Topic: Poetic duel? | |
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after Mandii gets divorced are they still cousins???
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lmao
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rotfl
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I just cant believe the outcome this has had,
poeple's thoughts and feelings both good and bad, compiled with words that express true feeling, it gives me a sense of compassion and well being, Even as I sit her and concentrate on my work, my poetic flow seems to constantly jerk, At my soul it pulls and tugs, like some lethally addictive drug, but i must set aside my pen, every now and again, and let my fellow poets have there say, so the game still going c'mon and play! |
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This dance we dance in this life
goes on and on through the night I feel your eyes upon me I want you to take me to new heights no, I am not your wife just a lover seeking in the night dance with me, feel the heat I want to hear your heartbeat beneath me in unity we reach a rythm like a knife it slices through not in pain, right on cue, I am with you in ecstasy never before could I fathom these multiple orgasms finally i am with you dancing, heating up the night |
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he did not speak just to be giving head,
listen to this,hear what he said, to all th young at heart, give us poems,make your start... |
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hello fellow poets
and all those just watching today i just know it we crown the new queen or king ;) |
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yes your poem was truely hot,
I cannot say,for I may speak not, I gave my vow,it's here to stay, thanx,to you,I've had my say... |
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"S.C.G." yes you may continue,
to th second round if you have it in you... |
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How dare you challenge me
do "I" have it in me you're the one who shall be challenged to continue on to round three dare I continue, what do I have to lose listen to these words, not only for you, stick around and we'll see who's who... The finish line is just ahead the day is young, spinning words in my head what a ruse you've roused in me around and around, we shall see for now I must go, children needing and not heeding dogs need feeding duty calls, but I will return and you WILL feel the burn... |
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oooo,so away you must go,
to gather your flock, from to and fro, when you return,you just may be, in heated, debate with me, please be calm,please no hate, please don't make, us all wait, for you write good poem, this is true, get your kids,and don't be late, we'll wait for you, come on back,and take this dare, help us feel,help us care,,, |
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I sit and watch profoundly as these poetic encounters unfold,
there is honesty and understanding in in every line written. Many have come and gone but the truth is still untold, and the thing i call beautiful your vain attempts have smitten. Well little lady you have such a prttty smile, your attempt was a valaint one I'm sure most would agree. Most men to see you would walk a country mile, It's whats in your head i'm waiting to see. |
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we ask none from you,
no dough,nor coin, only ask that you join, on this site,of yer poem,and wit give yourself,be free of it, for if you're down,and come to clown, you may get, this imaginary crown... braggin rights are all we seek, let us feel,make us weak... |
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ladies and gentlemen
make room for the poems keep typing out for them let's keep this thread goin |
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My soul is awakened
by you. My hands are outstretched and ready to be taken by yours. Oh soft skin you have, you feel so silky. Nothing before the moment I looked into your eyes matters anymore. There is only you and I in a dance of sweet surrender. Our lips touch, yours drip with honey. My heart beats faster and faster with each second of our kiss. I feel yours beating too. I finally know what it feels like for two hearts to beat as one. |
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i'm gonna say this once
just to keep this a goin i'm sittin in the house and boy the winds a blowin |
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I find this all quite interesting yet very cruel
for posting negitive comments on this poets duel A most beautiful thing that a man can achieve Is to speak of beautiful words of a poem he concieved Angelo let's hear your words or is that too hard For you speak negitive of these men that are bards So come on let's hear don't be such a tool Join in this remarkable poet's duel...... |
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There is a Midnight Star out there,
an angel of the night who poses a challenge. Take her up on it. Let the words flow from your soul. Let your heart be on display for the world to see. Let that poet in you out of the cage. In words you can free yourself. |
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just to set the record strait...angelo was speaking for us not against
us....srry i had to break the silence...he was refering to ontario's comments! |
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sit back ladies n' gentlemen
time to bring you to the floor for here i've come again with words of rhyme you will adore once you read mine you'll know the ending you'll see it's MY time your skills you'll be defending :D |
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