it was
just a thought
an 8-legged creature
long time childhood enemy
long spindely legs
defined the word
creep

it was just
a conversation
a thought
of pleasure
rushing past fear
pushing limits
as creep
crept up
while master
played below
could one
see past the creep
?and indulge in pleasure?
sounds erotic
perhaps even picture worthy
yet still
8 legs
singling out not even
an inch
at a time
creeping closer
p
u over velvet skin
while master
going
d
o
w
n
blindly sensing
the exquisite sensuality
invaded by haunting
taunting
teasing

it was
just a thought
of tantalizing
pleasure over fear
mind
over
matter
the breaking
the taking
all in the head
or so it seemed
suddenly stirred awake
sat straight up
to find masters mark
and poetically
placed
upon
my
chest,
where
so
softly
creep
had
crept,
a spider bite.

goodjob

Very nice!

i love everything you post

me2. She's adorable

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh My Dear,,,, I stand up and shoutttttttttttttt
Bravooooooooooooooooooooooo simply Bravoooooooooooooo

nice write

most excellent write

That was great!
Loved the spider analogy.

nice write girl

merci, gracias, gratzi, thank you!!

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Excellent. A definate addition to the list of my favorites. I love the sensuality and dual meaning. (insert black rose icon)

thank you faded, i'm honored

fear plus erocticism equals ???? snakebit!?!?! hmmm eight legs plus eight fingers times bitten divided by a biter equals RAWR!

somehow math is always involved puuuurrrrr

oh math can used to accomplish wonderful situations