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Lyrical Response Post
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everyone's sense of humor here it is rather a please you had taught me here i didn't know that this could be such a breeze Ahh yes, that's the way it goes, once you start rhyming it flows from the toes... And the greatest thing about it, it never does shirk, you'll find yourself rhyming, (oh my god) not at work... But, yep, that's where the rhyming will be, and its not as impressive to the boss you see... Although, (seeing my rhyming) you know I disagree... But it's great to see that you are totally in rhyming sinc with me... People here are really great... You can see that for yourself, and yes their since of humor, needs to be dusted off the shelf... I want everyone that I can find, everyone dares to try... To post a rhyming (thing) right here... To just... let imagination fly. |
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well hello there and heres a quick stroke to touch me like that deserves a good poke so poke you i will and ill hear no complaint consider me your own teasing saint i hesitated and dallied to sin just building tension it's fun to begin... i like best a tease and a saint with a couple of flaws helps pay hell's rent I've heard a couple of bad things about hell... Like the toilets flushing from heaven, can cause quite a smell, and that the worst sound in hell, as far as anyone can tell, Is a toilet flushing rainstorm, coming down by the pail... I must admit, from the very first hit, that hell sounds like wonderful place... You can tell anyone, just exactly what you done, and don't even have to worry about saving any face... A place like this must truely be, the vacation spot of the stars... Hell, aint nothing funnier, then watching em blow up.. as they drive in their gasonline cars... And the biggest amusement, that I've ever heard... (and believe me on this, trust every word) The the ruler of this whole damn land, Is the devil himself, Mr Slowhand... And I wouldn't be telling you this, but you should know... He's standing right behind you... so I gotta go. |
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it is rather annoying to keep hitting reloading why don't they just start loading when someone is done loading sounds for-bodeing I don't know why it doesn't keep loading, or why, for so long, yes, it does cause loathing... The only advice that I can give, is, sorry, none, in this situation... It seems that having to wait for loading time, is doomed to be everyone's station... |
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thank you so much for your praise for so rusty a tounge i did try to raise some lovers to hate and haters to love and just stupid ditties when push came to shove Stupid ditties is, as stupid ditties was, but I don't think we could of made it without out ya because... It takes more then just my perspective, to keep entertained, and all of these poets, in one thread reigned... It would be great to see you, come by again, and remember, if you can, bring a rhyming friend... This Is the Lyrical Response Thread, everyone come and see... Just how impress, to the crowd, Your rhyming, it can be... Well, I hear the blues a callin.... tossed salad and scrambled eggs... And Aubrey I get a bit confused, but girl, your poetry, it legged.... And I don't know what to do, but as a vampire, I've got your neck pegged... Come calling again, Goodnight Ben |
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i wasn't sleeping i was reading elsewhere but the action is here not over there satan says, "here is evil" do you like it or not? i've whatever you want and i have a LOT No doubt about will lay here or stand, for your reknown since of structure, is foretold throughout the land... I'm afraid that soon the action may be, for the night at least thru, But could you do a favor for me, and bring some more people too? We both know how popular, the mighty slowhand is, and a few of your friends popping in, would keep this post its' fizz... So what do you say, help a man out? If not I might use my manly pout... oh wait a minute, that image is raw... ever try to look manly, when sippin from a straw... Well, that was my last joke, for this particular poem, I think I'll slap a stamp on it, and send this one home... |
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i will someday have a picture on here so that people can see who i am but can be hard when not for sure all i can do is be who i am Some say a picture is worth a thousand words... some say that... hell, most... but I was talking about this very same subject today, somewhere, on an earlier post... the most I can say, is find something today... that describes just a little bit of you... Doesn't matter if it's a picture of two sticks, standing at the boston Zoo... |
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just poppin in to say great job everyone Ahh ah ah, PKH, you're not fully done... but don't worry gal, I'll pick up the slack, and make sure it ends in a rhyme attack... I'm afraid that anything posted hear, must come with an accompanying rhyme my dear... But I thank you so much for popping in... (and even tho I tease, don't take offense please) can't wait to see you again. |
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my head draws close to my pillow this morn and to saying adieu leaves me so torn but i certainly enjoyed your sweet company and maybe tomorrow will come and ill see that loving in truth and truth in love will lay sweet dreams from above I have so much enjoyed your poetry tonight, and I hope that sleep comes quickly, and then off on dreams of flight... The words that you have so lovely spoken, as you spent your time here tonight, have inspired many others, to continue and write... I thank you much with alll adieu, even tho, without looking, I couldn't spell the word, but again, the poetry that you wrote tonight, was some of the best, I've ever heard. |
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Hello Slowhand... in the crowd, please stand,
for everyone to see who you are... another great poet from around the boards... A top notch, thread superstar! I've heard many great things, about this legendary poet... (and always from him) how he brags, dontcha know it? But I jest, and I kid, and I certainly Tease... This man poetry, will bring you to your knees... So many insightful thoughts does he have, and so many does he give away, that people become spell bound by his words... they just, literally stop and stay... So with all that ado, I've now anounced you, to the best and the greatest of my knowledge... When you try to match verse, don't bet a large purse, Slowhand, went to poetry college! |
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i thought that you had gone to bed what happened couldn't sleep were the sheep in your head all asleep Ahh my dear, I'm an insomniac, and every night, sleeplessness will attack, and keep my eyes wide open in vain... waiting on that midnight train... That delivers the "sandman" to my bed, been waiting so long for me to fall asleep, that I'm pretty sure he's dead.... And besides that, I must admit, that I find this rather fun... and I'm going to miss it all quit a bit, if, (at anytime soon) this is done... I have no doubts that it will last, at least a day or two... of the many friends that I know and have met... Been here yet, just a few... (but then again, I sadly state, that many don't like to read) A thread that continues to race off, like a brave and galliant steed!. |
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Michelle my dear, I am sorely impressed,
at the way that your poetry has flowed tonight, it seems as though you at first lacked confidence, your rhyming has taken flight... Thank you so much for sharing your story with us... we have all felt out different pains before... but (lovely neck) Audrey is right when she says, that sharing it helps to make it a little less sore. The way that you have blessed us here, with your personal story thrown on the pages... simply, I must say, proudly from me, the lyrical flow just amazes... I so much first must thank you so, for trying so hard to begin... with the way that you just let your poetry flow... I think that you're going to fit in! |
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well hello there and heres a quick stroke to touch me like that deserves a good poke so poke you i will and ill hear no complaint consider me your own teasing saint If he hesitates to long, that could be a sin, if you arm gets cold, please let me step in, I know I would sure love to dance with you again... I mean, before you even danced the crowd gave a Ten... |
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Time Zone
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Lmao... Man you guys can be crass... Lol.
I think that you only get the one opportunity, when you first sign up for it, to choose the right time zone... Not for sure, but that's my (train ran over) two cents... With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild (Hey all you freaky deaky friends of mine) |
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Tobacco Adds +Cartoons
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I'm thinking you must play on a pro team of some sort...
or, did you mean life coach? lol. Hopefully, they find the cure to all cancers, before it catches any of us... Lol. or, at least before they quit making cigerettes! If I'm going to die from cancer, I want it to be because I'm still smoking... not after it was banned twenty years ago! Lol... |
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i also have a sad story it didn't happen that long ago i thought that life was not that sorry we were together for eight years, or so I also wanted to say real quick, thanks for (keeping) making it rhyme... That was slick! |
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i also have a sad story it didn't happen that long ago i thought that life was not that sorry we were together for eight years, or so That's wonderful Michelle, (you know what I mean) Please put it here, for it to be seen... I can guarentee that it will be greatly admired, as long as to rhyming, we can see you aspired... I would love to hear it, and so would my friends... Pleae, tell us how this story begins... and ends... |
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Goodnight one and all, I'm off to bed,
I need some rest, for this old sleepy head, I can already see that you are all having fun, and I leave it in your capable hands, to get the rhyming done... If anyone else should ask, please carefully tread, and give them the real essence, of how to work in this thread.. and whoever may catch your interest, wether tomorrow or tonight, Throw down some rhymes, and let your words fight... let them sleep together, after they've been printed on this page, for this, my friends, is our poetry stage... and here, what you write, will be in stone, for all to see, how wonderful rhyming poetry can be... You shouldn't have came if, if you didn't plan to get wild... you've stumbled on lyrical responses... (and, I GUESS ) the host, FroznChild... (however I remind, don't drop the ball, This post is made, to talk to anyone at all) |
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Here my dear, we perfer the rhyme,
it's easy to do, just any old time, It's not all that hard, just search your head, If it doesn't rhyme, can you post it elsewhere instead? On here, I'm sorry, (you can do what you like) try to rhyme, even if it don't make sense... Bike... See, that didn't make sense, but it made the line rhyme, and if you do that, in here, you will see in time, That words that you looked for but couldn't find before... start to rhyme, and make sense, even more and more, start to rhyme and make sense even more! |
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Night Ruler, this rocked... Very inventive, in my opinion...
97% of the rhyme kicked ass... You mis-spelled intensity.. lol. And, I really liked the ending... (bet it was hard to find something for X... that's why it's your field of study tho) |
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hey any older ladies
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Hey, this kid deserves all out support... He just needs to know where to be... Go to the Milf section... you will find all your wildest dreams answered there my friend... and be more then welcome... Hope to see you there... but stay away from my milf... FroznChild... hmmmmmmmm and who might that be? Lol... quickly becoming.... the 16th letter of the alpha! |
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