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His Bow
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Very nice piece here Sharris, makes me wonder if we are all just instruments waitin to be played.
 
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"Cold Good-Bye"
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[bgeorge] Thanks for reading, and yes...It can take a long while sometimes.
[jad59] Hey there, dont think Ive seen you before, thatnks for reading
[MzEm] There's my girl!! Thank you for the comments, Ive been so busy with school and other things I havent got on here in a while. Good to see ya    
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Egg Salad
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I couldn't figure out how to incorporate the mayonnaise, so I just dumped it in like ya do with egg salad Lovely to see you, BTW.
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"Life of Ease"
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Well done!
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 WOW, I havent been in here in a while...very interseting topic. I would have to just label myself "atheist"
the Latin is really easy here too!!: a = against, negation, absent theos= god, gods, religion Sure this has been modified throughout the centuries, but the meaing is still the same to me. As for as agnostic, here you believe that there is some 'god' or whatever defintion you want to attach, but you can never understand or know this entity, you cant prove it exists. Soft and Firm, Weak and Strong.....whatta riot 
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Topic:
"Cold Good-Bye"
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razor scars
I'm getting there I know about blood silk moths create and eat And they said He died of Natural Causes Suicide is Natural only in The Frozen Mind I don't know what else do you want??? work, snip work, snip how long has it been since I severed your thread how long how long how long how long |
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Friend, Lover, Wife, Life
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Though Ive never had this kind of life (or ever will) described here, I can see the joy and pain in it. Great Job {K}
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Egg Salad
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Egg Salad The smooth facade Of the hardened shell Enabling all to slide off Until In the solitude Of your kitchen, You crack and crumble. Peeling away the shell Revealing skin Pockmarked and naked. You huddle in your bowl of regret. Emotions churning and ripping As you slice and dice through the replay of your day. Adding salt to the wounds And peppering your soul With thoughts of should haves. This won’t do. You have to hold it together. Mayonnaise your malaise. Sandwiched between Home cooked bouts of belief In the egg salad of life. THIS IS PERFECT!!! LOVE the 'mayonnaise your malaise" line, loved the whole thing, great job   
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Is Love Wrong?..by my Mary
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Such a great piece,
such vivid dreams & memories, such desires..... |
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Topic:
"Life of Ease"
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[meandu2] Thank you!
[kc003] Hey, long time no see  Thanks for reading and your thoughts, always welcome.
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"Playgirl"....LadyTron
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NoMoreYesNoMoreWhy
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Now you did it it agian, It's unfair to pretend After I let you in, friend for my sorrow! Im so sick of you now, no truth to be said You know that your wrong, your sick in the head for the love of your hate and the evil you live the wrong is done you can never forgive No more yes no more why No more yes no more why you are prostitution! using your mind causing chaos running your mouth I hear you whine There you go agian just full of sin soul less curse and the wicked burn No more yes no more why No more yes no more why you are prostitution! Not knowing the crime and allways your high Living the the life but not afriad to die I hear all of your lies as if the truth had spoke lies that you speak deserve a choke to your throat No more yes no more why you are prostitution! My laughter is for the tone, love it!! The last stanza is great as well as its' last two lines, great job here
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fall in to to the i
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I enjoyed this, really like the style used
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"Crumble"
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emoticons are so much fun, leaving mixed messages with all their best intentions. Haha, I enjoyed the write, welcome to the site.
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anorexic sacrament
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in a sense your memory is happier than any of those makeup smiles and any of those powder kisses and any of those summer dreams your image alone escaped the shade of time a promise that was only mine to break to keep and never offer up this life was never yours to throw away and in a way that memory is happy in being simply that, a silent static in never getting up or moving on in ode to all the conquests that you lost within one endless day i could have shown you within one battered grin you too could see death is both the cost and price of living that life, alone, may never set you free i would have woken up, for nothing else to watch your modest footsteps through the mud the same steps i have traced back ever since they lead me nowhere, though i have a path
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Topic:
"Life of Ease"
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I really dig this piece. Great title, very interesting. The flow works very well and the imagery was spot-on. Really enjoyed it.
Havent seen you around, so welcome to the site and the Poetry forum
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Topic:
"Life of Ease"
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wow!! excellent writing!! Thank You for the compliment, I appreciate it
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Topic:
"Life of Ease"
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there's a river!
and snakes gliding in the grass! trees, so large, so small sway along with the breeze "Where did you go!?", screams the rest of the scene there's a river! and tire tracks in the grass! trees, not many, not at all choked by hybrid crops swaying in the breeze "Where'd you go?", dreams the rest of the scene there's a river! Um...Hey! What happened to the grass? And...ummm....that's not all! I only see pavement, there should be trees swaying gently along, singing with the breeze But now I see, the origins of a life of ease..... "We won't bother with that scene." there's all this sh** in the river! trotting sluggishly under an overpass a cartoon tree painted on a building side look around for the ground, it can't hide burned weeds that sway with the breeze "What's goin' on with this scene?" Hey...um....where's the river?! and the overpass, it's all crumbled, lying in ash Many of the buildings stand, many not at all And here I see, a tatterted magazine flutters in the breeze glaring a picture of long forgotten trees "What the hell happened to the scene?!" |
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Topic:
Mingle Poem!!!
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I came to mingle Cause I was single ..and looking for some fun. I was bored My life was torn I was about to quit 'n run. Then on the forum A serum to my boredom I began to bask in the sun. Now with each smile I go the extra mile Friends that can never be undone. Enjoy the moment; forget the past Memories like these always last Where laughs roll in by the ton. I love this place mingle Although I’m still single I’m having just way too much fun!
Im just goofing, nice poem and welcome to the site
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Topic:
"Almost Over"
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There is much power in your writing young Jedi
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh yes Indeed
Thank You LA
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