Topic: Poetic duel?
ellgee1976's photo
Thu 11/02/06 08:35 PM
a late night for me
is bound to be had
off they did flee
the kids to their dad

so here i quietly sit
with my sammich on the desk
the lamp is now lit
feable attempt at best

sleepin in tomorrow
at least til 9am
2 hrs time i borrow
better than some of them

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Thu 11/02/06 08:38 PM
its really not hard to throw words together
(though Id rather see mandi and ell dressed in leather)
A A- is great I thank you my friend though a grade is quite pointless
since this shit just wont end!

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 08:40 PM
is really big chickens they must be,
for away they fly,away they do flee,
you be a woman,as you grows,
then come here and sit on my big ol' nose,
yes you're a woman,that we can see
but are you as good, as a rhymmer as me?

ellgee1976's photo
Thu 11/02/06 08:42 PM
after careful consideration
i could spend the duration
of the evening in the tub
a long soak i would love

a bubble bath of course
to relieve the terrible source
from the stress of the day
in hot water i just may

no photo
Thu 11/02/06 08:43 PM
Yes, Papi...I'm the best...
I've heard it million times
My thighs, hips, my breats,
I'll hav u wantin to be mine

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 08:47 PM
it's up to you, my baby blue,
you tickle me, with your rhyme, it's true,
but this is not jokin, and I wasn't just tokin'
it is all but a joke,i'm gone to have a smoke,,,

no photo
Thu 11/02/06 08:49 PM
smokin is bad... it makes u stink
blow your breath after u think
i get tired of breathin your air
All you nast ass smokers out there!!

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 08:56 PM
go ahead and have yer fun,
when I return, you'll be on th run,
you really do, like to kid this ol' man,
before th days done, you eatin from my hand,
you can have yer time, for a rhyme,
but when I've returned, you'll surely be burned...

no photo
Thu 11/02/06 09:00 PM
BLAH BLAH BLAH
BABY... I BREATHE FIRE
SO BURN ME NOW--
I STILL WONT EXPIRE

HA HA HA...

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Thu 11/02/06 09:00 PM
Now im staying in here and droppin lame rhymes cuz the rest of the
topics all have drama filled lines
Im tired of fightin and sick of debatin this sites way to cool for all
of the hatin.
The answers are good, and the inputs are right but some of these
fuckheads just come here to fight.
Now with that said my lil dittys done I welcome Monique to the topics
thats fun!

no photo
Thu 11/02/06 09:02 PM
get em ell.

no photo
Thu 11/02/06 09:03 PM
Aaah... thankyou Bad boy
So whats it gonna b?
U've opened the door...
Some come enlighten me

ellgee1976's photo
Thu 11/02/06 09:03 PM
so maybe it's just me
this rhymin for 2 days
feel like im out to sea
and burnt from it's rays

so maybe im alone
in my thoughts on this
but when does V get home
so he can begin my bliss?

he'll tell you straight
that i AM the poet
of choice as of late
cuz already, i just know it

:D

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Thu 11/02/06 09:09 PM
that ego is sweet, you silly lil girl
so tell me what colors the sky in your world?
A dream is a dream and they never come true
but ill wait til the end and just humor you
When V gets here with his justsay Hi staff
all that dudes gonna do is cry from the laughs
Im sure that hes been here checkin this out
The whole justsayhi crews probably lurkin about
So to the rulers os this site Ill simply say this
This site has put many in a state of pure bliss

ellgee1976's photo
Thu 11/02/06 09:14 PM
right now my sky is dark
the bubbles are callin my name
off to the tub im gonna park
while you try your hand at the game

:P

no photo
Thu 11/02/06 09:18 PM
am i addicted to this site?
i come on it everynite
and talk to some i've never sight
nor heard or met. is that rite?
i know so many and none that mite
really know me and thats alrite
i hav come agin to join the fight
but i lov all, i'll leave the bite
to anyone else who loves to spite
i cud care less if you like
cuz all n all i lov the rite
and all the wrongs that go despite
what i've learned. i'm leavin-- Goodnite

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Thu 11/02/06 09:20 PM
nite sleep good

no photo
Thu 11/02/06 09:25 PM
aww... now ur gonna be all alone?
U want me stay... I'll wait to go home
Then agin...you get into everything

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Thu 11/02/06 09:27 PM
lmao silly im not alone im all over you know that

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Thu 11/02/06 10:55 PM
Oh you guys why do you bother
you whine, you moan
you go on and on
if you're not a poet
go do something better
don't sit here and complain
saying "you can do better"
Go get your feather
pen and put it on paper
let's hear it, shout it
make it plain to see
just let the words 'be"