Topic: Poetic duel?
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Fri 11/03/06 07:20 PM
is that where that is from ontario because i saw it tattoed across this
girls back that i met last night lol gave me something to read anyway

Ontario's photo
Fri 11/03/06 07:38 PM
Yeah...its on the back of Rolling Rock...!

Morena350's photo
Fri 11/03/06 08:44 PM
so........who is the winner?

michael1313's photo
Fri 11/03/06 10:15 PM
MY BLOOD IS RED,BUT LANGUAGE COMES IN MANY COLORS...
AS DO THESE POETIC DUELS OF LOVE AND HATE AND RIDICULE...



not sure where that came from,just felt like saying it...
saw it in a poem somewhere,remembered,*click*.......M.

michael1313's photo
Fri 11/03/06 10:24 PM
SO WHY DON'T TH' LADIES TRY THERE HAND???
come one come all,was th first call,
was only a few of you did answer at all,
show us who's best throughout th' land,
please give us your poems,or some silly breeze,
give us a few,if you'd really like to,
please women please,make us grow weak in th knees,
we already heard from mostly th men,
now is your thyme,give us grin,
help us feel it...please reveal it,
please get us weak for you please!

Ontario's photo
Fri 11/03/06 10:57 PM
Congratulations Mikey...you have been Crowned the Winners...
Now shut Up...!

Ontario's photo
Fri 11/03/06 11:04 PM
Seriously...You Deserve to Win...Thanks...!

michael1313's photo
Fri 11/03/06 11:13 PM
thanx ONTARIO,,,man I needed some body to say that,,,lol....M.
but we still have only few poems from th women,,,no???
wuold love to hear what some of them have up th sleeves???
you???

michael1313's photo
Fri 11/03/06 11:14 PM
cuz I knooooooww that we have some real good "poet de femm" out
there!!!ya think???

Ontario's photo
Fri 11/03/06 11:15 PM
Maybe next week...!

michael1313's photo
Sat 11/04/06 02:57 AM
gee,y'all are but lame,
'twas in jest,with this game,
you only did hack,for us to see,
wasted yer rhyme,hackin'on me,
you forgot to show it,
th you, th true poet,
we all have one deep inside,
most of it, boast of it,yet did you hide,
I've seen more poets,on posted past,
but few come calling to give repass,
'twas lookin' for love,and wonderful things,
tho most did just boast,or jack with me,
'twas searching for love,that most poem brings,
I do not truely wish this crown,I'm th clown,
love was th challange,not to be put down,
please put down you arms,I mean no harms,
I'll live life to th' fullest,in my own way,
you gaawk me,then mock me,rip pieces away,
most just had to bicker,
this only says,yer heart is only wicker
sad for love,but did get a snicker,
I throw down,th' POETIC DUELS crown,
you few made me frown, me into a clown,
was love rather found,not clown'd poets crown,
I bid AD'jue" to most of you,trying to take me down.




escapedlunatic's photo
Sat 11/04/06 04:24 PM
Back from my trip i will write soon!

Ontario's photo
Sat 11/04/06 04:28 PM
Its really not necessary...!

escapedlunatic's photo
Sun 11/05/06 09:11 AM
what's nescasary for you and what is for me....two different things
Ontario!

Ontario's photo
Sun 11/05/06 09:16 AM
Dude...you just got back...what,s with the salty "Tude"...

escapedlunatic's photo
Sun 11/05/06 10:04 AM
Not salty at all bro......i just like to write!

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sun 11/05/06 11:39 AM
Like a thief in the night
I'll come into your life
So easily I'll slip
into your fight
for sanity and
make you forfeit all others,
why even bother
It's all vanity
My love is so sweet
My passion so great
I'll take you to new heights
like you've nerver dreamed
I'll take what you give without a break
I'll become the cream thaat you crave
Your milk and honey
like candy to a babe
I'll make you scream
my name into the night
wanting, needing, bereaving
If you want to escape
with your pride at stake
walk on baby
and try not to think
of the pleasures I could bring.....

michael1313's photo
Sun 11/05/06 12:00 PM
'Tis a beautiful rhyme,this one indeeds,
exactly what this lonely soul needs,
this rhyme is just fine,my heart feeds,
what hungry eyes,making me tear,as my heart bleeds,
you picked up this task,in grace and form,
of love you spoke,not broken hearts torn,
please if you please,more poems from you please?
make us weak in th knees?

Ontario's photo
Sun 11/05/06 12:19 PM
isn,t there already a winner here...are does he denounce his
title...Mikey...you must decide...?

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Sun 11/05/06 12:25 PM
THAT WAS DELIGHTFUL COUNTRY?

AND HEY ONT,AND MIK?

WHAS-UP? MORE POEMS, MORE POEMS, YAH,YAH, YA?