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Topic: Poetic duel?
Ontario's photo
Thu 11/02/06 04:12 PM
Well...that,s not really true is it...!

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 04:13 PM
Mr."Van"is who we seek,
hear us rhyme,ours to speak,
for he is one,who has yet to join the fun,
if you had seen,these words of rhyme,
you would know of, the special time,
you do not ryhme,nor give your time,
you critize,you clueless bro',
for now,it's your time to go,
if you dare,"Ontario",
take up the dare,before you know,
make it rhyme,feel it show,
but you will fall,not hear the call,
becaues you seem ,to have no rhyme at all.

Ontario's photo
Thu 11/02/06 04:15 PM
Okay...Mikey, that was extra crappy...please stop.

Jimi366's photo
Thu 11/02/06 04:16 PM
An ending to fit
the beginning.
All is in confusion
as we search our
souls for meaning
in this world that
at times doesn't
seem to care.

Ontario's photo
Thu 11/02/06 04:18 PM
Jimi,...that was too...!

escapedlunatic's photo
Thu 11/02/06 04:42 PM
Ok Ontario once again you try to put yourself in the spotlight,
but you still refuse to join our fight,
if its the poetry you dont like then why are you here,
Is it jellousy of all the beauty in here.

I dont understand why you insist we stop,
we dont come on your post with neagatives to drop,
why dont you just be on your way,
let the poets have thier fun here today!

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 05:32 PM
truely we are not the last to write,
this poetic duel,our passage right,
for if this is really true,
no more to be found,
we have most of the contenders,
for our poetic crown,
no more to hear,our rhyming cry,
feel us write,oh,please do try,
the challange made,none were paid,
to meat this call,for one and all,
if this is true,I'm truely lost,
they spent no coin,had no cost,
was only time,the poets rhyme,
we're the ones who heeded the call...

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 05:39 PM
she wanted me to follow,this I did with glee,,, take my hand and walk
with me. to see her poems,happy and free,,, we walked a path,sat under
my tree. the love inside,we could not hide, feelings of youth,what a
wonderful ride. I read her poems,I thought were to me, hoping for
love,to set me free. the more I read,the more I see, beautiful
poems,though most not for me. to be by myself,in her big warm heart, for
my lonely soul,was a wondreful start. she asked me to wait,for her
to"clean th slate" so wait I did,like a lovestruck kid. th' more I
read,th' more I found out, feeling alone,feeling left out. I cry for
her,has my love been lost? must have her,but at what cost? so I wait for
her,under my tree, longing for love,hope she returns to me. what have I
done,I sit thinking aloud, to have her love,would make me proud. I asked
if she,really wanted me? she said"give me space",and "time will see", so
lonely I wait,feeling sad for me. I may have been played,like a second
hand fiddle my soul getting older,heart feeling little. to be so
close,yet so far away, hoping for love,to happen someday. have not lost
th battle,only just begun to fight, sending my love,with all of my
might. to meet in a dream,on a moonlit nite, hoping our love,will soon
take flight. hoping she reads this,and feels for me, wanting her hand,to
come walk with me...

Ontario's photo
Thu 11/02/06 06:01 PM
Looney...why must you be so rebellious...everything I say offends you.
I understand you insist on being one of the spice girls...and I have no
problem with that.
But the truth should not be chased off...would ever if I am not welcome
on your post...then I shall...retire from it.

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 06:11 PM
well....................bye................................

Ontario's photo
Thu 11/02/06 06:15 PM
Since this crock is over anyway...bye...!

escapedlunatic's photo
Thu 11/02/06 06:23 PM
lol your welcome on any post i make anytime friend.....poetry aside you
ok in my book. But you coming in here if you feed the fire...you get
burned. Like I said you dont mind I dont mind!

ShagnaC's photo
Thu 11/02/06 06:39 PM
I think all your poems are fantastic!!! I have enjoyed them. I am not
very good at poems but I love to write!

ellgee1976's photo
Thu 11/02/06 06:58 PM
step aside, boys and girls
make room for worthy me
who under the crown will twirl?
why none other but Miss LG

i'll have you floppin
on the bank like fish
there's just no stoppin
my rhymes, so stylish

got your mind workin?
are you in there? "hello??"
i'll have you in the kitchen
makin my strawberry JELLO!!

lol :D

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Thu 11/02/06 07:00 PM
you know im gettin a commission from jello lol

ellgee1976's photo
Thu 11/02/06 07:02 PM
lmao

ShagnaC's photo
Thu 11/02/06 07:05 PM
Wow these are amazing I say again!!

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Thu 11/02/06 07:06 PM
lol you dont get out much do you lol

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Thu 11/02/06 07:06 PM
likei said before aside from a couple its like a horrible dr seuss book

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Thu 11/02/06 07:07 PM
but its funny so lol fantastic well thats stretching it

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