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Edited by
kc0003
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I bet you thought I’d catch you
Like so many times before And I tried I really did But you kept falling And falling And falling So many times...so many ways I begged you, pleaded...please Please stop! But, it called and once again you answered… looking at me through glazed eyes, sweat and blood I pray, when she gets older...she forgets seeing you like that I can’t believe you’d forsake us so easily... You missed the first day of school today. She was so brave As she entered the door and looked back at me all I could see... was you She needed you there…and tonight, she asked if she could- go sleep with mommy....... “under the ground” Just like so many times before I am left to clean up your mess I’m trying, love I really am God, I hate the flavor of her tears kc09 |
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sad, but lovely
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thank you both
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thanks
i was bored with a thought |
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reminds me of my daughter's dad
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very heartfelt.........
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This is simply beautiful. Touching. Sorrowful.
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mle
tx thank you... |
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Edited by
kc0003
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Mon 09/14/09 01:12 PM
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mig25 thank you sir...
trgirl...thank you for taking the time to post... |
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Sadly wonderful.
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beautiful....... profound....... and damn near broke my heart. |
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Very Moving ( K )
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awwww... three lovely ladies
thank you each for sharing your time.. |
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sad sad sad
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very emotional piece
"She needed you there…and tonight, she asked if she could- go sleep with mommy....... “under the ground”..." gut-wrenching...really... |
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very emotional piece "She needed you there…and tonight, she asked if she could- go sleep with mommy....... “under the ground”..." gut-wrenching...really... |
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oh geez ... next time post a disclaimer to grab tissue before reading please! Wow ...
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