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hi sweetgirl!
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Our words are here for all to see
Emotions Souls bare Fantasies We write to share because we care this "poets" society it seems we've formed some kind of lair Don't be scared Our teeth aren't bared... it's only just the beginning... |
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Sleep is elusive so here I am
Alone at last pen in hand Words are intrusive upon my brain, like a band wrapping round They just wont stop, all is sound They race on like a freight train so this is my gain and I'll take the lead You lazy hounds, you lay in your beds when you lose, do not plead |
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Death has come to claim your soul
My sorrow is great I loved you so My faith is strong I hope you know How very much I want to go The smile of peace upon your face I truly think the place is safe there on the inside The gates of Heaven openwide Can I come with you I ask with pride Your face aglow I see your halo You gently turn and say no One little hug and I must release you My unborn child why must you go... |
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When you feel all alone
need to cry a shoulder to lean on Look around and you will see A true friend is what you seek I'll be there by your side never fear, I'll be here Your tears can fall unabashedly i'll never judge or act harshly I'll be meek and let you peek some small glimpse Look inside of me and you will see What a true friend I can be... |
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Well, my friends
I've joined your plight I've shared with you all and gained some insight This writing tonight has helped a lot Do not mock me or make light I've done what was asked I've reached deep inside you see, but now it's time to say.....Good-night |
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these words you wrote, are from th true you,
which is all we ever, really asked of you, you gave us your rhyme,and in your good time, outside hearts will bleed, for th one of true, your poem bites not,'twas on th spot, and it really made me feel blue, for you, you have had your chance,your lil' dance, and was a really good time for you too, but this rhyme is mine,for it is my time, my fifteen tickets of fame, so hear this rhyme,my rhyme for game, to GOD's glory go all of thy name, mine is this time,to complete this rhyme, before it turns into something truely lame, won't make up words like some of th turds, on these pages I've read before, no I won't clown you,they might crown you, true story is always better than lore, so if y'all are done,having your fun, just sit back in silence, and read on some more, because it's like I've said,not just in my head, I can waste other's taste,of poetry on my floor, but if you truely can write,then come join this right, or just get your non-writin' ass out my door, seems we have found,some winners this round, they may hang around,to write with us, some more, so come with me onto round three,let us be poets galore, write not your lame words, you can't polish your turds, to leave them scattered, on this bare floor, but if you swoon too soon,somebody drag 'em out my door, this is from me, while we be in round three, you are truely all poets, and how you must know it's, I'll sit back and let you all have a turn, so here you go,put on your show, be good or it's gonna get burned......M. |
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From what I've read, to where you've been
nobody's dead and your way past 10 I wish I had not had to leave because you three would hav loved me. Now im here for all to say hi but to bad so sad you've all said goodbye? My time here in this space was meant for this poet's race? But I come out to show my whit But who really gives a shit? |
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lol 4u.....have a good day guys i have to go out of town for a while for
work but i'll be back later today.....peace! |
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you write with care as if walking on eggs,
your gritty "whit" is just dancing on air, your poem's ok, but sounds like it begs, but we all,are somebodies who do care, please bring up th tone,or go home alone, with no poems of yer own, nor a crown to grace th' hair, I've a little past seven, this game is just heaven, and really is quite fair, continue th' show,and away I'll go, and just sit to read it, from my chair.....M. |
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I CAN BUT TRY TO FEEL YOUR SEAT
JUST BE STILL YOUR DAMM STINKY FEET I'LL TALK, AND BOST FOR EYES TO READ BUT IT'S NOT I WHO PLANTED THE SEED YOUR TALK IS CHEAP AND DIRTY TO ME YOU CAN'T WALK AND TALK, AS GOOD AS ME. YOU SAY YOU CAN'T KEEP YOUR THOUGHT WELL HELL NO BOY, YOUR ALL STORE BOUGHT. IF I WERE YOU I'D RUN AND HIDE CAUSE IM FIXING TO TURN INTO DR. HYDE MY PLAN FOR YOU IS A PIECE OF CAKE JUST GIV-YA A PICKLE, AND WATCH-YA BAKE IF IT TOOK RYME TO GIV U TIME YOUR FUNKY SHIT AIN'T WORTH A DIME NOW GIV ME YUR BEST AND F--K THE REST IM HERE TO PASS YOUR STUPID-ASS TEST |
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your rhyme is just fine,
for just a few lines, tho cussing is not required, these poems must rhyme, and have a little time, to just flow and not get tired, my words are my own,not store bought, keep up or you may get mired, these words from you?don't sound like "2", makes me wonder, just who was it you hired? |
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MY WORDS ARE ALL MINE AND ME
AND IF YA DON'T ADMIRE ME THEN JUST JUMP SHIP AND STOP YOUR LIP OR I WILL FRY YOUR BRAIN IN WIT AND CHARM TO EASE YOUR PAIN I CAN BE STOPPED AND SET FREE BUT NOT BY YOU CAUSE YOU WILL SPREE YOU TALK AS LIFE IS SUCH A RIDDLE YOU SIT AND CRY STUCK IN THE MIDDLE GET OFF YOUR ASS STOP SMOK-N THAT GRASS FILL-UP-YOUR-GLASS N TAKE A PASS YOU AIN'T GON-A KEEP THIS SEAT JST HEAR YOUR LITTLE HEART SKIP A BEAT MY LIFE HAS BEEN THROUGH TO MANY LIKE YOU THINK YOUR SHT DON'T STINK, WELL HERES A LITTLE WINK YOUR GOING DOWN TODAY,AND DON'T WORRY BOUT YA PAY I SAID IT BEFORE AND SAY IT AGAIN,ALL U NEED DO IS OBAY THE RIDDLE ME THIS AND RIDDLE YOU AWAY CAUSE BOY IM TELLING YA IM HERE TO PLAY KEEP IT TO YOUR-SELF, THESE WORDS YOU THINK OF ME CAUSE ALL YA EVER GOING TO DO, IS RUN HOME AND PEE I CAN GO ON FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE BUT TIME IS A WASTE-N, AND I NEED TO MEET WITH YOUR WIFE SO I'LL GIVE YA A BREAK AND SEE HOW YA DO ONE,TWO, THREE, FOUR, NOW RYME TO? |
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Ha,ha,ha,That's really not bad,
I like your rhymes but it's really sad, I got stuck in th middle, and no did not diddle, if yer with my ex ,,,you've been had, if you claim to be th "Mr Hyde" then she must be your only bride, but I don't want THAT ol' hide, so just go ahead and take off with her-n-rubb'er, I'll say it for you,this is true, better go and get yourself a steel "Rubber" because after me,then there were three, she should've been a f**king pornstar lover... but on my head th crown will be, for I don't care if you clown with me, what you wish,is to put it down with me, so be th clown,write it down,try for th crown, can you write it down?without a frown? don't think on it too long, it's poetry,not song, if you get caught scratchin'yer head, yer written words will be dead.... |
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DEAD IS DEAD AS YOU SHALL BE
YOU JUST WAIT AND YOU SHALL SEE THIS RYME OF WIT AND SMILES OF SHIT YOUR GOING TO THE BOTTOM OF THIS LITTLE PIT PUT ME UP OR PUT ME DOWN BUT YA AIN'T NEVER GOIN NA TURN ME ROUND WITH BREATH OF MAGGETS, AND TEETH SO GREEN YOU SHOULD BE IN A CIRCUS, CAUSE YA SO MEAN ABOVE HERE LIES ALL THE CHEAP TRYINGS AND BEYOUND THESE WALLS I HERE YA CRYINGS PUT THIS TO REST I PASSED YOUR BEST NOW CAN I GIVE YOUR WIFE TO THE REST YOU AIN'T GOT NO SOUL YA AIN'T GOT NO HEART YOU JUST ALL UP IN MY ASS, SNIFFING FOR FARTS |
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oh, my yes,aren't you th funny,
words of this,catch flies better than honey, if you wants my ol' lady, your gonna need all of yer money, your rhyme this time, only bores me to tears, my words do I write,without any fears, on th top I'll be,so just go take yer pee, for I write from th heart,no,not sniffin' fart, my rhyme you do see,is only from me, so don't hump my leg,with your lonely old dregg, go play with a log,my ol'hide's just a dog, jump 'er bones if you will,but first take a pill, my words of thrill,will make you just chill, we draw a crowd as you can see, to read these words,from you and me, folks like dirty laundry,oh, yes they do, so I'll wring out my socks, on lonely ol' you, you think you must rhyme,and keep my lime, but I'm th KING POET,and just biding my time, for when we go to it,you know who will do it, is my head they will crown, for none can put th KING down, my words of glee, will not flee, so off you go,my mind you don't know, I'm glad you think,I'm th unfortunate son, you could be right,or maybe no, write your heart out,then you may go, I am glad you like to rhyme for fun, but this is my art,oh, unfortunate one... |
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YOU TRY WHILE I IN RESTFUL SLEEP
TO TAKE MY CROWN AND BEEP,BEEP,BEEP BUT I AM BACK TO BRING YOUR SHAME AND SLAY U WITH ALL MY PAIN PAIN OF REASON AND IN THE SEASON YOU CAN'T TAKE FACTS, LET-ALONE TEASE-N A MAN LIKE YOU CAN'T HIDE BEHIND HIS FEARS HE JUST CURLS UP LIKE A BABY AND CRYS HIS BOO-HOO TEARS IF I GIVE YOU A SMALL METAPHOR ALL YOU COULD SAY WHAS-THIS-WORD-FOR METHINKS' YOR ARE OF STUPID WIT NOTHING TO SAY JUS SUCKING HIND TIT YOU ONCE HAD A LADY WHO WANTED YOUR DICK BUT WHEN SHE SEEN THE SIZE, SHE GASPED, MY GOD A TOOTH-PIC NOW YOU SEEK THE CROWN OF RYME AND HERE AGAIN I SAY NOT YOUR TIME LET ME PUT YOU IN YOUR PLACE DAMM-IT BOY, YOU AIN'T IN THE HUMAN RACE IF POWER IS WHAT YOU SEEK TO FIND YOU BETTER COLLECT ALL YOUR BRAIN AND REWIND YOUR NEVER GOING TO WIN THIS POETS DUEL CUS YOU SPEND ALL YOUR TIME PLAY-N WITH YOUR TOOL THE PEOPLE HERE THAT READ YOUR MIND AGREE WITH ME, YOU'RE NO THE RIGHT KIND TO WALK THROUGH THIS DOOR AND NOT BE A BORE TAKE ALL THE TIME YOU NEED I'LL STILL KIC-YA ASS AND MAKE YA BLEED. |
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lol ya'll gettin silly now
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Who...Won...?
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lol
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