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Love's Madness Parody
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Lovin' this DKW...
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You have a nice flow...I'm diggin' it...
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Accumulated Interest
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I love all the way do "you" unique and lovely...
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Love Set Free
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You are setting a standard ma_t, that all my future male friends to come up to! Well done, and DKW you go gurl...
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Burnt Embers
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Nice write and welcome....
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Rising and Falling
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Wonderful write... to the rollercoaster of life...
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My Dream Of A Man...
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Very nicely done...
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Free To Fly Far And Beyond
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Beautiful...
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The Mother Load
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Have I told ya lately, Jess, I so love the way you think? No, Well, I'm-a-tellin' ya nowwwww TxsLily, I soo wanna call you a show off! I enjoy the heck out of you! Mornin', MzEm -- Thanks and would you like some coffee? Oh yes I could you a pot or two, first day of school and I am about done in! Thanks for pick me up.... |
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The Mother Load
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Unrehearsed ~
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Love this Lady J, it is so soft and smooth.
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how u set me free
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"My Retribution...."
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Do I dare to dream today...? Do I dare as I rattle the bars of this insipid "so-called cage"...: Just a few hours ago dirty water had started to trickle Just a few hours ago I was given a choice: "The Cage or The Sickle" -"You must pay for your crimes..." is the theme involved- You must know I kept my head, but now I'm covered in a stinging balm The crowd started to thicken, all eager for the screams The crowd had faces I knew, "Wanna trade places?", "In your dreams!" There was a "retribution infection" in almost everyone, Their infection grew, a retribution timed to the setting sun -"It's all a little harmless fun, ya see? It's just a bit of fun so I'll feel better about what you did to me"- The muscles twitch & spasm as the balm seeps further in, and chants & screams greet the evenin'... ...and as I see the last rays of sunlight, the cage slowly lowers into a water filled pit & me into fright Something in the water made the balm sting even more "Something tells me I should've carefully weighed my choices before." Far into the night heads rolled off the chopping blocks, Far into the night,arms & legs struggled against keyless locks But let's get back to me, thrashing in my cage, water up to my neck But little did I know of the cruel gifts retribution can send(?) All the victims & their families came to taunt the accused, All the while I beared their darting feet, but something worse ensued For the victims my death would be a special treat For the labs had designed aquians that loved the taste of meat With "Die, you bastard", they removed the lids & emptied containers -"With every bite he felt, "The End" was closer, no disclaimer.- And through all the screams, retribution just about settled its case And when they stopped, all the little simians were cleansed of rage. -"The sun has set many times on 'Retributiion Hill', it's a sight... The bones struggle in the locks, all the skulls look to the light.- Wow, diggin' this write...well done. |
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“Mask”
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Nicely done. I am not sure why people tend to hide, maybe they don't like who they really are and so they re-creat themselves on-line into something they think will be better than the person they are. Unfortunatly you can't keep your true self hidden, it will come out one way or another.
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i thank god she was the one
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This is a super write...Lovely work.
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"IMAGE"
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Wow man, that is rightous joint right there. I sat back and inhaled your smoke and let it enter my brain with out a filter....
Okay I been in too many poetry houses... Good work.... |
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Questions?
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The Inviting Kiss (rev)
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Okay I need a nap and a smoke (I quit years ago) to bring me back down....Whew that was smokin' HOT
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Reactive Compound
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Well done DKW...
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Marys Addiction
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How sad. Addiction is a cruel master...Nice piece
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