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Programmed
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Aww, thanks shauna.
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Beyond Daylight
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Thanks shauna! Nice to see you again.
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Beyond Daylight
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Beyond Daylight
A shadow of nightfall With nightshade in hand, Mandrake screams forth As life fades from land. Though dim lit and dusty A window sparks life. A candle is lit Shattering the night. Tortured and broken, A shadow falls still. Succumbing to death Or is it life that it fears? Beneath crimson moon... Washed in the waves of gray mist, Love gave it's life Through freedom's consent. Found by the darkness, Beyond sunlight's rays, Revived is this love By deadly nightshade. Salved by the mandrake And soothed by the night, Awake to the cold As fear finds it's plight. Bathing in tortures... Devoid of what's right... Love seeks to indulge With gruesome delight. In darkness it stirs Beyond the day's light, What decadent pleasures Await love tonight. Fadedspirit 8/31/2008 |
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Happy Birthday mteagle31
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Happy birthday my friend and may your wishes come true.
I had to cancel the order of birthday candles from A.C.M.E. I told em you were a dynamite guy and they thought they'd send you the appropriate candles. I'm sure we'd all like ya to stay in one piece.....lol. |
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Topic:
Programmed
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Aww, thanks flame1cutie.
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Justified
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Thanks pkd. I'm glad you liked it.
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Programmed
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Programmed
Bound by books of knowledge, Programmed to know what's right. Never question masters For they lead your life. Fall into the spot Made just right for you... Conform your present thinking, Absent minds will do. Your faith is taught by scholars Whose knowledge sets you free... Obedience duly noted... Why search when there's no need? Your life sustained in absolutes And facts are all concrete, You live a daily life And follow your routine. Curse the rogues as outcasts, Their knowledge isn't right. Convert them to your mindset And shed on them your light. You see their tortured spirit, You hear their words of shame, You never see their heart Because it's not the same. You only want what's best, At least what you've been taught, There are no mere illusions Within your concrete heart. Fadedspirit 8/30/2008 |
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Justified
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Justified
You set my heart on fire And you left me here to die... You thought you'd be the wiser If you left me wonder why. It's true my heart is broken, Just like many times before. It never really mended But it never felt this sore. You spoke your words of eloquence And touched my forbidden mind, You even mended one old heartache. Though I never even cried. My dear you spoke of love, That deceptive little imp. You forgot the many meanings Though you kept well hid. You thought I never noticed, I never saw your eyes. You never held my hand And I now know why. You get angry with your life You say it bends and twists Nothing's ever fair You always have to win. Remember how you left me Please do forget the pain Because karma is the force That's driving you insane. Fadedspirit 8/29/2008 |
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An idea for Unfinsihed words
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The flames of solitude
Lapping at my soul, Displaced memory Reflected In blackened pool... Tick tock Tick tock... A flash of light As rain drops... Beasties roam As midnight stops... Tick tock Tick tock... |
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Death's Death Bed
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Makes me wanna hug my pillow and fade silently into the night. excellent write.
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A good night?
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Hauntingly pleasant and calming. Nice write!
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Ahh now, if that isn't a perfect tribute I don't know what one is.
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creep
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Excellent. A definate addition to the list of my favorites. I love the sensuality and dual meaning. (insert black rose icon)
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Something different
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Thanks pkd.
![]() Thanks s1owhand, glad you liked it. ![]() Thanks flame1cutie. ![]() Thanks DKW, I'm glad you like it. ![]() Awww, thanks LAMom. Maybe I'm trying to hard. ![]() ![]() |
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Something different
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I don't have a title for this one yet, it's a work in progress.
I thought I'd toss it out there to see what happens, since I've developed a block. Teardrops fall From a wretched, weeping soul As light steps away From a heart decayed and dim. Faint steps echo As death seeps on by, Leaving darkened shadow For his tears Have long run dry. Unkind words, Like a dagger makes the wound With salted disregard, Critics make their move. A bitter anger tasted Within this wretched soul, A darker form emerges As judgements take their toll. Echoes from the past Resound in darkened silence, While laughter is replaced By wishes Much too violent. Many wish to scoff At what they may behold And others lay their blame With what's refused to know. What right have we to judge Without due regard And spew our unkind words That may only bring more harm? The strongest hearts are careful To hear the silent words Like angels they attend The wounds that cause our hurts. Fadedspirit (work in progress) |
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Just Thought You Should Know
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Ahh, the strength and beauty of your words and nature brings warmth to my heart.
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Reminiscing
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Thanks IndigoIllusions and 1000111010123.
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Reminiscing
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Reminiscing
Memories rush in Where idle minds play And tear wells get filled As time has it's way. You said I was strong Though you hadn't a clue, I guess all along I really fooled you. The friends that I had Passed like seasons in time. I collected their memories And walked my own line. I set out to conquer The dreams that I had And lived them I did But I wasn't so glad. I thought I was strong But I hadn't a clue, What made me so rich Was being with you. Your passing was tough And it almost killed me, But lived life for you And thought I was free. I set out to keep Your memory alive, Not knowing the pain I carried inside. I slid down my rope And fell off the end, I cried out for help But help was not sent. Alone in the muck And despair in this life, I learned the hard lessons And took them in stride. It's been now so long Since that journey began, My life's not the same And you should really be glad. I went from a world Where I lived on a lie And fell from my rope Where I lost my great pride. I learned to forgive As I shed many a tear, Looked into the face Of what I had feared. I learned to let go As I lost what I had, Now a new journey's afoot With a promise to grab. Fadedspirit 8/26/2008 |
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Dream Of Echoes
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Awww,Thanks LAMom...That means a lot to me.
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Haunting Me
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Very nice. Like a good song, this one speaks to the heart.
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