And you saw consequences were rendered without haste...and for the
record " Lunnie " that comment angelo commented on was,nt directed at
him... but still I had to bomb his stupid ass... you understand don,t
you...!

yes ..i know..its all good....
much love....
lunatic

My apologizes... please forgive me Angelo
for I wrote your name and not Ontario

For you are correct.... escapedlunatic
a quick response is what I now predict

I will leave you now with this missive
next time I come I won't be offensive

For one more writing I will give
It's within beauty and love where I live

I have been influenced by time

Everyday I wish the day away

Then I wonder where the time has gone



I have been pressured by society

To be someone that I am not

I just want to be me



I have power over my own thoughts

To achieve my goals that I have set

I will accomplish my lifes plan



I have been swayed by friends

To do the things that I wouldnt do on my own

I have experienced new territory



I have been controlled by many

Unable to freely express emotion

I have learned to not be a victim



I have been manipulated by strangers

Asked to give too much to fast

I have learned to guard my emotions



I have been persuaded by love

To love so deeply that I give it all away

I have learned to love myself..



I have been influenced.....

much love...

please heed this call no haste,
it is your time to waste,
your rhyme, your waste,
heed this call,don't copy/paste,
for if you do,you will be found,
poem first, upon the ground,
write with wit,and a lil'care,
come one come all,heed this call,,,

Oh look what if started but it wasn't in fun,
I did it because i was chastise in front of everyone,
so I guess its time for you all to see,
when comes to writing you cant hold a pen to me.

I'll start with michael because he is my freind,
I know just from those words he's started to grin.
Your words echo like a wild violent storm,
allthough witty and flowing, your ryme's have no form.

And then there's sweet LG trying out here flow,
your short one liners entertaining us so,
but you lack substance and meaning its clear,
when it comes to poetry you need to find another gear.

Okay,,,Starry...I was feeling you, but since you got beef with
me you can get in line behind angelo and kiss my ass...!

I said I apologize don't detest
I come from love... not to be a pest

So let's have it.. let's see what you've got
A fighter a lover a poet or not?

This is fun I do agree
For writing poems is so "in me"

peace love and get naked is what I say
for I can and will do this all day......

i love you star...lol jk

No, luv...you criticised me for a minor gesture, and you did not
apologize to me. Its okay, and I previously said you was,nt
crazy, but maybe I was wrong...?

I do not fear, my friends so dear,
for I shall not,shed one single tear,
it is the crown I seek,
does my rhyme make you weak?
for braggin' rights, do we speak,
all the others,they must be meek,
if my rhyme,looses time,
I'll gladly give, the crown you seek,
I will step down,not to hide,
feel my words,my humble pride,
leave not, my poem untold,
for now this game, is growing old,
was truely fun,for us you see,
for this,the crown,it is for me...

I may be a woman but don't be deceived, I didn't critize you for what
you belive.. I stated the obvious that I didn't see, beautiful,rythmic
poetry.. Crazy yeah I have to agree and so will anyone that you ask
about me...

I'm not a fighter this word is my last
move on and forget the past....

let's be friends.... don't hate...

Okay...time out...serious inquiry.

Will there actually be a winner, or is this simply another fictious
journey for you guys.

What is winning based on....real talent, or how many headaches
you can give the readers.

Please don,t tell me that one of you participants will also decide the
winner... I,d rather go to my immediate and bloody
death in the shark tank.

So please inform the readers went and how the winner is decided.

the winner is decided by who makes you think the most ONt..Lete read
again..WILL

if you like poems,please don't hesitate,
the duel is afoot,don't make us wait,
for if you win,feel me now,make me grin,
we wait for a poet true,
rhyme us now, or you be thru,
these words I write, not from spite,
but from my heart,with all my might,
we ask of you,to be true,
give us poems,give of you...

Okay...so a vote...by whom...the po#### the writers, or readers.

you are the judge ont..Judge away..Who won??

No...thanks...I just want it to end...!

ok guys as far as a winner...welll yes there will be one.
how it is going to be decided has yet to be determined....we have gotten
in touch with Van and we are waiting to hear back from him....keep rymin
guys!

Your allllllll winners in my book!!!!!!!