Topic: Poetic duel?
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Sun 11/05/06 02:12 PM
Chubby Cherub you rock
and heavens in shock
you think you are bound up
but that's just a dang sock

let it all out
give it a shout
you got the depth
don't hide your clout

you are free
you are fun
and your life has just begun

Chubby Cherub
you are cool
hip of the hippiest
nobodies fool

keep your chin up
let yourself shine
if you are down
it will all pass in time!!


Ontario's photo
Sun 11/05/06 02:13 PM
Charming, indeed geegirl....but can you make split pea soup...
yes...I,m part french...!

lionsbrew's photo
Sun 11/05/06 02:16 PM
im a lover not a fighter
hold on a sec i cant find my lighter
i dint come in here to duel
just wanted to have some fun and act like a fool
maybe let out a softer side
let my feelings be my guide
please dont get mad at my spelling or all the typos
cause the words im typing are not of a pros
just having the time of my life
rhyming with yall i dont want any strife
its really becoming a blast
this good feeling i want to make last
i dont want any part of a competition
im just glad i got into the audition

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Sun 11/05/06 02:29 PM
I do not wish for a crown
Simply wish not to frown
I would walk for miles
If only you could bring me smiles
There is no court to petition
For I am not in it for competition
Just a way for my soul to sing
And perhaps the healing it will bring
My sun will shine once again
I just don't know when
I am ,by nature, a creature of the night
I mean not to give such fright
For in my heart I know love
Soon you shall see me fly like a dove
Taking to the sky
Never asking why
Its such a simple trick
Now just take the risk
Close your eyes and wish your wish
For I am not a cold dead fish

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Sun 11/05/06 02:31 PM

oh i thought this was a duel
didn't mean to be so strange
i will kindly step aside
got pea soup boiling on the range

lionsbrew's photo
Sun 11/05/06 02:36 PM
this is just soo much fun
i wish some more would join in this run
its really getting good in here
cause we can all type and express cheer
knowing there isnt any jugdement
just a lot fun and enjoyment

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Sun 11/05/06 02:38 PM
I must fly this coop
For it is time to make my soup
I thank you Lion
For makin me keep tryin

As Geegrl slaves over her range
I hope she doesn't change
A fine poet she is
She tells it like it is


I shall return
Who knows I may take another turn...

Ontario's photo
Sun 11/05/06 02:40 PM
Merci.... geegirl, for the soup, and CCP...yeah Baby...that last one was
dope...!

lionsbrew's photo
Sun 11/05/06 02:44 PM
have a good time along the way
hope the nite is as good as the day
please keep us charmed with your pen
have a good nite c.c. hope to see you again

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Sun 11/05/06 03:00 PM
I HAVE BEEN READING AND MUST CONFESS
POET,GEEGIRL,AND LIONSBREW ARE NOTHING LESS
THAN THE BEST DAMM POETS THIS SIGHTS EVER SEEN
I MEAN COME-ON AND SAY-IT, YOUR WIT IS VERY KEEN
THE LADIES ALL LOVE THE LION'S WORDS OF GRACE
CAUSE HE SPEAKS FROM HIS HEART, THAT LOVING PLACE
THE POET WILL LET YOU FEEL HER LOVE AND PAIN
AND GEEGIRL WILL LET ALL HER WORDS RAIN
WE COME TOGETHER TO SAY HELLO
BUT WE ARE MISSING THAT LITTLE GUY,JELLO
WE TEASE OF LOVE OLD AND NEW
AND INTISE THE HEARTS FROM ME TO YOU
SO BRING OUT THE WORDS THAT MAKE US FEEL
BRING OUT LOVE AND PASSION, MAKE IT REAL
OPEN EVERY DOOR TO DELIGHT AND DESIRE
SETTING ALL THESE MEM AND WOMENS HEARTS ON FIRE

lionsbrew's photo
Sun 11/05/06 03:11 PM
let us get the fires all burning
the nites get longer and hunger still yearning
the reason were here for each other
all a big family with sister and brother
rhyming all nite and into the day
like wind through the leaves of the branches that sway
telling our stories of love and acceptance
reading along we get in a trance
it all blurs together like in fast foward
the good the day brings and love the reward
for we are all searching thats why were here
to find someone for a nitecap or even a beer

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 11/05/06 03:27 PM
Ohh I see we are still all here.
And you really can turn them out lionsbrew.
Here it's getting just a bit cold.
And more are getting bold.
Writing there words that sound so sweet.
Writing for fun not out to beat.
Knowing honestly that the Crown.
Belongs to all the poets around.
For each and everyone has there own style.
So we must sit back and just smile.
For I think that all must agree.
Being friendly and having fun is the way to be.

lionsbrew's photo
Sun 11/05/06 03:36 PM
wow this post is getting really long
all of writing as it were one song
all of us together well see
the melodie change to sweet harmony
so many poets and sages
i have to say this topic is one for the ages

michael1313's photo
Sun 11/05/06 03:44 PM
Ms. "Txs" is right and we all shall see,
what this "duels" poets,to truely be,
be we nice and wish love true,
brings tears of joy,every girl and boy,
does know our lonely hearts true,
words of love,
not "OR",but and,
those "Broken Winged Doves",
Mother's loves,big bear huggs,
like some cuddles,on a big bear-skin rug!
we Babies do play,with Moms thru th' day,
knowing she'll never loose love,
even petals of roses,and tickelish toeses,
give tears of joy this day,
to feel us loving,below and aboving,
Love gives to us every day...M.

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Sun 11/05/06 03:51 PM
A spew of insanity from the blackest depths of hate,
but not many of my comrades can relate,
the stench of death upon my hand,
but still you think your words are grand,
i take nothing from you all but i leave you with this,
you've done my game well but still i get the judas kiss,
I think grand of you all in this poets doom,
keep spinning these wordy webbs or face the poets doom.

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 11/05/06 03:51 PM
It's great in it's own way.
All have wrote night and day.
So many here has a special gift.
It does makes my spirit lift.
As we stand here hand n hand.
Lets all take come together and stand.
Even though between us are many miles.
We all still can make each other smile.

escapedlunatic's photo
Sun 11/05/06 03:53 PM
first doom should be room oops...i guess i need to proofread lol

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 11/05/06 03:53 PM
were is that delete button take out take lmao

lionsbrew's photo
Sun 11/05/06 03:54 PM
i was siting drawing a picture
figured what the hay ill get in the mixture
so much fun ill be ryhming for days i think
the time im here is on the brink
but ill be back in a blink
i just gotta clear the dishes from my sink

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Sun 11/05/06 04:22 PM
...boinky boink and a winky wink