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As I held her hand it felt real good laying in her bed talking about life the present from past to future through time I looked in her eyes as she smiled as we laid there I shivering tense jaws talking about current pains crying and holding her hand tighter mentally cringed physically drained i shared my bad luck and visions she encouraged me as well as she nourished me gave me more hope despite being broke from a sour heart i laid there on my side one hand holding up my head she doing the same facing me comforting me I turned on my back to smother the shakyness as she rubbed my back with her free hand I felt gifted by this thanking her for being so patient with me she smiled and the words she didnt say were written on her face reading through emotions face to face feeling less shakey and more calm thanking god she is my mom |
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Wow
That was a deep and exotic way to honor your mom I loved it!!! |
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Most excellent write!
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Nice tribute write {{{d4tc}}}
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what a wonderful tribute
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I must admit while I was reading this my mind was on a lover but the end brought the biggest smile to my face there is no better love then that from a mother.................
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This is a super write...Lovely work.
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J
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BEAUTIFUL (((J))):heart
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To the love of moms..
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