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Topic: Just Thought You Should Know
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Wed 08/27/08 10:59 AM
Edited by pkd1220 on Wed 08/27/08 11:00 AM
A month has passed
Since your simple declaration
Of I'm not marrying you
Fell so easily from your lips
Lips I kissed, with desire
While words of forever
Together, always, I promise
Fell just as easily days before

I wanted to tell you that
I went on our honeymoon
Alone, but at peace, truly
You missed an eagle flying overhead
Beautiful red rock mountains
The bluest sky, the biggest
Vistas of possibility and dreams
Of what can be and will
As I hiked higher toward the clouds
Wonderous of all that
Feels so close as I
Reach out my hand
And have it all

I enjoyed my son's life
Saw his happiness within
How assured he was and
Wished you lived your life
With the ease he's achieved

I have beautiful photos that
Put a smile on my face
And I did get my picture
Taken in my dress
And I must say they
Turned out lovely
And you would never
Know, the woman smiling back
Was recovering from some huge
Rejection and loss of love

Why...because I refuse
To dwell in what ifs or why
So I must thank you
As I rejoice in the choice
You made for me
And something positive ALWAYS
Comes from devastating loss
It's how you look at things
And from my view
I know more, my heart still feels
It beats, I'm alive and yes
Happy to be me, you see

Just thought you should know



s1owhand's photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:02 AM
beautiful pkd, welcome back happy

BobbyJ's photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:07 AM
How awful of a thing to happen to you. How beautifully you express your feelings to what happened, too. You made my eyes water up while I read. You are a beautiful person. One day you will meet a like beautiful person. Of that there is no doubt.

flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:09 AM
Much Goodness!

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Wed 08/27/08 11:11 AM
YIKES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good for you to know that from loss comes new life and opportunity. God bless you!! :heart:

myanimalcracker's photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:12 AM
Amazing write, (((pkd))). flowerforyou

SmurfyPoet292721's photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:21 AM
very beautiful

crm1068's photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:23 AM
Good on ya!

flowers

d4tc's photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:28 AM
Such a great write. bigsmile flowerforyou

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Wed 08/27/08 11:46 AM
Awww, you guys, thanks for the kind comments. I am humbled.

(((s1ow)))flowerforyou
BobbyJ - so kind of you flowerforyou
Wench - I was in your part of the country, now I know why you are so astuteflowerforyou
SKPCG thanksflowerforyou
(((animal))) your praise means alotflowerforyou
SmurfyPoet and CRM1068 glad to meet youflowerforyou flowerforyou
(((Jason))) you know I'm a fanflowerforyou




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Wed 08/27/08 11:59 AM
Welcome back ((pkd)):banana:

That was an awsome write..
So glad you enjyed Az...flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers

baby_gurl's photo
Wed 08/27/08 12:03 PM
that is a beautiful poem

AngelLight's photo
Wed 08/27/08 01:28 PM
For beautiful you flowers

Awesome write ~ your strength, courage, dignity and class shine ever so brilliantly!

:heart:

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Wed 08/27/08 02:14 PM
mteagle-look out I may be coming to your promised landdrinker drinker
baby_gurl- thanks for the comment
Angel-the calm in my storm when reading your wisdom everything becomes right:heart: :smile:

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Wed 08/27/08 02:32 PM
http://www.macjams.com/song/45744

Here sweetheart, this is a song expressing much the same as your writing. God, I hope this is possible. As long as there is life, there are possibilities. My heart hurts for you. Best.

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Wed 08/27/08 11:00 PM

http://www.macjams.com/song/45744

Here sweetheart, this is a song expressing much the same as your writing. God, I hope this is possible.

I listened to the song, thanks so muchflowerforyouflowerforyou


Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 08/28/08 01:10 AM
Ahh, the strength and beauty of your words and nature brings warmth to my heart.

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 08/28/08 07:02 AM
My dear Pam...it so good to see the positivity that came from this. I see the strength and admiration in you. You are a beautiful who deserves better and that better will come your way one day. I feel it. Email me and I will tell you about your eagle.

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Thu 08/28/08 09:03 AM
Fadedspirit- thank you so for the comment:smile: flowerforyou

Robert- always my cheerleader-thanks and the email is coming:smile: flowerforyou

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Thu 08/28/08 09:34 AM

mteagle-look out I may be coming to your promised landdrinker drinker
baby_gurl- thanks for the comment
Angel-the calm in my storm when reading your wisdom everything becomes right:heart: :smile:



:banana: We'd be glad to have here in our Wonderful state...flowers

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