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Wed 04/02/08 05:34 PM
And of course, thank you everybody. I always love writing about topics like this.

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Wed 04/02/08 05:34 PM



You are very talented at writing

was awesome to read

thank you


drinker flowerforyou

Thank you nighttime... that's real kick of you to say!

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Wed 04/02/08 05:32 PM
Thanks Everybody... No problem. I love to share!

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Wed 04/02/08 06:35 AM
Everything gives you cancer...
Chicken gives you cancer...
and everything taste like chicken...

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Wed 04/02/08 06:29 AM
I have yahoo... same name.
don't have AIM.
I don't mind chatting on JSH, but the chat forum/or my computer, always messes up.

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Wed 04/02/08 06:27 AM
Around 35 perhaps.... any time is a good time. One should never really settle down in spirit.

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Wed 04/02/08 06:25 AM
Lol... I don't know. I've heard of people getting married, just because the girl was late.

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Wed 04/02/08 06:23 AM
All Three, sooner or later.

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Wed 04/02/08 05:57 AM
She was my first love, down in the "old back then"...
tho she would never and now I'll tell you why.
I felt her like a summer storm, coming again
Just like the wind she made my kite fly.

She was softer then the breeze on a fresh summer day,
brighter then the flash of the sky...
She was music like the thunder, she could make the clouds rain,
my heart beat so fast I'd thought I would die...

I can never get my voice to work, my heart was beating so loud,
I swore that's all she ever could hear...
my legs felt like they were made out of playdough,
anytime that my feet would get near.

Her hair was like the dark clouds that crossed the sky,
her lips like the best sunset in june,
Hey eyes were better then the milkyway,
and her skin it was whiter then the moon.

I could go on about her, forever it seems,
although to her I could have never said a word...
She was more beautiful then anything that I could ever say,
A summer storm I wish now that I'd heard.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

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Wed 04/02/08 05:39 AM
Like a lover, that wanders endlessly,
I see the way, that you should go...
But you don't trust, any one you see...
any one you know.

And who am I dear? to take your body?
take your mind, and even your soul...
who are you dear... to even let me...
loose your self control?

Feel the fire? I can feel it too...
It doesn't matter how life turns.
Jump on in there... take your chances.
I hope it burns... can't you feel it burns?

So free yourself, from your chains girl...
Don't let anyone, including me, hold you down.
This is your world... This is your life.
Paint the town...

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild

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Wed 04/02/08 05:24 AM
It's such an awful thing to say...
that you took my love away.
but it's something that I know we can't deny.
I finally see it true,
yeah, I finally, caught you.
In your tiny, little wholesome, lovers lie.

You've been cheating on me...
girl, it's easy to see.
I can feel it in your arms, I don't know why...
I can see it in your face...
Your smiles outta place,
I can hear it in your wholesome, lovers lie.

Does he tell you what to say?
When you want to get away?
Does he tell you that I'll never know the truth?
Doesn't he think I'll ever know?
Or question where you go?
When I notice just how much you act aloof?

Does he touch you the same way?
Or better, I must say...
Obviously, since you go to him, that must be why...
Cause it's not the way I love,
that his presence reminds you of...
It's the Tingle, of a wholesome, lovers lie.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

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Wed 04/02/08 05:13 AM
Then your first name must be Scarlet... lol. j/k.

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Wed 04/02/08 05:02 AM
Lmao... Any plan of action, is better then no plan of action.
Well done! ha ha.
I figured you would get it, knowing what a palindrome is.:tongue:

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Wed 04/02/08 05:00 AM
When children have no place to go,
no loving hand to stop and show,
it makes them hardened unto life,
that often happens with undue strife...

These children all have hollow eyes,
all tell stories, all believe lies,
they have no place to go and stay,
no one to take the demons away...

These are my children, the ones that I find,
that no longer themselves, no how to be kind.
I take them, I feed them, I give them some hope,
A place they can rest, can talk, can cope.

But they are only my children, my children to me,
Out on the streets, they are who they be.
All are young women, or already young men,
they don't get the chance at being children again.

Except, at my home. my shelter. my place.
The only place they're allowed, to finally show face,
and finally find out, just who they can be...
before I have to take the ones I've found,
and set them free.

These are my children, already lost before they're mine.
Which puts me in a bind...
I've got children to lose...
but I've got children to find.

With Equescent thoughts....
FroznChild indifferent

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Wed 04/02/08 04:49 AM


The poems that I have read from your recently, haven't ceased to amaze me as of yet! specially a few in the request thread.
Well written,... beautifully done, Crazy...
What are you, three and a half beats?


blushing Well thank you!


I don't really know what my style is... I just know when rhythem feels right to me. Sometimes I like to rhyme, sometimes it sounds too... cheap or commercial that way.

I could prolly whip up a goofy jingle in no time... I used to love that kind of thing... I wish I could find some of my middle school poetry hahahahaha.... oh man.

Lol... not so much asking your style, as making light of your name a little bit... laugh

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Wed 04/02/08 04:44 AM
Take the dark times raining down on me,
Lift them up and help me set them free,
Make a halo like the world will never see,
Make a lighting from which folks will run and flee.
That's how are love seems to be,
When you're beside me.

Feel for me my darling,
Electricity in the air.
No matter where I look or walk,
I feel it everywhere.
And it seems that it flows through me,
without so much a care,
when you're beside me.

Take the blues that I feel deep,
that come and visit in my sleep,
Take the rain that's coming down,
Filled with feelings in which I drown,
I could never feel this way,
if you weren't here with me today,
right here beside me.

Take for me this ring I give,
It's your my dear as long as we live,
I can't think of a better friend,
To have until my dyin end,
and I'll never forget how I love you,
or that my dear you love me to,
when your beside me.

I must admit these words are real,
The emotions I can't hold back I feel,
are spilling over into tears,
that wash away all of my fears,
and I know that I'll have no care,
because yours is a love I love to share...
when I'm beside you.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

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Wed 04/02/08 04:36 AM
The poems that I have read from your recently, haven't ceased to amaze me as of yet! specially a few in the request thread.
Well written,... beautifully done, Crazy...
What are you, three and a half beats?

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Wed 04/02/08 04:31 AM
Love is easy to find... Hard to keep.
Getting married is easy... Staying Married, is hard.
Love comes and goes, wether we like it or not.
It's how long it stays, that really matters.

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Wed 04/02/08 04:25 AM
I think, honestly, for me... a girl named Chachacha... :tongue:

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Tue 04/01/08 06:57 PM
lol... some gross responses on here... but,
I'll go regular.
I like strawberry cheesecake...

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