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How Beautiful
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very nice....
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You go boy! This is wonderful and I am sure Faithful will appreciate your wanting to love her thru this rough time.
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Very nice MsTeddy...
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"Black Ice Heart"
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Well pissss! I agree go for the A's. But hey, their loss is our gain, let that you-ness shine here both y'all!!!!! We get their you-ness oo-oo We get their you-ness oo-oo!!!!!!! They need an icon that moonwalks or as least cabbage patch for when you want to get your electronic dance on LOL |
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"Black Ice Heart"
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Very nicely done my friend! trying to write for school is so very different from writing for fun....Thanks for asking. You start next week right? One prof said I have to tone down my "me-ness" to give the facts in a way that doesn't display so much of my opinion. It should almost read like a research paper "just the facts ma'am". It's cool though I just turn me off for the length of the paper LOL Yeah I am feeling you. Work won't pay for school if you don't make the grades and I want all of this paid for LOL |
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For FaithfulOne78
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Beautifully expressed and of course we are praying with and for you and your family...
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The Little joys with you
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Nice write Isaac, sounds like blooming love to me...
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Mind Games
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Girl, you know I wanna ask "Who did it?" excellent wrike DKW...
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Losing It
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Great write, you made me feel it...and like the ladies said it will get better....No lie.
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one more step...
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I always enjoy your writing. I is just sublime...
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"Black Ice Heart"
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Very nicely done my friend! trying to write for school is so very different from writing for fun....Thanks for asking. You start next week right? One prof said I have to tone down my "me-ness" to give the facts in a way that doesn't display so much of my opinion. It should almost read like a research paper "just the facts ma'am". It's cool though I just turn me off for the length of the paper LOL |
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Protected and Loved
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Praying with and for the family...God bless...
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a player
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"Black Ice Heart"
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Very nicely done my friend! trying to write for school is so very different from writing for fun....Thanks for asking. You start next week right? |
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"Black Ice Heart"
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Very nicely done my friend!
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didn't mean to...
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Well done, great write and I loved the part where you acknowledge that your choices are to blame not the man. I am liking this....
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The Man Of Her Dreams
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Awww so sweet yet so very sad. Good write...
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Our Next Moves
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You two did very well together. The flow was seamless, as in you couldn't tell where one began and one ended...
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Not For Anyone Yet
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Then maybe I wouldn't be on this site, right? haha I wrote his name on my hand near the newborn shores, But it washed away with the current and my heart's prior sores. I screamed his name in the dark hoping no other lover would hear, But my heart filled with guilt and my mind with fear. I saw him walk to the end of the ocean in my dreams, I felt him unstitch my bleeding life's seams. I felt his skin like water and mine like rock, I watched as his face filled with shock. His hand in mine he now leads me to the sea, And we crumble to the dust in which we will always be. Nice write, and welcome... |
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I Have
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Really soulful...paints pictures in the mind...diggin' it.
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