Topic: Unforeseen Smokescreens
brwnkimba's photo
Sat 10/04/08 10:18 PM
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I watch twilight seize hold the desert sky and wonder if the caterpillar dreams of soaring and how high.
Freely gesture a warm smile as answers to questions come reticent and wry.
Slow fission when those intertwined no longer share the same copy written design.
Best day I ever had was the one that guided me to be the apple of her eye.
Woe the days gone past that seemed as though they’d last ever more.
I’ve known glee for short periods of time while despair is familiar as sand is to shore.
Exit the love given as it holds no hard feelings for being abandoned prematurely. We search for a nexus towards a new beginning no matter how unsure the path may be.
Guidance can be the answer we seek or the barrier holding us at bay.
Mind this course carefully as many unforeseen smokescreens can cloud your way.
Tomorrow forever brings you closer to another day and only He knows what it offers.
As time heals and helps you deal with these wicked raging troubled waters.
With out thirst hard to imagine how to quench what we truly desire.
How would we know about the burn if there was no consequence to touching fire?
Nebulous as I wane further below yet marvel at the path of dissention.
Bravo to you, I toast as you’re granted wings to fly away with no restrictions.




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Sat 10/04/08 10:22 PM
OMG.......WOWflowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers
This is AWESOME...thank you

LAMom's photo
Sat 10/04/08 10:22 PM
Bravo to you my dear your soul speaks heavily

flowerforyou

Psssssttttttttt I have for the past two weekends been up in Alameda/Oakland area what an amazing city it is,,,

Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 10/04/08 10:27 PM
Excellent write. drinker

brwnkimba's photo
Sat 10/04/08 10:39 PM
Right on FadedSpirit:thumbsup:
LaMom You gotta holler next time you're in my neck o' the woodswaving

Hey MisKim you are TOO SWEETsmooched

LAMom's photo
Sat 10/04/08 10:42 PM
I will,,,

Again Happy Belated Day of Birth flowers

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 10/04/08 10:47 PM
Smokescreens will clear and trouble waters will settle look towards the stars and let the heavens guide your way. Good write as always.bigsmile

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Sat 10/04/08 11:15 PM
Is it in the lack of thinking, that the moth nears the flame.
Is it's on self endurance to warm, the real blame.
We think of love and seem to float.
Then small words start to rock the boat.
Look me in the eye, and tell me why I try.
Never to have your heart, yet see you cry.
Only wanting to feel peace in my heart.
This leaving was shattered at its first start.

Good write bro, and Hey,,you have some NICE friends,..But I believe ya might already know that, Wink.drinker

brwnkimba's photo
Sun 10/05/08 08:49 AM
TXSGAL & iam4u Blessings on this glorious Sunday Morn.


Yes Brotha iam4u :wink: VERY NICE

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sun 10/05/08 09:10 AM
Well done......yup, I'm likin this.

brwnkimba's photo
Sun 10/05/08 06:48 PM
Hey there Differentkindofwench, Thank you and I glad you likes:tongue:

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Sun 10/05/08 06:56 PM
(standing ovation):thumbsup: very exellent write my friend!!:heart:

brwnkimba's photo
Mon 10/06/08 06:47 AM
You are so welcome and thank you for taking time to holler@me. Hope you get out soon!!shocked

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Mon 10/06/08 08:19 AM
so much wisdom written in all you write...flowerforyou flowerforyou

brwnkimba's photo
Mon 10/06/08 08:10 PM
It is truly a welcomed labor of LOVE that drives this silly man from morning till the wee hours of night pkd1220.

By the way you LOOK MARVELOUS DARLINGblushing


Thank you too!!!

kc0003's photo
Mon 10/06/08 08:15 PM
as always, done with great vision

:thumbsup:

BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 10/07/08 02:54 AM
Salutations Kimba, fantastic journey of words,twists and turns.Your poetry emulates life in it's truest sense Great work!

Noden's photo
Tue 10/07/08 08:52 AM
Okay, I missed your b-day

Happy Birthday to you,
happy birthday to you,
happy birthday dear Kimba
happy birthday to YOU!

Now for this well seasoned poem of your's,
I say excellent work my dear, and sat and
read through the paramount, then composed
myself to tell you that I have reached the
climatic inevitable, of saying I love it.

Thanks ((((Kimba))))waving :thumbsup:

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Tue 10/07/08 05:36 PM

It is truly a welcomed labor of LOVE that drives this silly man from morning till the wee hours of night pkd1220.

By the way you LOOK MARVELOUS DARLINGblushing


Thank you too!!!


In the words of Billy Crystal-right back at you blushing waving

brwnkimba's photo
Mon 10/13/08 12:08 PM
Sorry for taming so long but my computer has been on the fritz...

Thank you for the Happy B-Day song Noden and I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem. BonnyMiss you are my shining star of elegance grace an BEAUTY!!!

kcOOO3 I am very grateful for the time you took to read and respond to my ramblings. YOU ROCK HEAVILY!!!