Topic: The Inviting Kiss (rev) | |
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kc0003
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Sun 08/23/09 01:03 AM
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You invite me with a kiss
A long deep slow invitation to join you in a symphony of affection We retreat as love the conductor summons the orchestra Blankets cast aside Like the curtains of a great music hall Pillows and clothes line up around us as if an audience preparing for the performance The lights go down The room quiets as the players ready The only sounds to be heard are the light moans of the woodwinds deepening breaths We kiss as hands tenderly tune familiar instruments Heartbeats quicken and get louder like the bass drums building in the background Kissing your soft skin around your neck and down to your stomach Missing nothing in between Light scents fill the air Matched by the conductors calling for the strings to join in the movement Your hands find my hair and gently lead the melody Lower still My tongue lightly and slowly licks and flicks through the secret garden begging your flower to unfold in the sunlight that is my desire Your breathing erratic now mixed with soft sighs and deep moans One hand pushing against the headboard the other pulling my head to you Like opposing forces and neither will withdraw The orchestra louder and louder by order of the conductor Trying to keep up with your cries You arch your back as the wave of the first chorus works its way to your wanting shore Building and building until it peeks and comes crashing down like the sound of a million pieces of glass hitting the stage and bouncing around in decreasing decibel The maestro is pleased You quiver with each echo rebounding through the hall The sound of the harps dance in the night, picking stars from the heavens and dangling them in front of you Their light reflects in your eyes and I have never seen you more beautiful You pull me to you and the piano coxes the entrance of the sonnet Slowly we move together in perfect harmony We are one So sweet, so expressive, so beautiful Our souls come together where the flesh ends Every breath you take gives me life My heart circulates for two Our eyes lock half closed Ecstasy Half open Pleasure We stare long and true As our bodies dance to the waltz filling the night air Nothing matters at this moment Except for the moment I want to share this with you forever You feel the vibrations of the distant storm But, you are not ready And as the composer intended On the perfect down beat The conductor turns the page and the arrangement changes You take first chair As I sit on the stage looking up to the wonder of you Riding me into a short but powerful solo You lift me to your glistening breast Pleasure and pain walk together and neither gets the night off With the rhythm section holding strong My mouth finds you erect And I bite down Releasing my grasp as the delight turns to ache The horns like your fingernails dig deep into my back As I reach behind you and pull your hair Tilting your head to one side The violins mimic your screams Loves arms are raising and sweeping, begging the company to hold each note, as if it were the last Trying to draw every ounce of energy from each exquisite tone that escapes your parted lips The whirlwind of this piece has the audience silently entranced We roll over as before Twisting and turning Legs fighting for leverage Never stopping Oblivious to all that surrounds us All but the passion that has engulfed the concerto There are no children present And words not often spoken drive the command performance **** me **** me you urge unto me Pulling me deeper Begging me not to stop Squeezing me with all of your might The crescendo building ever closer Our pace increases Feverishly we continue Moaning and crying out Trying not to reach the end Though we both know we need to The slide of the winds in and out The bows from the strings rising and falling The conductor’s arms Flailing about, commanding everyone to stay in time Building to a deafening climax The drums beating harder and harder Pounding out the last of the composition Faster and faster the opus moves Finally ending with the piercing sound of two nearly simultaneous earsplitting determined roars of thunder The tiny drops of sweat rain over us And give life to what we share And for just a instant Silence prevails... The conductor raises her hands to her lips and blows a kiss to the company Opening loves arms as if to embrace us for all eternity Then bows in thanks to the players who just gave their all The hum of our breathing subsiding As the reverberation of the now faint ending slips away I collapse and melt into you Pulling the covers over us We lie together Holding on to the last of a magnificent recital As I slip into half sleep Thinking One last kiss before we succumb Thinking I can’t wait for tomorrow Thinking There is nothing more beautiful than this Thinking about The next inviting kiss kc09----rev. |
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ummm......either way
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Holy Smokes man... you trying to kill me???????
If I keep reading your poetry, they're gonna have to list cause of death as: Spontaneous Conbustion! I simply lack the words to tell you how moving, stirring & igniting ... and freaking awesome your works are |
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Holy Smokes man... you trying to kill me??????? If I keep reading your poetry, they're gonna have to list cause of death as: Spontaneous Conbustion! I simply lack the words to tell you how moving, stirring & igniting ... and freaking awesome your works are ...spontaneous combustion?... too funny now, how am i going to live up to this?.... thank you for taking the time to respond i do appreciate it... |
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ummm......either way thank you david just thought id tweak a little |
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ummm......either way thank you david just thought id tweak a little a little tweak can go a long way |
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ummm......either way thank you david just thought id tweak a little a little tweak can go a long way yeah, i guess so.... |
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ummm......either way thank you david just thought id tweak a little a little tweak can go a long way yeah, i guess so.... better then the thump on the head,,,,,,,no? |
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i am speechless....
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i am speechless.... thank you i was going for delightfully exhausted but, ill take "speechless"... |
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wow what a kiss,great write,and to the next one
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wow what a kiss,great write,and to the next one thank you |
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Almost 8 full hours since I read this.. and I am STILL reverberating!
With your permission, I would like to share this some friends (have a ladies night coming up ) |
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Almost 8 full hours since I read this.. and I am STILL reverberating! With your permission, I would like to share this some friends (have a ladies night coming up ) thank you for asking....of course you may.... |
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i am speechless.... thank you i was going for delightfully exhausted but, ill take "speechless"... |
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i am speechless.... thank you i was going for delightfully exhausted but, ill take "speechless"... glad you are enjoying yourself D... |
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Okay I need a nap and a smoke (I quit years ago) to bring me back down....Whew that was smokin' HOT
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Awww it may be revised but it is still like pure music to me..........
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(( Kev )))
You can slice and dice this brilliant write all you want It stills captivates,,,and captures the pure beauty of just a simply pleasure,,, Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh |
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---and many many more....i u
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