When all the world
tells you all your
life has been a joke,
stand there and Sing about
how you made
such a difference
When all you ever
wanted to be was
a little whore
that's afraid of burning,
burning pain between
you legs
while you lay writhing
in your bed
with all your dreams
that never ever made
it past the sheets
that cover what's really
goin on down there,
What's growin down there....
....but you know,
You know what
it won't really matter
in a day or two
might make it all
perfect for someone
who predicts the weather
in another's actions
and eyes,
eyes that look over what
they could've been....
And that's alot see
So do, do try
to achieve.

Brilliant

"...might make it all
perfect for someone
who predicts the weather
in another's actions
and eyes,
eyes that look over what
they could've been....
And that's alot see
So do, do try
to achieve."


great piece...strong effort here

[smiless] Thanky you Brother

[kc003] Glad you enjoyed this, thank you

Thanks for reading

There is much power in your writing young Jedi

HAHA Thank You Master, I try

Nice job, very good work.

Thank you friend, now get back to those books LOL

Oh why did you have to bring that up LOL but you are right back to the books....

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh yes Indeed

Thank You LA