a REAL woman is what i desire,
the last one threw me on a funeral pyre,
burnt me to cinders left me in ash,
scorched my emotions in a flash,
so on my heart i slammed the door,
i didn't want to love any more,
i put up walls to shelter me,
just wanted people to let me be,
so i hid inside my heart of pain,
with no sunshine, just an icy rain,
a dismal black empty abyss,
no love no light just deaths kiss,
then one day i heard a knock,
i took a chance undid the lock,
you were standing at my door,
you offered hope and so much more,
you smiled and took me by the hand,
then led me from my barren land,
the sun came out the rain was gone,
i smiled again it has been so long,
my walls crashed down you set me free now ,
now i breathe the open air,
you released me from my prison
with your tender loving care.

just for you l hope u liked it

I it sweetie!!

beautiful.... now you be careful wiht that redhead, she has a tender heart even though she doesnt show it!!

Yep... they drank the Mingle water!

xoxoxoxoxoxxxx

i will treat her like a queen, just like in my poems

your a sweetheart!

ok well I am personally gonna hold you to it mister!!!! she is just a babe in the woods and we at mingle try to take care of each other.
she is a beautiful soul and you should treat her like a queen!!!

and red, you becareful of that precious heart of yours!!!

will do ,thanks

MsT...you're sooo funny


Nice write bedlum ....

Enjoy red!

i one of the biggest softies u coul meet..id go as far as sayin whipped,i pay attention to the little things and make sure they r takin care of i notice looks eyes color the litte quirks that make her cuter ,the wsy she laughs the tenderness of the heart and what she dont like
and i'll make sure not to do those

wow, ok well if we could just clone those qualities this would be a wonderful world!!!
Good luck to both of you!