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Sweetness
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This is like a sugar-bomb Sharris , I really liked it.
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Topic:
harmony
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Harmony is a transitive state, grab it while you can. Nice write here!
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Topic:
Alone
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Alone... I'm alone again. Loneliness seems like it's my only friend. & Time... time is all that I own and I spend my time being here all alone Since you've gone away from me. Silence... silence all that I hear. And darkness seems darker now you're not here And nothing... nothing makes sense anymore And nothing is just what I deserve...I suppose. Since you've gone away from me. Break out of this coil, you're really not alone |
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Topic:
When you were mine
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What, tell me what are you feeling As you lay there breathing Breath... do memories keep Flashing through your mind I watch you...watch you as you lay there breathing Are you dreaming...am i dreaming Cuz you're not there You never were never here I long to hear oh long to hear Your steady breathing as you lay near Once again just one more time Our breathing in tume with time Way back when..... When you were mine |
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Topic:
"Shadow of a Sonnet"
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wowee! I missed you and I was only gone for awhile ... |
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Topic:
The Music
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Totally caught in this moment, music is so fleeting until you press rewind Great time here MzEm.
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Topic:
"Shadow of a Sonnet"
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[Ainjel] Thank you, glad you liked it
[different] |
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Topic:
"Shadow of a Sonnet"
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Thanks Mirror
Thanks MzEm...I tried |
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Topic:
"Shadow of a Sonnet"
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Why didn't you come to my death?
Didn't you want to stoop, listen for the last beat? You would've loved to make the call, have me carted away and carved up like meat. Come hold a mirror, see and forever hold my last breath. To think that after, you would go through my things, exclaiming "What a damned mess!!" My plot, the one I'd always dreamt about, will it be kept all tidy and neat? Death, however, won't do a thing to stop you from occupying MY favorite seat. Why would I ever imagine anything less? Didn't you know?, I'm still around, clanking my banal chains You have to know, since you've rummaged through every stage of MY life. Come to me, I'm still around, wandering the forlorn mists... To be perfectly honest, I'm trying not to place any blame, My only goal is to escape, escape this ever-present strife.... Death,however, won't allow me to see if I'm really all that missed. |
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Topic:
"Dog Food"
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Gotta watchout for those infra red beams! Ohhhhhh yes those Beamssssssssss Loving this Mr Fusion That's very funny Fusion...good write hun. |
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Topic:
Mindful Crop Rotation
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Yo different, this one's great...so many images of a 'clogged' self, a rebirth through all the bulls***
As a writer, As a gardener, |
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Topic:
"Dog Food"
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Gotta watchout for those infra red beams! Ohhhhhh yes those Beamssssssssss Loving this Mr Fusion |
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Topic:
Where You Look
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Why you peeking at me sharris? I feel like a field mouse being stalked, nice write
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Topic:
Distinct Specifications
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What makes A pond Different from a lake? What makes A worm Different from a snake? What makes A pie Different from a cake? What makes A hoe Different from a rake? What makes A choice Difficult to make? |
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Topic:
Inside The Space ~
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Very nice feelings here angel, I feel the hope of love seeping into me....and it's not bad at all
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Topic:
yes its odd, but interesting
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i never even imagined writing something like this but it ended happening. im sorry if its offending it kinda just turned out sexist. but please leave your opinion. Midnight Thoughts Drowning in the blue sea succumbing to the deep darkness as I float ever downward. The pain is holding my bones and crushing my lungs. The cold embrace feels ever warmer. I float ever downwards. The depth consumes my eyes. All I can see now are the dancing lights and the teeth waiting to bite into my senseless carcass and the large eyes waiting to exscind my poor body. A blurry of motion passes overhead. Another exhibition of beautiful neon colors. Just another creature seeking my succulent flesh. My heart beats slower. Stop hunting me. I will die soon enough. And death begins. I float ever downwards. This also reminds me of the abyssal creatures in our oceans. The incredible pressures that the creatures live in, the absolute darkness, the flashes of light that are used as communication and lure. Odd, no...intersting? YES |
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Topic:
"Dog Food"
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Thx Mirror, MzEm and Earthy for reading
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Topic:
"Dog Food"
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Take it:
" 'I've never worn a leash, just like my Master.' " Yeah, it'll put something on you, Put you one over You'll think in the viciinty of a Vapid Cloud and at that Time, You'll know what's All yours and what's all mines. life lived perfect, sunbeams almost Every Single Day. Just sit around or go out and play Draw all to a good NAME It's that important, to not let it slip by.... cuz maybe that's the only reason Why you'll lie. Life Lived So, So Perfect And I'm not eventhere yet I'm not so sure Living a Life, So F***ing Perfect Will a Sunbeam invade me? Is that all to Expect? |
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Topic:
"Fusion's Little HATE Poem"
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Thanks guys, but no one pissed me of here, just trying to do the opposite of my little love poem I wrote a few days ago. I apperciate the sentiments though!
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Topic:
Time Well Spent-Worth It All
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Very Nice MzEm.....sometimes waiting is really worth it
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