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Topic: Warm Salt
kc0003's photo
Sun 09/13/09 06:01 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Sun 09/13/09 06:20 PM
I bet you thought I’d catch you

Like so many times before
And I tried
I really did

But you kept falling
And falling
And falling
So many times...so many ways

I begged you, pleaded...please
Please stop!

But, it called and once again you answered…
looking at me through glazed eyes,
sweat and blood
I pray, when she gets older...she forgets seeing you like that

I can’t believe you’d forsake us so easily...



You missed the first day of school today.
She was so brave
As she entered the door and looked back at me all I could see...
was you

She needed you there…and tonight,
she asked if she could-
go sleep with mommy....... “under the ground”

Just like so many times before
I am left to clean up your mess

I’m trying, love
I really am

God, I hate the flavor of
her tears


kc09



s1owhand's photo
Sun 09/13/09 06:05 PM
flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 09/13/09 06:11 PM
tears sad, but lovely

kc0003's photo
Sun 09/13/09 06:22 PM
thank you both

drinker


:heart:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 09/13/09 08:25 PM
:cry: :heart: flowers

kc0003's photo
Sun 09/13/09 09:28 PM
thanks
i was bored with a thought


flowerforyou flowerforyou

mle0626's photo
Sun 09/13/09 09:29 PM
reminds me of my daughter's dad mad

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 09/14/09 10:18 AM
:cry: very heartfelt.........flowerforyou

mig25's photo
Mon 09/14/09 10:37 AM
This is simply beautiful. Touching. Sorrowful.

trgirl's photo
Mon 09/14/09 10:48 AM
tears

kc0003's photo
Mon 09/14/09 01:09 PM
mle flowerforyou

tx flowerforyou

thank you...

kc0003's photo
Mon 09/14/09 01:11 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Mon 09/14/09 01:12 PM
mig25 thank you sir...drinker



trgirl...thank you for taking the time to post...flowers

MzEm's photo
Mon 09/14/09 04:26 PM
Sadly wonderful.

LightVoice's photo
Tue 09/15/09 06:20 AM
:cry: brokenheart tears

beautiful....... profound....... and damn near broke my heart. flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 09/15/09 06:53 PM
Very Moving ( K )

:cry: flowers

kc0003's photo
Tue 09/15/09 08:37 PM
awwww... three lovely ladies

thank you each for sharing your time..


:heart:

no photo
Wed 09/16/09 12:32 AM
sad sad sad

:cry:

no photo
Tue 09/22/09 10:59 PM
very emotional piece

"She needed you there…and tonight,
she asked if she could-
go sleep with mommy....... “under the ground”..."

gut-wrenching...really...


drinker


Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 09/23/09 06:11 AM

very emotional piece

"She needed you there…and tonight,
she asked if she could-
go sleep with mommy....... “under the ground”..."

gut-wrenching...really...


drinker


Actually, Kace, there's a topic for ya, a 5-8 year old child's view of death. The confusion with all the phrases used that are easily misunderstood and the foreign concept. How the child's understanding progresses is up to you.

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 09/23/09 11:29 PM
oh geez ... next time post a disclaimer to grab tissue before reading please! Wow ... :cry: :heart:

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