Topic: An idea for Unfinsihed words
DeathsTreaty's photo
Fri 08/29/08 06:10 PM
Tick tock
Tick tock

The clock looks with a late hour
Only seconds after midnight
and its already begun..
The winds picking up and the sky turning gray in color
12:01...the feeling..
It stopped..

Tick tock
Tick tock...



I would like to see others finish this poem in someway
Im interested in what you see and how you word it ^^

dawnyhi's photo
Fri 08/29/08 06:11 PM
darkness is everywhere
but rest for me is nowhere
all i hear
that sound i can not bare

tic tock
tic tock

sara89's photo
Fri 08/29/08 06:12 PM
tick tock..
the silence seems deafening
waiting for it all
to just fade again
tick tock..
and the storm hits...
leving disaster in its wake

Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 08/30/08 01:48 AM
The flames of solitude
Lapping at my soul,
Displaced memory
Reflected
In blackened pool...

Tick tock
Tick tock...

A flash of light
As rain drops...
Beasties roam
As midnight stops...

Tick tock
Tick tock...

s1owhand's photo
Sat 08/30/08 05:21 AM
see tick tock

http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/160838

bastet126's photo
Sat 08/30/08 06:28 AM
tick is helpless without
tock