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in a sense your memory is happier
than any of those makeup smiles and any of those powder kisses and any of those summer dreams your image alone escaped the shade of time a promise that was only mine to break to keep and never offer up this life was never yours to throw away and in a way that memory is happy in being simply that, a silent static in never getting up or moving on in ode to all the conquests that you lost within one endless day i could have shown you within one battered grin you too could see death is both the cost and price of living that life, alone, may never set you free i would have woken up, for nothing else to watch your modest footsteps through the mud the same steps i have traced back ever since they lead me nowhere, though i have a path |
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great writing!!
welcome to mingle!! |
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hi and welcome
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Edited by
plastic_pancakes
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Mon 10/19/09 11:40 PM
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great writing!! welcome to mingle!! Wow, thanks. Thank you for the welcome. |
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Great write.
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Great write. Gee, thank you. This supportive environment might make me feel too happy to write poetry. Joking, of course. |
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hi and welcome Hello and thank you for the welcome. |
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Great write. Gee, thank you. This supportive environment might make me feel too happy to write poetry. Joking, of course. You're welcome. I'm the same way actually, I have to be miserable to write poetry, glad to know I'm not the only one. |
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very creative title and such a ficticious world we live in trying to fit an image that hath been set before us, I enjoyed the emotion in this and the hope the writer provides to those in need, sadly few will grasp the extended hand.
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in a sense your memory is happier than any of those makeup smiles and any of those powder kisses and any of those summer dreams your image alone escaped the shade of time a promise that was only mine to break to keep and never offer up this life was never yours to throw away and in a way that memory is happy in being simply that, a silent static in never getting up or moving on in ode to all the conquests that you lost within one endless day i could have shown you within one battered grin you too could see death is both the cost and price of living that life, alone, may never set you free i would have woken up, for nothing else to watch your modest footsteps through the mud the same steps i have traced back ever since they lead me nowhere, though i have a path |
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nicely done
adds a different and welcomed voice to our little corner of the world. |
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