my poems I write for fun,
not to hurt, or just, git-r-done,
more rhymes if you ask?
yes we'd be more than happy to pick up yer task,
we now see th one true you,
would you likes to writes,
some of your poems too?
if you ask,we did take this task,
not to kick sum ass,nor gloat n bask,
was a game of whit,are you up to it?
write with extra care if you please,
see if you can make th girls, weak in th knees...
oh,,,"Ontario" Please!

huh...?

wow people here are really gifted
better be careful for these ryhmes get lifted
aww nevermind ill just get spliffded
let my mind wander free
taken part in the rhymin is fun for me
no rules no regulations
no need for useless explainations
just havin a time with yall
watchin leaves change colors in fall
wait omg its allmost winter its getting real cold
i better get off this tangent before it gets old

AS I STARE LONG INTO HER EYES, HER GAZING SMILES OF HER HEART
I SEE INTO HER MIND AND SOUL, AND EXPLORE THE MANY WINDOWS OF HER
THOUGHTS. COULD THIS BE LOVE, COULD SHE BE THE ONE?
THE ONE TO CARESS AND NUTURE ALL OF ME, MY HEART, MY SOUL, MY MEMORIES,
OF LOVE TO BE? I'VE LONGED SO HARD TO FIND THIS DREAM, SOMEONE ELSE TO
SHARE MY LOVE, SOMEONE ELSE TO READ THROUGH ME, AND KNOW INSIDE, THEIR
EVERY BREATH, THAT OUR LOVE IS FROM GOD,AND WILL ALWAYS BE BLESSED.



THAT TOOK 15MIN. I HAD NO IDEA THE TIME INVOLVED IN TALKING TO MYSELF?
LOL?

weak in the knees
make em scream more please
give em that felling you all know
the one that starts with the big O
looking up at you with eyes opened wide
the emotions that change with the tide
you know when its not just a ride
hanging around in the afterglow
being able to just let go
she looks with the fullment of more than satisfaction
and know i dont mean leavin her in traction
from being to rough with action
undescribable undeniable a fealing that come from god above
the understanding of this being one you love
gently caressing her cheek rubbing her back
knowing that you make up for the things you might lack
by staying with her and loving her back

"Ontario",Please,give us yer rhymes as you tease,
you say,that yer th Ladies man,
show us a poem,make th' Ladies yer fan,
not cut me down,for I wear not th' Crown,
I thru th dam thing down,
for 'tis from th' hearts we all ask,
this oh, so, simple of task,
if you please,yer turn to pick up this task,
just a sweet lil one,sweep off yer feet lil' one,
makes th' girls weak for you,tease!
you must have a brain,
or it don't feel a thing,
and her heart just flutters away,
pour out th' heart,make th' girls sway,
rythem and tune,rhymes of th' moon,
or starry eyed nights,will get a swoon,
from yer heart to them,be better than him,
this duel,was not a fight,but for loves right,
rights of love's rights,"Ontario" Please,
see you make th' Girls weak in th' knees....M.

Dayummmm Lion That was soooo freakin awesome!!

it just came off the top of my head
i didnt think just let it spill out instead
i dont really ever try writing poems at all
this is the first time ive tried typing them for yall
should i keep it up and keep going
or do you think its just hot air im blowin

Iam4u,,,NUTURE,,,is this like th' nut cutin'?...lol
good rhyme tho...bravo!

and "LION" you wrote good poem too,
made a giggle,maybe she,will giggle it too?

flew off th hands, like wind thru th' lands,
happy to see you still, with th poetic Hands...

Keep it up Lion...never smother the artist in any genre in you.

im likin the ryhmingand excersing my brain
i dont know if the level ill maintain
is as gifted as those on thise site
everyone seems oh so brite
im trying to keep up so here we go
if i get carried away just let me know
this is alot of fun letting words just roll
phrasing a lyric after smoking a bowl
cross word puzzles in my mind
the more i do it the more i find
its starting to come real easily for me
to just start typing to wait and see
all the people on here and the things that they say
all for the love of fun and word play

the lion is king
never read such a thing
jimi can croon
but this guy, he can sing

writes from the heart
you can tell he's seen action
Onario please,
have you no satisfaction?

the mind is a powerful tool
it is said
but the mouth speaks the words
and raises the dead...

the dead come to life
and the color comes back
they dance to the rhythm
and jump in the sack

sack all the others
bag em and toss em
cuz the lion is king
and this one is awesome!

hi geegirl...!

thanx for all the good feedback
it make me feel like im up front on the rack
its a good felling i get inside
when others identify and come along for the ride
i dont really know were its coming from
but i dont want a crown or a kingdom
just to have fun and some freedom
like i said keeping up real tuff
i still dont think im up to snuff
im just writing and typing off the cuff

I'm not very good with ryhmes
I just can't seem to find the lines
Prose is my thing
Its no easy fling
Walk in my mind and see the darkness
You'll soon see there isn't much happiness
I try oh so hard to be positive
It seems my mind won't give
Fo without the dark the light does not exsist
It is futile to resist

yeah...you,re right, CCP...!

what are you saying there c.c
your doing just fine you see
its all for fun i guessed
no reason to feel depressed
the prose is what we all need
and i see you have it indeed
so lets all keep rhyming
and have some fun with the lyrical timing

hey, Ontario
what's the story?
The critic in you
is in his glory

A poetic duel
you have your armour
but how can you battle
this poetic charmer?

He has no cover
he tries nothing clever
the words they are sweet
just an honest endeavor

we can only stand by
and watch all the talent
the poetic wave comes in
and with it the valiant

My favorite friend
Ontario, send
your sappybest poem
and I will ammend

I will fly out tonight
we can meet and then hide
just give us a taste
of your other side...

( I have a poetic pilot license to lie)

lol now that was something lmfknao very very nice

In the light it is not always as it seems
In the dark I seek nothing but my dreams
Gentle words spoken
Trying not to be broken
Look beyond the face
You will truly see the human race
Take your time
You will see it will be fine
We all must toe the line
Search beyond the plastic
And soon we shall be tripping the light fantastic
Dancing among the stars
Keeping our hearts in jars
Oh so fragile
For he must be agile
To win my heart
And not make me fall apart
It is not jus a lark
For he must bring me out of the dark