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Topic: Poetic duel?
no photo
Thu 11/02/06 11:43 AM
after Mandii gets divorced are they still cousins???

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Thu 11/02/06 11:44 AM
lmao

manDii's photo
Thu 11/02/06 11:46 AM
rotfl

escapedlunatic's photo
Thu 11/02/06 11:55 AM
I just cant believe the outcome this has had,
poeple's thoughts and feelings both good and bad,
compiled with words that express true feeling,
it gives me a sense of compassion and well being,
Even as I sit her and concentrate on my work,
my poetic flow seems to constantly jerk,
At my soul it pulls and tugs,
like some lethally addictive drug,
but i must set aside my pen,
every now and again,
and let my fellow poets have there say,
so the game still going c'mon and play!

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Thu 11/02/06 12:06 PM
This dance we dance in this life
goes on and on through the night
I feel your eyes upon me
I want you to take me to new heights
no, I am not your wife
just a lover seeking in the night
dance with me, feel the heat
I want to hear your heartbeat
beneath me
in unity we reach a rythm
like a knife it slices through
not in pain,
right on cue, I am with you
in ecstasy never before could I fathom
these multiple orgasms
finally i am with you
dancing, heating up the night

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 12:09 PM
he did not speak just to be giving head,
listen to this,hear what he said,
to all th young at heart,
give us poems,make your start...

ellgee1976's photo
Thu 11/02/06 12:15 PM
hello fellow poets
and all those just watching
today i just know it
we crown the new queen or king ;)

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 12:20 PM
yes your poem was truely hot,
I cannot say,for I may speak not,
I gave my vow,it's here to stay,
thanx,to you,I've had my say...

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 12:39 PM
"S.C.G." yes you may continue,
to th second round if you have it in you...

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Thu 11/02/06 01:45 PM
How dare you challenge me
do "I" have it in me
you're the one who shall be challenged
to continue on to round three
dare I continue, what do I have to lose
listen to these words, not only for you,
stick around and we'll see who's who...
The finish line is just ahead
the day is young, spinning words in my head
what a ruse you've roused in me
around and around, we shall see
for now I must go, children needing
and not heeding
dogs need feeding
duty calls, but I will return
and you WILL feel the burn...

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 01:54 PM
oooo,so away you must go,
to gather your flock,
from to and fro,
when you return,you just may be,
in heated, debate with me,
please be calm,please no hate,
please don't make, us all wait,
for you write good poem,
this is true,
get your kids,and don't be late,
we'll wait for you,
come on back,and take this dare,
help us feel,help us care,,,

escapedlunatic's photo
Thu 11/02/06 02:23 PM
I sit and watch profoundly as these poetic encounters unfold,
there is honesty and understanding in in every line written.
Many have come and gone but the truth is still untold,
and the thing i call beautiful your vain attempts have smitten.

Well little lady you have such a prttty smile,
your attempt was a valaint one I'm sure most would agree.
Most men to see you would walk a country mile,
It's whats in your head i'm waiting to see.

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 02:34 PM
we ask none from you,
no dough,nor coin,
only ask that you join,
on this site,of yer poem,and wit
give yourself,be free of it,
for if you're down,and come to clown,
you may get, this imaginary crown...
braggin rights are all we seek,
let us feel,make us weak...

ellgee1976's photo
Thu 11/02/06 02:38 PM
ladies and gentlemen
make room for the poems
keep typing out for them
let's keep this thread goin

Jimi366's photo
Thu 11/02/06 02:41 PM
My soul is awakened
by you. My hands are
outstretched and ready
to be taken by yours.
Oh soft skin you have,
you feel so silky.
Nothing before the
moment I looked into
your eyes matters anymore.
There is only you and I
in a dance of sweet surrender.
Our lips touch, yours drip with honey.
My heart beats faster and faster
with each second of our kiss.
I feel yours beating too.
I finally know what it
feels like for two hearts
to beat as one.

no photo
Thu 11/02/06 02:42 PM
i'm gonna say this once
just to keep this a goin
i'm sittin in the house
and boy the winds a blowin

MidnightStaar's photo
Thu 11/02/06 02:44 PM
I find this all quite interesting yet very cruel
for posting negitive comments on this poets duel

A most beautiful thing that a man can achieve
Is to speak of beautiful words of a poem he concieved

Angelo let's hear your words or is that too hard
For you speak negitive of these men that are bards

So come on let's hear don't be such a tool
Join in this remarkable poet's duel......











Jimi366's photo
Thu 11/02/06 02:50 PM
There is a Midnight Star out there,
an angel of the night
who poses a challenge.
Take her up on it.
Let the words flow from your soul.
Let your heart be on display for the world to see.
Let that poet in you out of the cage.
In words you can free yourself.

escapedlunatic's photo
Thu 11/02/06 02:59 PM
just to set the record strait...angelo was speaking for us not against
us....srry i had to break the silence...he was refering to ontario's
comments!

ellgee1976's photo
Thu 11/02/06 03:01 PM
sit back ladies n' gentlemen
time to bring you to the floor
for here i've come again
with words of rhyme you will adore

once you read mine
you'll know the ending
you'll see it's MY time
your skills you'll be defending

:D

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