Its all good bad guy i know you meant well,
I applaud your attempt no matter how frail,
It doesn't really matter if they answered my call,
I know there's a poet inside of us all.

Thanx my friend ,you did begin,
to you I say, yes, you may play,
I would not write,if not for them,
I'd like to hear from,our friend,"JIM"???

yes he can write it does tell,
we all have read this well,
words he spoke,phones he fell,
please yell at them for us,
yell,"Jimi" YELL,
we write to those we hurt,
and to those in love,
we write to, GOD above,
writtings about a broken dove,,,
suspect?not from you "Ontario",
you cannot rhyme,now you must go...

Please, refer to dawgs tring to get me...!

Yet I did ,I've read it twice,
are you men?or phoney mice?
can you think of ONE?
if only for fun?
for if you can rhyme about anything,
like I do,'cause it's my thing,
then have fun with us,
not to spew and cuss,
if you are here to castigate,
go back home and masterbate...

Please, refer to dawgs trying to get me...!

Paint a bigger picture and set your mind free,
we saw your post now back to reality,
I dont understand,
why the man,
just cant see,
we does this for fun, not contreversy!

you waste our time,
without your rhyme,
if you are here only to castigate,
take yer ass back home and masterbate...
we do not care, yer dreams about th dog,
play with yourself,and yer log,
but if you can find a rhyme,
come back and play,anytime...

If you could read, you would indeed...concede and read, dawgs trying to
get me.

now just get back from reading it,
nothing new, not 1 peice of shit,
do not be hurt,nor be mad,
but as a poet,you are really bad,
you may play a line,one at a time,
but it's not in you to be a rhyme,
if you looked,see that I checked,
why you gettin',all red necked?
you sit and call us, suspect?

Please, refer to dawgs trying to get me...!

yet you still sit and spew,
your words are few,
you only come to castigate,
your words are lame,and yet we wait,
smart words from you are much too late,
words from you,sounds better if you
go back home to find debate,
play not with him or me,
go back home and play with your wee wee...

Dude...this act of yours has played out.
Your attempts to be anything connected to poetry has failed.

Before these foolish gestures your talent was suspect...now it is
confirmed that you are clearly a hopeless, talentless, bum.

So please stop dancing for nickels... we ain,t buying...!

Please refer to dawgs trying to get me...!

you poor pathetic man,
it's all a dream,
you think I wait,
to hear you scream?
not my thing to analize,
just one thing you must realize,
to be a poet,and truely know it,
words,and meaning,and to "flow" it,
rhyme this time,and don't "CASTIGATE",
come up with some,or you just masterbate,
for all you do,is sit and spew,
words of dogs,dreamming of you,
I am not he who is suspect,
for it is you,getting all red-necked...

Dude...why the Tude...name calling is not nice...and I am now
insulted...!

then c'mon ,get mad,
it shows you care,
be happy,or sad,
do not stare,
this is a duel,
for rhyme,not fool,
if you can take this dare,
then give your rhyme,
and someone will care...

Come on you guys this was meant to be fun,
not to ridicule, chastise, or intimidate anyone,
I just cant believe,
what my eyes see,
In this lack of poetic ingenuity.

No, dude can,t get mad... for you know not what you do.

for I can rhyme about most things,
about sad doves on broken wings,
about sad loves,sad hearts and things,
I can tell about us jokin',
or make up tales,about me tokin',
so if yer as truley smart,as you say,
give us a rhyme,
and have your way,
for if you can,
then you may stay,
but if no rhyme,you have no say,
this duel is for us in play,
I have no "TUDE" as you state,
you have not rhymed,
you just castigate...
look it up,if you can,
show us all,you are true, a man,
if you care, to take this dare,
then I'll sit corrected,
I'll be your biggest fan...

damn ya'll still got this going lol?