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Your Angel
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Pretty spicy here Tammy
 Great write 
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"death by confusion"
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i love life and life loves me, i'm as happy as can be, a happier man nowhere exists, i think i'll go and slash my wrist. longshire short and sweet, love it
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treespeak
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Let Go
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Very nice write
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"A Thoughtfull Gift"
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Thanks pkh and maleah
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"A Thoughtfull Gift"
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Hahaha Loved it!!! Now gimme the ****ing magazine!!!!
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"A Thoughtfull Gift"
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Thanks for reading all
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"A Thoughtfull Gift"
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He's waiting for you....
Page 10. the magazine cover invited taunted and then displeased you dreaming of a better christmas when the only present You want is flesh.... glancing groping at their narrow eyes telling you to chop away your only present is flying in pieces a rejection you cannot bear a commitment you suddenly can't make the hatchet throbbing in your beating hands tearing through his pleading eyes. If you don't like him, turn to page 17. |
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There is hope.
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I sat and thought how could I inspire? my a$$ is fat, Ive got a spare tire. I have no cash to spend on crap. There is noone to which I can rap. The childs away at school. The men dont think just drool. The ex is suicidal... Hm.. life isnt so bad afterall.  AWESOME!!
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"Shadow of a Sonnet"
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Brilliant
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"Shadow of a Sonnet"
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 Good write {{{fusion}}} and blush some more
cause you would be missed... Thanks msteddy!
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"Shadow of a Sonnet"
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Deeply touching,,, and yes Darlin you would be missed 
thanks for reading!
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once again please leave your opinion or bring about a discourse Good Bye Blue Skies The wind blows hard through the thick jacket of a cold wanderer. Meandering all over the snowy wastelands of nothingness. He takes a drag of his cigarette. It’s cold outside. The jacket comes off letting blankets of pure white snow cover the wild mind of a freezing body. Who can keep warm in a block of ice? He takes another drag. Sitting back into a chair comfortable enough to relax in and cold enough to die in. you can only trudge so far in the crystal white ice. The end could be near enough to end all endings. But can it all very well end like this. She takes a drag of his cigarette. The world is much warmer in pairs no matter how cold we all get. He takes the last drag. A cigarette is just the same. Only warm as long as it is in the hands of another.
Let's try again with this one: I quit smoking 2 weeks ago, and I feel jsut as warm as ever
But that's not the meaning here, is it? "Goodbye Blue Skies"....doesn't bode well for a happy ending, so where does this end for you? Sunshadow or Darklight? |
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Here's mine, not really a saying but a quote:
"Today's idealistic battlelines and frontiers are tomarrows shopping malls and supermarkets. Time and Banality strike the hardest blows." From William S. Burroughs What it means to me: Live it up while you can, because all your ideals and desires will be replaced with dust one day. |
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From Dusk To Dark
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From Dust to Dark Pens bleed from punctured souls ghastly memories echo previous haunts graveyards littered with decayed sins as guilt fertilizes darkened soil epitaph's shout of heroism clamoring cliche's of "rest in peace" while rebelious worlds battle endlessly which side of thy throne have you gone Kings and Queens are beheaded if only for a Jesters amusement and the meek shall inherit so much but what is left of humanity thou soweth with pine needles with pride upon scarred arms tattooed bodily designs will signify thy foolishness millions upon millions I beseech thee to claim ownership of love even poison pitted serpent's smile for they know peace lies in poverty greedily we brag and boast raising glass to silver spoon how much of your belongings will fit inside your tomb...  I like how you've used certain "archaic" words here: thee, thou, thy, etc. Gives it a nice old feeling. Post some more and Welcome to the Poetry forum!!
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"Forever Lost" is my fave, good job
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Warm Salt
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I'm not sure if this is one of those that is for real or just your creativity soaring?
Great job buddy, nonetheless
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Grief's Hail
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Hey different, you really got it down here with the grieving process, all the emotional and physical, great BLEEPING job!!!
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Wish On
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Wish On Kimberly Ann 09/16/09 I wish love didn’t know any bounds No ties of size or looks or occupation No degree of fear or failure I wish love made itself known— Screaming, yelling, drowning in the noise… The sweet, pleasant melody of life. I wish love opened its arms and grabbed me, Reassuring me that it’s genuine and pure— Alive and breathing new life into me. Welcoming me with open arms. Closing tightly around me. Wanting me safe. Allowing me to breathe. Keeping me alive.  I wish too...maybe one day? Very nice write
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Very interesting and beautifull write angellight, I see from reading all the comments that you can channel. Are the messages always this nice or are there other darker 'tomes' out there that contact you?
Email me and let me know 
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