'm only feeling allright...
Life could be so much better, in so many ways...
It's the challenge of soft living,
of peaceful, deep soul giving,
It's the life I live, that often, simple sways...

And I don't know what to say,
About the way, I feel today...
I only know that tomorrow, could be better...
I could sit by the fire side...
Feel myself, warm up with pride...
Till I realise, that somewhere, my cheeks got wetter...

Now, we all cry now and then...
and then, just a little bit again...
Crying aint so bad... it's not a shame...
So many people crying...
So many people trying...
So many people trying hard, to lose the game...

Now, I've been one of those...
we've all been, I suppose...
We've all been the loser, now and then....
So take some small advice...
don't let your life, be a vice...
Don't be a top, laying on the ground...
pull the string... and let it spin...

I know this seems a little sporatic...
these thoughts, they come from the attic...
of my mind, that I, go through, and venture, a story,
once in awhile...
but it's thoughts I have like these...
That, really seem to please...
If they make no one else, they make me smile...

And that's the way it goes...
I can feel it, to my toes...
When I write a story, for my, lovely, JSH friends...
That it really makes me smile...
And I love it all the while...
And it reminds me, that life...
never, really ends....

With Equescent thoughts....
FroznChild indifferent

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Thu 03/27/08 03:30 AM
Thank you everyone... It's so great of a feeling, to see everyone's words here upon the screen! (especially, when it's saying hi to me, lol) Thank everyone for respodning...
This was just a little ditty, written in the middle of my strep, to take my mind off not being able to talk...
(that's why I'm typing so much here right now...) j/k.
Everyone is too kind... and I hope to see/hear/read/talk/type,
to you all soon.
With the kindest, and most amiable,
Equescent thoughts....
Yours truly,
Benjamin. aka... FroznChild

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Wed 03/26/08 06:46 AM
Poetry.... simply.... poetry...
(case of strep throat is all, lol)
With Equescent thoughts...
Froznchild indifferent Benjamin!

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Wed 03/26/08 05:09 AM
I'm sorry if I'm a little down and out lately it seems...
just something sorta came along and changed all of my dreams,
it's left me feeling weak inside, and my face a little pale...
Funny how life can change so quick...
I got cancer in the mail...

They sent it Postage Due....
Just for little ol you.

Funny little sort of thing, how it sneaks up on you so...
I only walked from my porch to the mail box... what do you know?
I must admit that when I read it, on my knees I sorta fell...
took me awhile to finally sink in....
I got cancer in the mail...

I wonder what it will be like from here...
what sorta changes there might be...
Cause now I got to change my life...
for something I couldn't even see...
It's already put in triplicate... a red ribbon paper trail...
So many people just got "back Taxes"...
I got cancer, in the mail...

They sent it Postage Due...
directly from us to you.....

and I'm sorry, if lately, of my former self I'm just a shell...
or if I don't take time to keep the conversation from growing stale...
Please forgive me, if you notice, I'm not feeling very well,
Yeah... I just found out yesterday,
I got cancer in the mail.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

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Mon 03/24/08 07:12 AM
Lol... I would have to say, that most people on this site, are probably single... (cause it is a dating sight) male or female...
But I also agree with the above post, that not everyone here is looking for a relationship, or single...
Lol... are you looking for someone that is still engaged?
I think we have a forum for that somewhere!