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Topic: The Mother Load
Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 08/25/09 09:08 AM
With one last push, A child explodes Into this world - The mother load. Mama and daddy, Busy at the mines Tryin’ to find The mother load. Schools overcrowded With diamonds in the rough. Too many veins to reach The mother load. One lone being Takes his time Looking beneath The dirt and grime Into the heart of --- The mother load.

Meg8771 Joined Fri 01/16/09 Posts: 5662	Tue 08/25/09 09:09 AM


Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 08/25/09 09:26 AM
Hi, Meg. Thanks for the posy.

Ladylid2012 Joined Sun 07/05/09 Posts: 42269	Tue 08/25/09 09:27 AM
indeed!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 08/25/09 09:35 AM
Thanks, Ladylid.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 08/25/09 09:56 AM
Always a pleasure to read

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 08/25/09 10:23 AM
Always a pleasure to read As you are for me too!

ma_thompson Joined Tue 08/18/09 Posts: 98	Tue 08/25/09 10:29 AM
Nicely done Lady Wench!!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 08/25/09 10:32 AM
Deep curtsy and a "why thank you so much", Sir Hondo

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Tue 08/25/09 04:09 PM
Deep curtsy and a "why thank you so much", Sir Hondo we need more of those(curtsies)in this world don'cha think?

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 08/25/09 04:20 PM
I feel like a Clydesdale when I do it; but, here ya go --------- Deep curtsy to you too, Kace!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Tue 08/25/09 04:28 PM
I feel like a Clydesdale when I do it; but, here ya go --------- Deep curtsy to you too, Kace! hahaha!!! yeah? thanks for the visual...

Jess642 Joined Sat 03/31/07 Posts: 22732	Tue 08/25/09 07:47 PM
Ahhhh..... everyone of them is the diamond in the rough.... we have the joys of knowing we have the motherload.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76438	Tue 08/25/09 08:51 PM
A Diamond is found within many aspects in life from our children to the mines never know what one may find till they look within...there are diamonds to be found in all walks of life... Got a tad carried away hehehe

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Wed 08/26/09 07:54 AM


Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 08/26/09 08:32 AM
Have I told ya lately, Jess, I so love the way you think? No, Well, I'm-a-tellin' ya nowwwww TxsLily, I soo wanna call you a show off! I enjoy the heck out of you! Mornin', MzEm -- Thanks and would you like some coffee?

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Wed 08/26/09 08:36 AM
Have I told ya lately, Jess, I so love the way you think? No, Well, I'm-a-tellin' ya nowwwww TxsLily, I soo wanna call you a show off! I enjoy the heck out of you! Mornin', MzEm -- Thanks and would you like some coffee? Oh yes I could you a pot or two, first day of school and I am about done in! Thanks for pick me up....

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Wed 08/26/09 09:10 AM
With one last push, A child explodes Into this world - The mother load. Mama and daddy, Busy at the mines Tryin’ to find The mother load. Schools overcrowded With diamonds in the rough. Too many veins to reach The mother load. One lone being Takes his time Looking beneath The dirt and grime Into the heart of --- The mother load. this one is funny but there is a serious side I see as well: questing for that ONE important thing in this world. That's my story and Im sticking to it!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 08/26/09 09:15 AM
Ahhh, fusion, go ahead on with your badself

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 08/26/09 10:38 AM
I so appreciate any write that can bring about varying interpretations...like this one DK. For me, this one is about the strength of women and what we so often do, in the name of Love