Topic: My beautiful girl
nightruler's photo
Thu 03/27/08 05:38 AM
I couldnt believe my eyes
when I saw you standing there
The beauty in your eyes
looking out from despair
I know it ended harshly
with the words we never meant to say
but you know we have no exscuses
when were both the ones to blame



And where have you gone
my beautiful girl
dont you leave me in the rain
for the rest of the world




time's taken slowly
what is left of me
drifting without ending
in a faded memory




where have you gone
my beautiful girl
don't you leave me in the rain
for the rest of the world



MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 03/27/08 05:43 AM
Edited by MsTeddyBear2u on Thu 03/27/08 05:59 AM
drinker Good one Night...

nightruler's photo
Thu 03/27/08 05:45 AM

drinker Good one frozen...



thanks for the new nickname

s1owhand's photo
Thu 03/27/08 05:48 AM
Edited by s1owhand on Thu 03/27/08 05:48 AM
bigsmile

yeah - nice write...
i'm waiting to see what happens next....

:wink:

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/27/08 05:58 AM
Lmao.... I didn't write this... NightRuler wrote this.
But, I had to respond once I saw my name. Lol.
Actually, it was a very good poem, with some vivid images left to the minds ready foder...
Excellent.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 03/27/08 06:00 AM

Lmao.... I didn't write this... NightRuler wrote this.
But, I had to respond once I saw my name. Lol.
Actually, it was a very good poem, with some vivid images left to the minds ready foder...
Excellent.



Opps- whos not awake yet? ME!!!blushing
Going to get more caffiene>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

nightruler's photo
Thu 03/27/08 06:00 AM
Thank you..unfortunately the song itself..(with music)

is better than the lyrics alone

nightruler's photo
Thu 03/27/08 06:00 AM
Thank you..unfortunately the song itself..(with music)

is better than the lyrics alone

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 03/27/08 08:56 AM
Beautiful again...flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 03/27/08 11:13 AM

I couldnt believe my eyes
when I saw you standing there
The beauty in your eyes
looking out from despair
I know it ended harshly
with the words we never meant to say
but you know we have no exscuses
when were both the ones to blame



And where have you gone
my beautiful girl
dont you leave me in the rain
for the rest of the world




time's taken slowly
what is left of me
drifting without ending
in a faded memory




where have you gone
my beautiful girl
don't you leave me in the rain
for the rest of the world





I agree,, Very nice,, Waiting to see what comes next...